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Published: 2019-09-08 23:12:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 6363; Favourites: 96; Downloads: 40
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Description My entry for 's new OC Tournament - Viper's Colosseum!Β 

EDITED: Story altered a little and the missing height, weight and age details added!

I've created a new character for this (although I've reused an old name for her!) This is Paragon. The idea behind her character is that this is a hero from our modern celebrity worshipping age. When she discovered her powers she saw it both as a chance to do good but also a chance to live out her dreams. No secret identity here - record deals, red carpets, product endorsements - Paragon lived an believed her own hype.

Until, that is, she learned that her publicists were arranging all of her battles, and making sure that she won. The woman who never doubted her talent and power now has to question - how much of it was real? Was she ever really a hero? One thing she IS certain of - the public must never know the truth, or her media empire, fortune and celebrity lifestyle will come crashing down around her.

So now she's heading for the fighting tournament at Viper's Colosseum - to face the toughest fighters and prove to the world and to herself that Paragon is a true hero. We shall see what happens next!
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marcoasalazarm [2021-11-28 09:55:57 +0000 UTC]

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Kostmeyer In reply to marcoasalazarm [2022-01-09 16:02:30 +0000 UTC]

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marcoasalazarm In reply to Kostmeyer [2022-01-09 21:29:32 +0000 UTC]

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Kostmeyer In reply to marcoasalazarm [2022-01-09 21:33:47 +0000 UTC]

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Kostmeyer In reply to ArchivistOmega [2020-07-21 13:32:39 +0000 UTC]

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ArchivistOmega In reply to Kostmeyer [2020-07-21 16:14:28 +0000 UTC]

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KnightSlayer115 [2019-09-10 04:52:05 +0000 UTC]

The Former Celeb meets the Reaper... now im curious and interested in battle

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Kostmeyer In reply to KnightSlayer115 [2019-09-10 17:12:17 +0000 UTC]

The more I think about it, the more I think it would be fun to keep her at the height of her celebrity during the tournament - so SHE's learned that her publicists have been faking her fights, but the media (and the other fighters) still haven't found out yet. I quite like the idea that - against her publicists advice she's signed up to the Colosseum to prove herself, but she still wants the stardom and the fame so she basically covers up the lies. This way she still gets to behave like a bratty Miley Cyrus type in the Colosseum, rather than being all miserable and depressed!

Thanks for the - it should be very interesting when these two meet!

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kenfusion45 [2019-09-10 00:31:15 +0000 UTC]

Dupped by slimy publicists! Β Social media giveth and social media taketh away

hope she does well in the tournament

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Kostmeyer In reply to kenfusion45 [2019-09-10 17:16:27 +0000 UTC]

Me too! Thanks for the kind words and the - much appreciated!

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Lecter-the-Mu [2019-09-09 16:35:42 +0000 UTC]

She'll be an intriguing character to follow during the tournament

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Kostmeyer In reply to Lecter-the-Mu [2019-09-09 18:05:49 +0000 UTC]

Hope so! A bit different to Vigil and Centauri anyway

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Branded-Curse [2019-09-09 15:26:23 +0000 UTC]

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Kostmeyer In reply to Branded-Curse [2019-09-09 17:56:19 +0000 UTC]

Is that a good thing or a bad thing?

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Branded-Curse In reply to Kostmeyer [2019-09-09 19:36:33 +0000 UTC]

Good thing, definitely! ( though you might wanna add Age/Height/Weight, at first I thought it was a WIP )


I like her look and design a lot. Also like the Johnny Cage nod. Nice one.

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Kostmeyer In reply to Branded-Curse [2019-09-10 17:15:50 +0000 UTC]

Whoops - missed the age/height/weight bit! I will update ASAP! I need to go back to it anyway, because I've changed my mind slightly about her backstory (I don't want the public to know she's a fake yet, basically!)

What's the Johnny Cage nod? I haven't followed Mortal Kombat for aΒ long time, so it was probably a complete coincidence!

