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Published: 2017-04-29 22:50:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 333; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Wow I drew this for no apparent reason? Well I guess I will make this an oc of mine!! YEE! (Maybe ref coming soon??)Well he looks sassy and like a jerk ^^
I wanna request critique on this
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Ok so this is really good I love the colours and the scarf on his/Her neck
I love the background and the originality ! I really love the hair and the colour of the hair I love it I think you need to improve on is that the dark colours on this blend in with the dark coulers on the background I love this piece I hope you make more like this I think this is really well done, I love it great work I hope I see more like this in the future and that's all have a nice day.
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Okayy! Where to start?
Well, I LOVE the way you did the background! As well as the colours you chose for the character! They really suit him, and the design is absolutely amazing!
My advice to you, is to move the eye above the muzzle and keep it further from the head, and closer to the front of the face. I'd suggest practicing with eye placement, use references!
I also would suggest making the teeth 'straighter'. The teeth go straight down from the upper jaw/skull. They do not point forward. Esp. dogs, canines, wolves. etc. need their teeth down so they can bite into prey and flesh. And any animal and humans who needa eat of course have the same deal!
Other than those two very minor 'flaws' this piece is amazing and I love this character! Cant wait to see more art of this guy! <3
Remember: References are your friend! uwu
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Ahh also a great critique!! Yeah, I completely agree with what you have said and am so glad you pointed all these things out.
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im happy to help! If you need me to critique anything for you feel free to note me as well!
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Ahh thank you friend!! ^^Β
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Honestly, I'm not just being nice, this drawing is really atheistically pleasing. The color choice is fantastic and goes well together. The background has a nice abstract feel to it, which goes with the animal in the foreground. Of all the things in this piece, my favorite part is the hair style. I really like the way it came out, I don't know how to describe it. It's just really satisfying. The way you did the eyes was a typical anime style, but you turned it around and really made it YOURS. I can tell how the character is feeling through the eyes. The shading is good, I think maybe a bit more shading around the bandana would make it pop. Maybe a bit more shading underneath the hair, near the ears, etc. Really, I think that is the only room for improvement. I LOVE ITT!!!
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Aah thank you so much! I will certainly take the things you pointed out to mind.
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yay improvement! haha. love ya <3
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<3 ^^ your a great friend!! Cant wait to see more of your arts!!
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dAW thanks! i just got an adopt fromΒ VampiricLepara , they make them for free. I'll be posting some art with her. YOU SHOULD GO GET ONE! I feel like they'd be right up your alley. <3
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AAAH OK!! I WILL GO LOOOKΒ
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forward the link of which one you get if you get one! AHH
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OOOK WHICH ONE DID YOU GET??
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check my favorites! its there!!
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she's beautiful!! i love her so much. if you want to know her background story I came up with read the comments on that page! i named her bailey cause I love that name! <3
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I saw it, and I love it too! I love your bio! Really well made. Cant wait to see you draw her!
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thanks. i'm using a base, cause I want to focus more on the colors. (besides I totally can't draw dogs =~
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I bet you can! But I bet your coloring will be wonderful!
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ahh thanks! i just posted it infact
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why the capital "s", mate?
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why NOT the capital S, mate? ~~
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*cant find critique button so just says here* I actually rly like this it's adorable just lower the angle of the head by like 2 degrees, maybe a little shading in the ears but that's really nitpicky it's AMAZING and I'm not kidding.Β
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Ahh thanks ^^ I don't know why I made the head like that I just wanted to make a smart ass character 
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Eh, I'm trash at shading, too.
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I critiqued, my friend! <3
I promise I wasn't just being nice because you're my friend, i actually mean it.
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Ahh thank you so much!! Im so glad you like it
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Aye thank you!! Helps me out a lot ^^
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