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Krevlorne — Steampunk Girl Wip 001
Published: 2008-08-16 17:24:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 163; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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This is an original spontaneous work. I've put a few hours in it so far and redrew it once. Before the next redraw I thought I'd throw it up and let some of you critique it. So please throw up your comments, good, bad, indifferent. Just type something constructive please. I'd like to follow through with this one too completion.So far, done in pencil on copier paper. (Cheap paper.)
Thank you for taking a look and commenting.
Edit: Note, this still looks very amateur to me. What I'm trying to find is what will make it more professional looking. Help please.
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I have to agree with Volpe...the neck and arms are areas for improvement. Nice start though. Can't wait to see this finished.
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Well...I'm sure you're going to like, punch me in the face, but uh...here goes my critique?
Her wrists are a bit to small (maybe just the arm?) as is her waist. Her neck is either too long, or just positioned weird? Like, it should come down from around her ear? Idk
Those legs are very toned, love it :3 (but maybe make the bottom half of (our) left one thicker?)
As to making it look professional, maybe more perspective for a bg. like instead of just drawing the front part of the cog (?), draw the whole thing with some inner workings. Granted, it'd probably be easier if you could resize the canvas to have more space, lulz
Sorry, but it is looking promising <3
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THANK YOU! That's what I'm talking about!
Yea, couldn't wait on someone to reply so already made allot of those changes... and guess what? I'm doing it digitally! Can you believe that? Yea me nether. But I'm giving it a go.
I'll plop up another wip, after I get back from the beach tomorrow. Didn't go today the weather looked to bad. Not to promising tomorrow or the whole week for that matter with the soon to be hurricane.
C-ya, and thanks, I agree, just needed someone else's perspective.
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Thanks. Now, what do you think, really!
Yea, can't stay away for too long. I did that once already, like, what, 18 years or something. Got to keep picking up the pencil. There are way to many ideas floating around in my head. (They are floating because there is so much space!)
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yea. I wanna draw so bad! I can't though, because i"m in the middle of alot of things right now. X.x
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Well, I'm doing it! Yay me! I've about got the this one on the ropes. I may have a day on it if I can keep putting off the other things I need to do!
I started doing it digital, but backing out of it and going back to pencil. Just faster for me, not that I won't pick it back up and finish it in digital also. Perhaps.
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ya, pencil is much faster!! ^_^ easier too!!
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Yep it is. You should see the finished one. Well, at least the shaded one anyway.
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