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Description And here's the conclusion of Centauri's team up with :iconjavipascal213:'s mysterious Ghost! Titus is defeated, but only just! He's a great character to draw and I wanted to treat him with a bit of respect, even if he was destined to lose this one! It took a really nasty trick from Ghost and Centauri turning the dials up to eleven and even then they only knocked him out. I suspect he will return!

As for the mysterious Ghost - I have no idea whether this plotline will be developed or not - he's a pretty scary figure and something of an odd fit for a public hero team like Thunder Force - he has a lot of power and uses it pretty ruthlessly, which has shocked Centauri here, even though she wouldn't react until the bad guy was down (she's a professional!) Is Ghost an anti-hero with a heart or is there something more sinister going on? I have no idea! If the story doesn't go anywhere, then it's just Centauri imagining things! But she's probably high on whatever alien painkillers that suit is pumping into her, so we'll put it down to that!

This was the March challenge for the project - a little late, as usual! I also exceeded the page limit by one, so hopefully we'll stop breaking rules for this month's challenge...

Real fun to play with :iconjavipascual:'s characters anyway! Read the whole sequence from the start!

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*NOTE FOR THE CONTINUITY CONSCIOUS! These scenes take place before 's Heroes United pages - www.deviantart.com/journal/HER… - Centauri hasn't gone to the moon yet!
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Kostmeyer In reply to ??? [2014-04-14 11:11:32 +0000 UTC]

Of course! He's Titus! This story has to be set before 's recent pages so Titus is back and smashing up the rest of the Thunder Force Beta Team before too long!

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Markus-MkIII [2014-04-12 22:27:54 +0000 UTC]

Honestly, this is the best stuff in DU recently. Great writing and art, helluva fight but also important topics were brought up. What is the line a hero can and cannot cross when apprehending a criminal? Ghost was very ruthless but highly efficient. Centauri's feelings are justified and should this ever have any sort of continuation, I'll sure be looking forward to it.

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Kostmeyer In reply to Markus-MkIII [2014-04-13 17:43:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot! It was a fun sequence to do and great to work with - as for Centauri, I'm still kind of working out who she is as I go along, but I'm enjoying writing and drawing her more and more at the moment. Hopefully I'll be able to get a bit more done for the current challenge before the end of the month, and we'll see what she does about Ghost's actions...

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Markus-MkIII In reply to Kostmeyer [2014-04-14 21:04:52 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. At least I have enjoyed Centauri so far so can't say you wouldn't be doing good work. And yes, what she'll do next should be interesting, considering there's the global gibberish-thing.

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thedude255 [2014-04-12 12:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Oof! Talk about throwing yourself against a brick wall! I bet the idea sounded better in Centauri's head. Though defeated, Titus comes out quite strong in this in a loose sense. Though he didn't get much offensive in, it took two big supes to take him down, and even then it was not without consequence. It also shows Centauri's commitment to the fight though, with a true heroes mentality if not completely reckless. I think it shows she is ready to make the biggest call though if she is willing to throw herself at the enemy like that in a do or die kind of scenario. A very nice entry and major credit to ye both!

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Kostmeyer In reply to thedude255 [2014-04-12 12:46:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot! It was a fun sequence to do and yes, maybe Centauri will think twice about pulling that trick again... or maybe it would work better against anyone except Titus!

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javipascual213 [2014-04-11 21:14:31 +0000 UTC]

Wow! simply spectacular.
I see that you and I are on the same wavelength,
Hmmm... Ghost seems mysterious... I wonder that Susan Smith (Smasher) and the super-human division of the FBI thinks about this

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Kostmeyer In reply to javipascual213 [2014-04-11 21:25:59 +0000 UTC]

Yay! I'm really pleased you like this. Ghost is a great character - so it's good to know that you have plans to develop the mystery! I take it that Agent 42X must have researched him a bit before they offered him a place on a Thunder Force team - or did they just decide it was safest to put him somewhere they could keep an eye on him? Looking forward to finding out! Thanks for the s

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Branded-Curse [2014-04-11 17:02:36 +0000 UTC]

Ouch! Centauri looks like something out of a Street Fighter II Game Over screen!
I've seen car crashes that looked prettier than that

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Kostmeyer In reply to Branded-Curse [2014-04-11 17:07:35 +0000 UTC]

She looks rough, but you should see the other guy! Thanks for the

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Branded-Curse In reply to Kostmeyer [2014-04-11 17:23:34 +0000 UTC]

I did see the other guy!

