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Published: 2016-02-12 04:39:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1457; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Description I know I've posted Kei's beta design way back when on my now-fanart account, but I didn't find Katou's beta design until recently. I even found little scrap doodles of their subsequent designs over the years, and I felt a little nostalgic going back over them xD; Hence this timeline progression thing

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Early 2001 - I had just watched a few episodes of Beyblade, and I didn't know the whole story. But suddenly me and my siblings were talking about OCs – the usual “I think I'd be with Team A/Team B if I were in the Beyblade-verse”. Out pop Kae (I used the actual spelling of my name) Hiwatari, Kai's twin sister, and Tadashi Hiyomura (I kid you not, that's the name scribbled on the paper).

Kei: …I have nothing against the hair. The outfit is... so-so, but if I were on the Russian team, WHAT am I doing not hiding being a girl? The team name is 'Demolition BOYS', you know. 
Katou: I would have had the same name as the big bro from the BH6 movie – are you kidding me? The red-and-black shirt is actually kinda cool, though.

Late 2001 – Definitely an 'experimenting with colors' phase, although I can safely say the twins' color palettes were starting to come together, if only just. I forgot Katou's hair was spiky at the top xD;

Kei: Oh wow that color palette is bright, though it'd be interesting to try turtleneck tops again. I still don't understand what was up with my hair.
Katou: ...a dress shirt. A denim dress shirt, from the notes. Although I like the pants and sneakers... give me hoodies or vests any day.

2002 – Back to the dark color palettes! By this time, I knew for sure that Kei preferred boots for footwear; it was the first time I drew her wearing a choker. I think this was the same year I started designing characters for my comic 'Unmei no Kokoro', and... Katou wound up being the would-be antagonist. Funnily enough, his comic-self uses Darkness, so his Beyblade-self would have had a bit beast with the darkness element, like Zeus. Meanwhile, comic! Kei would have had light-based powers, and Beyblade-verse Kei would have had a light-based bit beast.

Katou: Me with darkness-based powers... why wasn't I told about this earlier? Those pants look kinda like Kai's, just less baggy. But at least I'm in a hoodie this time.
Kei: Why do I feel like this version of us would have been rivals at some point?

2004: The twins' comic selves developed differently from them, so... they became separate characters. Their color palettes also began mimicking the bit beasts they'd eventually have – and this year, their story got re-written and they became twins. They also started using the names they have now.

Kei: Gold boots. Seriously?
Katou: Okay, now that looks more my style.

2005: Yep, Kei had hair that was wavy at the bottom (think Tomoyo from CCS) She also started her penchant for leggings and fishnets, which were thrown in because at the time, I was thinking she was something like a ninja. 2006 onward, she uses them now and then, but she traded shuriken and ninjutsu for intel gathering and surveillance with STRIKE. Meanwhile, Katou found the balance in his wardrobe, and his hair became a bit more wavy XD;

Katou: Yep, that's us there.
Kei: Thank god. Talk about a roller-coaster ride of designs...



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Sometimes I want to go back in time to see what younger me was thinking   That turtleneck dress was on-point, though - wonder what would happen if I drew Kei in it now...


Art, characters (c) FlameWingsDawnslight /darkangel-hikari

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Comments: 29

Cosmos-Kitty [2016-02-12 14:24:52 +0000 UTC]

Woowee epic evolution of the twins, Kei love the twins' comments under your explanations they really wondering what you were doing to them back then LOL XD they're all epic looks I quite like Katou in the late 2001 look the most hehe Kei's one from then and the 2005 Kei are my faves of her, even though I'd have to get used to the pale grey hair rather than her normal dark blue look now X3
Awesome to see how things have changed over the years, I can deffo see why you felt nostalgic

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KristalDawn07 In reply to Cosmos-Kitty [2016-02-12 14:42:06 +0000 UTC]

In their eyes, it's not that epic  They were reacting the whole time I was drawing this timeline so I had to include what they were saying  

Yeah, Katou's late 2001 look was the basis for at least his final color palette, although I'm glad I didn't stick with pale gray/slate hair for Kei - that would have been pretty confusing, in a way XD;  Her 'ninja' look was the first one I posted here on devArt, actually. And then she took the wardrobe thing into her hands and... well, you see where that got  I really find it interesting that, after years with middle-parted hair, she got a haircut and poof, back to side-parted bangs like in her 2004 design or thereabouts  

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Cosmos-Kitty In reply to KristalDawn07 [2016-02-12 15:03:32 +0000 UTC]

Well every OC will find something to complain to their creators about, it's like kids with parents

Katou always suited blues and greens and the like hehe ^^ and awwww confusing hair colour for Kei and oooooh I'm not sure which was the first look for Kei I saw, my memory won't stretch ._. <_< hehehe and awwww both twins have found their own style which rocks for them

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KristalDawn07 In reply to Cosmos-Kitty [2016-02-12 15:39:53 +0000 UTC]

LOL you have a point there Speaking of OCs, oh my god I just heard Katou saying something similar to "Got it memorized?" like Lea/Axel - only his line was "Don't forget it, okay?"  and I'm dying XDDD  