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Branded-Curse In reply to Kostmeyer [2019-09-10 17:26:27 +0000 UTC]

You do that


The, unintentional then, nod is, that this is basically a lot like Johnny Cage's story ( at least in the movie ).

He was accused of not being a real fighter, so he entered the tournament to prove to his haters and the media that he was.

In the movie he was tricked to join by Shang Tsung, not sure what the original story in the game was.

Been too long.

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Kostmeyer In reply to Branded-Curse [2019-09-10 17:46:38 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I see! I didn't remember that - but in any case I'm thinking of editing Paragon's backstory a bit - in that she's found out that her fights were faked (which motivates her to prove herself in the Colosseum) but the media DON'T know that yet - that way I can play around with the idea of her still being a mega star and be a bit of a diva during the story, rather than being all self doubting and miserable! I think the stories will be a bit more fun and a bit less gloomy that way.Β  Anyway - updated bio to post soon...

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Branded-Curse In reply to Kostmeyer [2019-09-10 18:07:17 +0000 UTC]

Works for me. The self-loathing Anime protagonist doesn't sound like your cup of tea, anyway

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Kostmeyer In reply to Branded-Curse [2019-09-10 18:37:23 +0000 UTC]

LOL - Very true!

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Gaston25 [2019-09-09 02:30:12 +0000 UTC]

A fighting league? How have I never heard of this?! I just might create someone for this too.


Oh, and Paragon looks great! She seems like she'd be a tough opponent.

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Kostmeyer In reply to Gaston25 [2019-09-09 05:53:01 +0000 UTC]

It would be great if you could take part! BC is still putting it together so I think you have plenty of time. Thanks for the kind words and the Β for the new character!

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ClockwerkSoul [2019-09-09 00:09:02 +0000 UTC]

Pretty cool character. Looking forward to what she brings to the field, so to speak.

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Kostmeyer In reply to ClockwerkSoul [2019-09-09 06:15:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm not entirely sure as she's a new character created just for this, but we shall see! Thanks for the kind words - I'm really looking forward to this tournament

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bogmonster [2019-09-09 00:06:36 +0000 UTC]

this should be fun!Β  she has a very interesting back story.Β  looking forward to where all of this takes us!

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Kostmeyer In reply to bogmonster [2019-09-09 06:11:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I wanted a character who had a good reason for being in the tournament, and it took me a while to come up with a story I liked! I quite like the idea of the hero as a sort of Miley Cyrus type celebrity - should give me a chance to do something different. (Also - shiny supergirl character! Yay!) I should be able to do some sort of intro comic so people know how to write her - are you going to do an intro for Vicky?

Thanks for the too!

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bogmonster In reply to Kostmeyer [2019-09-09 09:56:19 +0000 UTC]

very cool.Β  looking forward to your intro pages (will she be bratty like Miley Cyrus?Β  guess i'll just wait and see).Β  I am working on some intro pages for Vicky which ties into things I already had in motion.Β  I hope it will appear to be a natural transition into Viper's.

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Kostmeyer In reply to bogmonster [2019-09-09 18:08:57 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I think she'll be a bit of a brat! Reconsidering the origin slightly - in that it might be more fun if the media haven't outedΒ her as a fake yet and she's still covering it up (although discovering the deception herself has led to her wanting to prove herself on the island) It would let me play around with the hero as megastar idea a bit more. Really looking forward to seeing your intro

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Captain-Paulo [2019-09-08 23:43:59 +0000 UTC]

She is perfect!

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Kostmeyer In reply to Captain-Paulo [2019-09-09 05:58:37 +0000 UTC]

So she believed! Thanks for the - much appreciated!

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LordAmon12 [2019-09-08 23:19:47 +0000 UTC]

She looks great!!

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Kostmeyer In reply to LordAmon12 [2019-09-09 05:59:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm quite pleased with the design. Thanks for the too! Much appreciated!

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