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Kostmeyer In reply to Branded-Curse [2014-04-11 17:27:07 +0000 UTC]

She's awake, he's not - technically a victory for Team Centauri! Of course the real reason I made this impact so violent was that I really wanted to make Titus look good. He might have been beaten, but he's the DU Hulk! He doesn't go down easily

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Branded-Curse In reply to Kostmeyer [2014-04-11 17:51:06 +0000 UTC]

The best way to get your characters over usually is to get other people's characters over first

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Kostmeyer In reply to Branded-Curse [2014-04-11 17:58:37 +0000 UTC]

I'm not entirely sure I know what you're getting at!

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Branded-Curse In reply to Kostmeyer [2014-04-11 18:24:56 +0000 UTC]

I ment what you do here ( and usually always do ) is the right way to go
You always portray other characters well and with respect, which works for you and your characters' popularity, too.

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Kostmeyer In reply to Branded-Curse [2014-04-11 18:27:14 +0000 UTC]

I usually only draw characters I like - which makes it easy

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Branded-Curse In reply to Kostmeyer [2014-04-11 18:31:45 +0000 UTC]

And why would you do anything different

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Gaston25 [2014-04-11 16:21:16 +0000 UTC]

Whoa! Awesome page, and the turmoil between "heroes" is a great subplot.

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Kostmeyer In reply to Gaston25 [2014-04-11 16:32:51 +0000 UTC]

Yeah - I don't know whether anything will come of this to be honest - it's possible they'll never meet again! But a good bit of soap opera drama never hurts in a comic!

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HelZART [2014-04-11 13:49:08 +0000 UTC]

That was a gripping read! I have to day I'm just getting the Martian manhunter vibes from ghost and talk about a kamikaze attack! That's some suit, think ill have to get one! 

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Kostmeyer In reply to HelZART [2014-04-11 15:20:00 +0000 UTC]

You have to pass some kind of exam I think - the Centauri League don't just give them away! As for Ghost - I haven't read much DC stuff in a while but the Martian Manhunter I remember didn't have much of a sense of humour - Ghost seems a bit arrogant at times too - but he definitely shares the Manhunter's mysterious and powerful vibe!

Thanks for the kind words - much appreciated!

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HelZART In reply to Kostmeyer [2014-04-11 18:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Just a part from the new JLA where he encounters despero n the manhunter does some mind fuck with him that he states something along the lines of the justice league wouldn't condone such actions but screw I'll do it anyway xD 

i best get revising.. Come in handy if a Titus comes to town keep,it up! 

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Kostmeyer In reply to HelZART [2014-04-11 18:59:44 +0000 UTC]

That sounds pretty similar to Ghost - I agree! Good luck passing that Centauri test! Definitely more pages from me to come

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insane-ukulele [2014-04-11 11:50:55 +0000 UTC]

And a characterizations march on, each in different directions! I'm intrigued to see how things will develop around both Ghost and Centauri!
But regarding this month's it will probably be hilarious. Or just as Ghost is terrifying. Or both at once...

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Kostmeyer In reply to insane-ukulele [2014-04-11 15:21:25 +0000 UTC]

I hope does something this month - we shall see! I just uploaded the first of my Centauri pages - not planning anything huge but we'll see where the story takes me

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RODCOM1000 [2014-04-11 06:09:59 +0000 UTC]

Great pages, Great team-up. Very nice work from both of you

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Kostmeyer In reply to RODCOM1000 [2014-04-11 07:41:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot! (And thanks for the s too!) Much appreciated!

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Quel2many [2014-04-11 03:21:22 +0000 UTC]

well you truly made me interested into ghost and his story....and Centauri sure developing into a very solid character ,this was a perfect crossover,....wonder if she will be sit out a few challenges with those injuries

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Kostmeyer In reply to Quel2many [2014-04-11 07:42:46 +0000 UTC]

Already drawing the next one! Heroes don't sit out emergencies! (Although they probably should!) Thanks for the !

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Bracey100 [2014-04-11 01:31:26 +0000 UTC]

Ghost is a deliberately blank slate. We only what his owner has shown us, that he is powerful and calculatingly ruthless. So why did 42X add him to Thunderforce? Do they know something about this mystery man we dont? And why was he on the station, as youve said he's not on the Beta team. The mystery of Ghost only deepens with each appearance. I hope that you two (and others) will follow up on these story threads.

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Kostmeyer In reply to Bracey100 [2014-04-11 01:39:19 +0000 UTC]

That's it exactly! I'm not sure whether I'll be able to move that story on much more, I guess it depends whether the storylines throw Ghost and Centauri back together again! Plus I don't think Javi has seen this last page yet, but who knows? I think there's definitely a story here!

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Bracey100 In reply to Kostmeyer [2014-04-11 01:42:36 +0000 UTC]

I sure hope so, since he kinda opened things up for it. But in the end You'll have to decide if Centauri is gonna report this or not and that will decide what happens later. Im keep to see more either way. Centauri is a great character.

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Kostmeyer In reply to Bracey100 [2014-04-11 01:45:42 +0000 UTC]

Centauri is going to report it at the start of the next challenge (which is actually the current challenge as I'm a week and a half behind!)

