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Published: 2009-12-12 06:49:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 535; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 4
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Description Dancing along the blade of a knife Master Sun and Madame Moon and their babies the Stars fell tumbling downwards towards Mother Earth falling endlessly towards the final oblivion that the children foretold drawing on the walls of their fathers study in crayon Little Prophets came marching to the beat of a bass drum rolling up thru the valley til the break of day that never came because the parents had their say to keep their babies in line as the world hurtled toward them and they were caught complete unawares by sudden impact Kings and Queens and Knights and Rooks and Jokers and Sinners and even the Saints couldnt deal with the monsters their fast and loose living created for them to deal with Gods tears raining endlessly down on a poor little world and the monsters of monsters and the sun and the moon and the stars in the sky came clattering to the floor like so many plates dropped from dowels their spinning interrupted because the man with the microphone is ready to cut the program short because hes in our living rooms looking wholesome for a living and sleeping with the entirety of the production staff like golfers and senators and presidents and patriots adult situations that they say are a sin but they keep doing them anyway the worlds gonna stop and let these people off some day and I can only pray that EARTH DONT STOP FOR ME Ive had too much for too long but I just cant stop and all I can hope is they dont tell me Im the only one they say is crazy…

I'm the only one who's sane.
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Comments: 11

mklem13 [2010-01-10 00:56:43 +0000 UTC]

This is great!! Reminds me of my own mind-ramblings. I love the concept of the mystery our minds can sometimes be. I'd love to write something like this, thanks for the inspiration

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KOBJ In reply to mklem13 [2010-01-10 01:54:43 +0000 UTC]

No problem. My advice: stay up two days straight and don't stop typing til you think you're done. That's about the way this was written.

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mklem13 In reply to KOBJ [2010-01-10 01:58:46 +0000 UTC]

i'll definetly do that! yay caffine...

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KOBJ In reply to mklem13 [2010-01-10 02:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Only reason I was awake at that moment in time: Dethklok's Dethalbum on repeat and random.

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Radical-Minds [2010-01-09 22:13:30 +0000 UTC]

This is really well written. I especially think that the lack of punctuation really brought out the fact that this could all be just random mumblings... I love it!

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KOBJ In reply to Radical-Minds [2010-01-10 00:25:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Chicky-the-Dragon [2010-01-07 00:38:18 +0000 UTC]

This is excellent . It really sums up the piece with your comments explaining what "word salad" is, because I never knew that term existed or what it would mean . So, thanks for the info!

P.S. Surprise aside from learning a new definition xD, it really is horrible that some people have to deal with those symptoms .

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KOBJ In reply to Chicky-the-Dragon [2010-01-07 02:44:43 +0000 UTC]

We studied schizophrenia quite a bit in a recent psychology course I took. If you'd like to watch an interesting movie, 'A Beautiful Mind' starring Russel Crowe is a true story about Nobel Peace Prize winning mathematician Dr. John Nash and his experiences with paranoid schizophrenia. And it's incredibly entertaining, too.

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Chicky-the-Dragon In reply to KOBJ [2010-01-07 12:36:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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ShadowxXxLightning [2010-01-06 19:43:47 +0000 UTC]

Amazing! Along with being a great piece this really sounded like some of the things my best friend, who has schizophrenia, says.
Bravo!~

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KOBJ In reply to ShadowxXxLightning [2010-01-06 21:53:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm sorry to hear about your friend's condition. Schizophrenia is a really rough disease, from what I've studied of it.

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