I don't think you were following me back then - can't be sure, though  

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Cosmos-Kitty In reply to KristalDawn07 [2016-02-12 16:03:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh lol that's awesome  Katou you XDDDDDD

I'm not sure either, I joined DA originally in late 2008 and it took a year or two to meet the friends I have now so I may well not have been at that time

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KristalDawn07 In reply to Cosmos-Kitty [2016-02-12 16:11:44 +0000 UTC]

I went too far down the rabbit hole oh my god no. Kei's comment that one of the twins' earlier designs/incarnations would have been enemies? Y-eah... Silent Hill 3 (HD collection) why OTL  

On seeing the cutscene - 
Me: Wait what?
Kei: .... what the eff just happened?
Katou: Uh... other you just backstabbed other me - literally
Kei: NOT HELPING 

Ahhh yep, I posted Kei's 'ninja' appearance back in late 2008, too, and definitely didn't have that many dA friends that time, either  

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Cosmos-Kitty In reply to KristalDawn07 [2016-02-12 17:03:06 +0000 UTC]

I don't know much about the Silent Hill games, except that they're horror based aren't they? Arik knows them better so I've heard stuff from him or on Top 10 lists occasionally
Loooove the sound of Kei saying 'NOT HELPING." LOL

Awwwww you're awesome popular now, lots and lots of friends yay ^_^

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KristalDawn07 In reply to Cosmos-Kitty [2016-02-13 04:45:42 +0000 UTC]

I've only played the arcade version with my sister (hence this 4-koma here ) and that was just... I dunno, it was only for fun, I didn't know the story or anything - so you're not the only one XD;  Yep, it's a horror game series, which is why my sister wouldn't play it alone  

LOL yep, Kei sometimes has the best reactions when I'm not drawing them or writing XD;  but obvs, it gets out, like when I tell you or someone  

I'm still not over Harry Mason being voiced by Kirk Thornton - especially with him interacting with Laura Bailey and sounding like the sweetest dad ever. "Must not cast as older OC or older Beyblade peep, c'mon brain..." XD; 

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Cosmos-Kitty In reply to KristalDawn07 [2016-02-13 16:29:03 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww I see coolios and awwwww your sis not wanting to play it alone :3 hehe on the occasion I've checked out violent, gory, horror stuff for a first time I try to at least make it during the day rather than at night and/or before bed then I have a chance to get the images out of my head

Kei is so awesome she'll always be remembered ^_^ hehe

Oooooh man XD your brain too tempted for it oooooh

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ZheMari [2016-02-12 11:54:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I remember the first design of Kei 8D

Anyway, it's quite interesting to see how they're evolved over the years Kei's late 2001 gets me to think of Tsubasa, whoops

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KristalDawn07 In reply to ZheMari [2016-02-12 14:32:03 +0000 UTC]

Yaaaaaasssss  XD;  and now you know I had ninja on the brain (I blame Flame of Rekka and Rurouni Kenshin/Samurai X for calling my attention to ninja)

Ah those days in high school when the world was less complicated to me (in other words, I didn't know Beyblade's whole story, I hadn't read the manga, etc.)    Don't worry, you're not the only one. When I saw it, I lost it and spent 5-10 minutes giggling, then trying to draw, then giggling again. 

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LadyTaellise [2016-02-12 08:29:40 +0000 UTC]

Hahahahaha how amazing!! I would never imagine Kei already had short and grey hair (and sho looks beautiful either way to me)

I really laughed at the little dialogues you have written here

It is really funny (and embarrassing hehehehehe) seeing the old designs of our characters. Like you said, I would love to know what my younger self was thinking

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KristalDawn07 In reply to LadyTaellise [2016-02-12 08:59:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm wondering at her later 2001 version, myself XD;  The more I look at it, the more I see female Tsubasa aghkdsla HAHAHA sorry not sorry I'll admit, I'd love to use some of the older designs for something else - maybe more Beyblade OCs, or maybe I shoop them into the remake of my "Unmei no Kokoro" story (I need a different title for it, though)...?

Or maybe as adoptables? XD;

I couldn't just ignore the twins' reactions while I was drawing/coloring these doodles, though, so I had to include them Although I think Kei's original design kinda influenced Kaoru, now.

Ah, if only we could go back in time

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LadyTaellise In reply to KristalDawn07 [2016-02-12 22:34:21 +0000 UTC]

AHAHHAHAHAHAHA FEMALE TSUBASA LMAO XDDDDD I really laughed at it!!
Hmmmm I dunno what to suggest tbh I find all the ideas good! I am sure you will decide a fair justice to these designs

Hhahahha that was a genius idea!!

Yeah, yeah! but I dunno, today's Bella is happier u.u

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KristalDawn07 In reply to LadyTaellise [2016-02-13 04:31:05 +0000 UTC]

Cannot unsee  

I'll just have to wait and see, then, whichever feels best D'aww, if today's Bella is happier, then that's good  

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SilverFae16 [2016-02-12 05:42:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh, this is interesting! (And the twins' comments in the description just seal the deal--they do make a good point, sometimes! I think favourite has to be Kei's comment under 2004--it so sounds like she's sassing you there!)

