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Description I don't know why, but I'm really nervous to upload the first page.
Maybe because my best friend didn't read it afore? (Sorry, it's not your fault, it's mine! I just couldn't wait a day longer.)
Ah, I hope there aren't mistakes! Otherwise please tell me! >//<Β°

The time of story in the first chapter is approximately about 160 years before the real manga starts.

And yeah, now... it begins. Hope you like it!
Until then, Luna

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Read from right to left.

Previous page [link]
next page [link]
DΓ΄jinshi-Cover [link]

*Vice-Captain

(Original by Tite Kubo)
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Comments: 88

Kodomo-no-luna In reply to ??? [2011-06-15 11:27:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank youuu! I'm glad, that you were so interested in the rest! :3
I'm always happy to hear that! :3

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RizaxRoy-chan In reply to Kodomo-no-luna [2011-06-15 13:16:48 +0000 UTC]

as always, you're welcome! I'm glad it made you happy

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ElysionBerlitz [2010-10-31 00:23:09 +0000 UTC]

* Suspense * I want to see next! on the first page and I want to see more

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LemGemapple [2010-10-13 18:45:37 +0000 UTC]

Ahh the long await/anticipated first page. Am really looking forward to reading more of it, nice start and of course it can only get better.

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to LemGemapple [2010-10-13 18:53:11 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you! I'm really glad, if you like it! ^//^

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LemGemapple In reply to Kodomo-no-luna [2010-10-13 18:54:54 +0000 UTC]

No problemoooo 8D

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brokensocks [2010-10-13 03:22:37 +0000 UTC]

Mmm I sense juicy angst coming. I await the next installation!

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to brokensocks [2010-10-13 08:43:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! The next page is coming soon! ^^

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Zombie-Wiesel [2010-10-12 09:50:25 +0000 UTC]

Nice Page, Steve :3
No need to be nervous! *hug*

Bin gespannt wie's weitergeht, aber die erste seite sieht schon hΓΌbsch aus ^^

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to Zombie-Wiesel [2010-10-13 08:44:06 +0000 UTC]

DankeschΓΆn! Es freut mich, wenn es dir soweit schon mal gefΓ€llt! ^///^

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Glue-san [2010-10-11 04:18:02 +0000 UTC]

Kuchiki-fukutaicho? This looks interesting...

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to Glue-san [2010-10-11 06:48:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I really hope you'll like it!

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ke23 [2010-10-11 03:24:24 +0000 UTC]

your doing great

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to ke23 [2010-10-11 06:48:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! ^//^

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ke23 In reply to Kodomo-no-luna [2010-10-12 04:52:53 +0000 UTC]

yewr welcome

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Mizashi [2010-10-11 02:53:35 +0000 UTC]

Wooow, this looks so profesional! *o* No need to be nervous, you're doing great! Can't wait to see next page!

Oh, and maybe you should say which direction to read from along with your page links ^^ It's left to right, isn't it?

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to Mizashi [2010-10-11 06:50:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
But somehow I was nervous. But now I'm fine! Many people like it so far, I feel relieved. X//D
Oh yes! I will do it! And actaully its from right to left, like in the original manga. ^.^

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Mizashi In reply to Kodomo-no-luna [2010-10-11 08:56:16 +0000 UTC]

Yay, glad to know so many people love it! Oooh okay, whoops ^^ Original manga style makes it all the more awesome!

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to Mizashi [2010-10-11 13:37:45 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, makes me happy, too! X//D
Yes, I always draw mangas from right to left! XD I like it more and to read mangas the other way just confuses me - I'm just not used to it! X//D

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Mizashi In reply to Kodomo-no-luna [2010-10-11 21:46:57 +0000 UTC]

That's true! But there are also non-Japanese mangas that I read and they read from left to right so I always get confused, lol! X_x

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to Mizashi [2010-10-12 08:03:28 +0000 UTC]

Really! Wow! Like I said, I would be confused as well! XD

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Mizashi In reply to Kodomo-no-luna [2010-10-12 21:38:12 +0000 UTC]

Yep ^__^

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Legion117 [2010-10-11 00:50:34 +0000 UTC]

nice work on the manga so far keep it up..

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to Legion117 [2010-10-11 06:47:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! That means a lot to me.

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CrimsonSong [2010-10-10 22:52:31 +0000 UTC]

Im so happy th ou upload your page, I can't wait what you are gooa net, wonder whats going to happen,

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to CrimsonSong [2010-10-11 06:47:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I will upload the next page soon, you will see it then! ^//^

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CrimsonSong In reply to Kodomo-no-luna [2010-10-12 21:27:07 +0000 UTC]

thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to CrimsonSong [2010-10-13 08:06:05 +0000 UTC]

X//D Alright! Now need to thank me! ;3

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Jazzabel101 [2010-10-10 21:40:51 +0000 UTC]

Aaahhh!!! Can't wait 4 more!!!!

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to Jazzabel101 [2010-10-11 06:46:18 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you very much! That makes me so happy!

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sugarblueberry [2010-10-10 21:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Interesting start

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to sugarblueberry [2010-10-10 21:13:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! ://3

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sugarblueberry In reply to Kodomo-no-luna [2010-10-10 21:30:49 +0000 UTC]

No prob

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Hixateez [2010-10-10 09:58:50 +0000 UTC]

It seems like a very... Captiving beginning!

"I had never imagined, it would come so soon."
I think you need a comma there. And maybe "Again there was war" could be written "There was a war again" or "There was war again", but I don't think the line you wrote is grammatically wrong, either.
(Lol, English isn't even my native language...)

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to Hixateez [2010-10-10 10:18:34 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you so much! :3
Alright, I will follow your suggestions! Like I said, no one read it before so I'm happy to have now someone who told me what I can change! ;3

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Hixateez In reply to Kodomo-no-luna [2010-10-11 08:00:39 +0000 UTC]


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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to Kodomo-no-luna [2010-10-10 10:22:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh, but there is already a comma after 'imagined' - do you mean somewhere else?

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darkangelatem [2010-10-10 03:51:30 +0000 UTC]

*flails about* page one yay!! OwO

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to darkangelatem [2010-10-10 09:51:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, now it begins! Hope you like it! >//w//<

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darkangelatem In reply to Kodomo-no-luna [2010-10-13 13:58:05 +0000 UTC]

yaaaaaaaaay I do, very much so~!

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KirasDarkLight [2010-10-10 03:15:28 +0000 UTC]

Oooooo, this looks good.

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to KirasDarkLight [2010-10-10 09:51:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! :3

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KirasDarkLight In reply to Kodomo-no-luna [2010-10-12 02:03:48 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome, I can't wait to see how this turns out.

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RukiaKuchiki926 [2010-10-10 03:07:29 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait can't wait can't wait!!

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to RukiaKuchiki926 [2010-10-10 09:51:42 +0000 UTC]

I will do my best to release a new page soon! X//D

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GlacyRoserade [2010-10-09 20:50:33 +0000 UTC]

looks great! Can't wait for the next page

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to GlacyRoserade [2010-10-09 21:59:52 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you very much! :3

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Ronaldbos [2010-10-09 19:43:09 +0000 UTC]

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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to Ronaldbos [2010-10-09 20:34:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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AdinaVo [2010-10-09 19:06:41 +0000 UTC]

This is really awesome
Can't wait for the next page

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