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Bracey100 In reply to Kostmeyer [2014-04-11 01:48:12 +0000 UTC]

Heh, gonna be hard to report with this challenge!

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Kostmeyer In reply to Bracey100 [2014-04-11 01:52:41 +0000 UTC]

Exactly!

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tortox [2014-04-11 00:57:44 +0000 UTC]

Very enjoyable read!
Your pages completed themselves perfectly.

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Kostmeyer In reply to tortox [2014-04-11 01:02:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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mja42x [2014-04-11 00:47:11 +0000 UTC]

As seen in many different DU comics now, Titus is quite hard to take down. And Ghost is quite a mysterious character, isn't he? Great set of pages.

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Kostmeyer In reply to mja42x [2014-04-11 00:56:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot. I have no idea whether Centauri's suspicions about Ghost will lead to anything - she might be completely wrong about him! Time and will tell!

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Zorzathir [2014-04-11 00:41:37 +0000 UTC]

Nice work!

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Kostmeyer In reply to Zorzathir [2014-04-11 00:42:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Zorzathir In reply to Kostmeyer [2014-04-11 00:46:41 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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bogmonster [2014-04-11 00:34:32 +0000 UTC]

this was a great sequence!  love love love the characterization of ghost.  he is a jerk but he did help get the job done.  a nice balance between creepy, humorous, heroic and edgy.  love it!

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Kostmeyer In reply to bogmonster [2014-04-11 00:38:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for the kind words and the - much appreciated! Ghost was really hard to write actually - he's so mysterious that aside from his snarky sense of humour we don't really know anything about him - which made it very difficult to build a story around him. In the end I figured that Centauri's reactions to him would be more important (and easier to write) than what he actually does - she may have got him completely wrong (in fact she probably has!) but that will create a nice bit of drama! Hopefully this has raised Centauri's profile in the DU a bit more anyway!

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ClockwerkSoul [2014-04-11 00:33:03 +0000 UTC]

Woah, pretty intense there. At least this story is done.

Definitely paints a picture for both Centauri and Ghost.

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Kostmeyer In reply to ClockwerkSoul [2014-04-11 00:41:43 +0000 UTC]

Intense is the word! But I hate it when people finish off the bad guy dismissively easily - where's the drama in that? It's also quite disrespectful to the creator of that character if you write your own hero easily clobbering their carefully constructed villain! Titus is a major heavy hitter - he took on (almost) the whole Beta team after all - so I figured these two needed to go all out to bring him down. And Centauri has just shown that she'll risk injury to do the right thing - my work is done!

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Bracey100 In reply to Kostmeyer [2014-04-11 01:39:49 +0000 UTC]

A very excellent point and a valid concern. Creators put their hearts into these heroes/villains so they should be treated in the vein they were created for. Titus is basically the Hulk and you should treat him with all the respect you'd treat the Hulk. But it will also be driven by circumstance. Imagine Great Man vs the Blue Smug, probably not a good match for Smug lol. But still its not impossible if the author is clever with the material. For instance I had my own Mr Happy get completely owned by the mighty wizard Relic. It made perfect sense in the context of Mr Happy facing a powerful being that he knew nothing about at the time. Hopefully he will do a little better next time.

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Kostmeyer In reply to Bracey100 [2014-04-11 01:51:57 +0000 UTC]

Totally agree again! This is comics so you can do whatever you like, but you have to respect the continuity of the thing or it all falls apart (and for that matter, it's just polite to be nice to other people's characters!) What I like about your Mr Happy stuff (and I will get around to commenting eventually, honest!) is that he's a character with a sense of humour but he operates in the established DU world. Too often people have humourous characters who they enter in the DU and then tell jokey stories which demean the characters around them. You got the balance right - the character is funny but the world is the same one that has established.

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Bracey100 In reply to Kostmeyer [2014-04-11 03:05:59 +0000 UTC]

Exactly, this is Maurizio's sandbox. Im just playing in it. Plus Im a huge continuity freak, lack of continuity drove me away from the Big 2 comic companies years ago. Those comics here that respect what he has established I follow, those that dont I tend to ignore. In my own personal comics its going to be much the same originally Mr Happy was going to be a parody/humor comic but once I decided to make his world realistic humor became his way of dealing and not the landscape of the world itself. Its an interesting thing to explore and Im influenced by the Spiderman comics I grew up with.

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Kostmeyer In reply to Bracey100 [2014-04-11 17:14:21 +0000 UTC]

I got annoyed with the continuity crimes in Marvel a while back, but as soon as the big name creative talents get bored and move on, things tend to settle back to where they were before! DU seems to work pretty well considering how many people are involved. I tend to just ignore the bits I don't like and pretend they aren't there!

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