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krazedkazoo — The devil is indeed a woman [NSFW]

Published: 2006-01-11 01:10:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 424; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 37
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Description All during the second semester of Creative Writing we had to create a mythological God or Goddess, and write tons of stuff about them.

This is Ellenia (El-enn-nee-uh), the devil. Basically, she was created by God to be his lover and companion. God curses her when she defies him and purposely gives humans free will. Bam, that's how the devil was born. Now, contrary to popular belief, the devil (in my story, anyway) isn't a mean, decietful creature that is constantly luring you into hell to burn for all eternity. She's simply the thing that urges you to do what you want... what you feel like doing. Doesn't matter if it's the wrong thing, Ellenia believes that if you want that beautiful woman, go take her, even if that means you'd be commiting adultery.

See what I'm trying to say?
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Comments: 30

Npman5 [2006-04-08 03:43:11 +0000 UTC]

Nice. the problem with the arms is that there are no hands, they just sorta taper off behind her head. post the myth

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darktiger [2006-03-06 20:29:05 +0000 UTC]

okay now the devil definatly needs to be a woman.. i'm going there for sure >.>

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Nekochan-Lover [2006-02-06 23:16:46 +0000 UTC]

o__o **takes her advice and does it to Ellenia herself** XDD Very interesting theory. I like it! That would be an interesting story idea for a web-manga. I really like her tail.

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krazedkazoo In reply to Nekochan-Lover [2006-02-10 01:28:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Burnangel [2006-01-13 21:33:58 +0000 UTC]

I'm in love XD

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krazedkazoo In reply to Burnangel [2006-01-14 00:51:57 +0000 UTC]

Hohoho!!

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mega-matt [2006-01-12 22:24:20 +0000 UTC]

Thats cool I wish we had an assignment like that when I was in shcool.

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badkhemmie [2006-01-12 15:58:18 +0000 UTC]

I like the idea! She looks great, good character in that one

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krazedkazoo In reply to badkhemmie [2006-01-14 00:52:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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Loralit [2006-01-11 20:50:22 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I see XD! Might I add how well your good with devil wings.

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krazedkazoo In reply to Loralit [2006-01-14 00:53:28 +0000 UTC]

Grassy.

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saitoufly [2006-01-11 09:31:27 +0000 UTC]

Hah, her hair reminds me of my very old character Suni.. XD

Anyway, you should've posted the entire myth you came up with along, it would've been fun to read
I always dig mythological tales! :woot:

Damn right she defies god and gives humans free will! If it wasn't for her, we'd still be working as slaves in God's Chocolate Quarries!

Well, apart from the rather thing/short arms, and the idea of her needing bigger boobs because of her nature... Yayness for nudity!

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krazedkazoo In reply to saitoufly [2006-01-14 00:55:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I always thought those arms looked funny, I could never figure out what i was doing wrong, though.... HMMM... Maybe I'll go back and fix her later. And true, but I'm just not a boob artist, therefore her lack of spectacular bouncable boobies.

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saitoufly In reply to krazedkazoo [2006-01-14 09:04:39 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I'm not much of a boob artist myself... ><;;

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relend [2006-01-11 05:09:35 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting. I have always been interested in mythology, I wish that my teacher would give us a project like that. You should post your writting on DA. I would read it.

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krazedkazoo In reply to relend [2006-01-14 00:56:15 +0000 UTC]

I've never posted writing on DA before. Hmm..

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relend In reply to krazedkazoo [2006-01-14 01:38:26 +0000 UTC]

Hay, why not?

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krazedkazoo In reply to relend [2006-01-16 04:16:22 +0000 UTC]

I dunno... I like my writing, but no one else does. *shrugs*

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relend In reply to krazedkazoo [2006-01-16 07:22:00 +0000 UTC]

You never know untill you submit it. Plus I like mythological writting, so I bet that I will like it! :]

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lunaticenigma [2006-01-11 03:59:46 +0000 UTC]

Good concept and the like, but her arms are too skinny... The rest of her is fine, maybe have her breasts a bit bigger? I mean if this is the Devil you'd want her to be erotic and hard to turn-down, right? Well, that would be my take on it. .
Anyhow, yes, good job!

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krazedkazoo In reply to lunaticenigma [2006-01-14 00:57:55 +0000 UTC]

Every guy I talk to says, "Big boobs scare me, I don't know what to do with them."

I think maybe that's because they're tryin' not to make me feel bad, cuz everyone else is tellin' me "Yay" to the boob enlargement.

Thanks much!

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evil-ed316 [2006-01-11 03:28:46 +0000 UTC]

but will you put her in a blue dress?

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krazedkazoo In reply to evil-ed316 [2006-01-14 00:58:08 +0000 UTC]

Heavens no.

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evil-ed316 In reply to krazedkazoo [2006-01-14 02:58:14 +0000 UTC]

damn...wate Heaven? whats Heaven got to do with this?

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krazedkazoo In reply to evil-ed316 [2006-01-16 04:16:49 +0000 UTC]

I DUNNO. AMEN.

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NekoChanPurr [2006-01-11 02:39:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow, great job. Your really creative! *^^*

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krazedkazoo In reply to NekoChanPurr [2006-01-14 00:58:23 +0000 UTC]

I thank thee.

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Psycho333 [2006-01-11 01:21:58 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm like that *s her*

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krazedkazoo In reply to Psycho333 [2006-01-14 00:59:16 +0000 UTC]

Gracious.

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Psycho333 In reply to krazedkazoo [2006-01-14 03:20:32 +0000 UTC]

Well I just interpited what she said so

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