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ElysionBerlitz [2010-10-31 00:23:09 +0000 UTC]
* Suspense * I want to see next! on the first page and I want to see more
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LemGemapple [2010-10-13 18:45:37 +0000 UTC]
Ahh the long await/anticipated first page. Am really looking forward to reading more of it, nice start and of course it can only get better.
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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to LemGemapple [2010-10-13 18:53:11 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thank you! I'm really glad, if you like it! ^//^
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brokensocks [2010-10-13 03:22:37 +0000 UTC]
Mmm I sense juicy angst coming. I await the next installation!
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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to brokensocks [2010-10-13 08:43:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! The next page is coming soon! ^^
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Zombie-Wiesel [2010-10-12 09:50:25 +0000 UTC]
Nice Page, Steve :3
No need to be nervous! *hug*
Bin gespannt wie's weitergeht, aber die erste seite sieht schon hΓΌbsch aus ^^
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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to Zombie-Wiesel [2010-10-13 08:44:06 +0000 UTC]
DankeschΓΆn! Es freut mich, wenn es dir soweit schon mal gefΓ€llt! ^///^
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Glue-san [2010-10-11 04:18:02 +0000 UTC]
Kuchiki-fukutaicho? This looks interesting...
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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to Glue-san [2010-10-11 06:48:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I really hope you'll like it!
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ke23 [2010-10-11 03:24:24 +0000 UTC]
your doing great
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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to ke23 [2010-10-11 06:48:02 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! ^//^
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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to Mizashi [2010-10-11 13:37:45 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, makes me happy, too! X//D
Yes, I always draw mangas from right to left! XD I like it more and to read mangas the other way just confuses me - I'm just not used to it! X//D
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Mizashi In reply to Kodomo-no-luna [2010-10-11 21:46:57 +0000 UTC]
That's true! But there are also non-Japanese mangas that I read and they read from left to right so I always get confused, lol! X_x
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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to Mizashi [2010-10-12 08:03:28 +0000 UTC]
Really! Wow! Like I said, I would be confused as well! XD
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Legion117 [2010-10-11 00:50:34 +0000 UTC]
nice work on the manga so far keep it up..
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CrimsonSong [2010-10-10 22:52:31 +0000 UTC]
Im so happy th ou upload your page, I can't wait what you are gooa net, wonder whats going to happen,
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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to CrimsonSong [2010-10-11 06:47:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I will upload the next page soon, you will see it then! ^//^
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Jazzabel101 [2010-10-10 21:40:51 +0000 UTC]
Aaahhh!!! Can't wait 4 more!!!!
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Hixateez [2010-10-10 09:58:50 +0000 UTC]
It seems like a very... Captiving beginning!
"I had never imagined, it would come so soon."
I think you need a comma there. And maybe "Again there was war" could be written "There was a war again" or "There was war again", but I don't think the line you wrote is grammatically wrong, either.
(Lol, English isn't even my native language...)
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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to Hixateez [2010-10-10 10:18:34 +0000 UTC]
Aw, thank you so much! :3
Alright, I will follow your suggestions! Like I said, no one read it before so I'm happy to have now someone who told me what I can change! ;3
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Kodomo-no-luna In reply to Kodomo-no-luna [2010-10-10 10:22:03 +0000 UTC]
Oh, but there is already a comma after 'imagined' - do you mean somewhere else?
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darkangelatem [2010-10-10 03:51:30 +0000 UTC]
*flails about* page one yay!! OwO
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KirasDarkLight [2010-10-10 03:15:28 +0000 UTC]
Oooooo, this looks good.
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KirasDarkLight In reply to Kodomo-no-luna [2010-10-12 02:03:48 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome, I can't wait to see how this turns out.
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RukiaKuchiki926 [2010-10-10 03:07:29 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait can't wait can't wait!!
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GlacyRoserade [2010-10-09 20:50:33 +0000 UTC]
looks great! Can't wait for the next page
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