And yeah, I agree with you on wanting to go back to see just what my younger self was thinking... Some ideas that seem great at the time really don't work out later on. (Nao's gone under some design adjustment, now that I think about it. Since when she was first created she was supposed to be Arrow's older sis, I stuck her in differing shades of reds with a touch of black. Oh boy was I an idiot--I just cringe now, and her colour palette has switched to mainly blue and black with a touch of red. Now to translate that into an outfit for her... And I think Midori suffered from my poor colour choices--red and teal/turquoise/whatever do not go, especially when the rest of her is darker (ie blacks and greys). Whoops...)

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KristalDawn07 In reply to SilverFae16 [2016-02-12 06:56:21 +0000 UTC]

Glad you found it so XD; I had fun drawing these up from my very old scribbles I still giggle at Katou's old name - trying to decipher the colors, though, was a challenge OTL  Kei's comment under 2004 - yep, she was definitely sassing.

I have a feeling younger me would have had Kei be part of the Russian team, then defect to the Bladebreakers come tournament time and then beating him and Black Dranzer. I found tiny comic 'panels' on the same page as Kei's beta design. There was a (not well illustrated) Beybattle, and then closeups of Kai's shocked face, and Kei's triumphant one. That's one friendly rivalry that hasn't died out, though.  Oh wow, sorry, Nao and Midori - but at least you learn as you go along, when it comes to color palette choices

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SilverFae16 In reply to KristalDawn07 [2016-02-13 12:26:29 +0000 UTC]

I can imagine! And hee hee... I can tell she was sassing with her comment under early 2001--she has a point!

Mm, makes sense. It's kinda what we first do when creating OCs for a series such as this. And hee hee, she would have been doing the same as Kai, just in reverse! Oh joys... And I can tell--it's cute, though!

Yup. Fuyumi managed to get away with her colour palette staying the same--and she's been around nearly as long as Nao has, so I don't know what I did right with her but not with Nao or Midori... (Maeda has stayed the same, as well. Weird...)

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KristalDawn07 In reply to SilverFae16 [2016-02-15 08:12:42 +0000 UTC]

Kei has been sassing since her creation, although sometimes she tones it down or it isn't as obvious. Then again, she only sasses those she feels comfortable with. Katou... will sometime sass, but it happens so randomly

Oh well - that's how some OCs are, I guess. Sometimes, even if the colors don't seem to work together, they work for that OC

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SilverFae16 In reply to KristalDawn07 [2016-02-16 09:07:24 +0000 UTC]

I know that feeling--Midori is the most likely to sass (as is Maeda, now that I think about it...), which can get amusing sometimes... Although it isn't really appreciated all that much. Both tend to sass Fuyumi, for fairly obvious reasons.

Yeah. All part of their unpredictability... Fuyumi definitely has the brightest colour palette of all my OCs, which somehow works.

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KristalDawn07 In reply to SilverFae16 [2016-02-16 12:19:16 +0000 UTC]

Good job, Midori XD;  Aww, poor Fuyumi   although when the twins sass each other, or Riku sasses Makoto or one of his friends, it's fun to see (I'm such a mean creator

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SilverFae16 In reply to KristalDawn07 [2016-02-16 13:13:50 +0000 UTC]

I have a feeling the sassiness is inherited, looking at Maeda and Midori together... To be fair, Fuyumi's "plans" often result in a little sass when others realise the faults, so she does deserve it on occasion.

Same boat here--watching either Midori or Maeda sass Fuyumi makes me laugh (often because it results in Fuyumi being speechless, which doesn't happen very often otherwise).

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KristalDawn07 In reply to SilverFae16 [2016-02-16 13:25:58 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, well, it's gotta come from somewhere, as well as needs a reason otherwise it's...not quite as amusing. Oh, man, though - if Fuyumi's that talkative, her being speechless now and then would be something to remember (Hoshiko is turning out to be that way, oh dear).

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SilverFae16 In reply to KristalDawn07 [2016-02-16 13:57:00 +0000 UTC]

Yep. I'm starting to think if you spend a lot of time with Fuyumi and so get to hear of her schemes/adventures, your sassy side comes out more frequently...  Nao  has a tiny bit of sass that gets used around Fuyumi, hence why I'm suspecting that thought. And yep, since Fuyumi's a talkative little kid (well, not so little now, but hey)...she's rarely quiet, and her being quiet indicates something's wrong. (And hee hee, have fun!)

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KristalDawn07 In reply to SilverFae16 [2016-02-16 15:41:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh woah - Nao? Yeah, I think your thoughts on that would be correct, if that's the case  

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SilverFae16 In reply to KristalDawn07 [2016-02-16 17:15:06 +0000 UTC]

Nao has been around Fuyumi for longer than Midori, so it's bound to happen... It just doesn't happen all that often, so I usually get caught out and forget she does have that ability. ("Wait what, Nao?" "Oh come on")

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KristalDawn07 In reply to SilverFae16 [2016-02-16 23:50:20 +0000 UTC]

Whoops, catching you off guard, huh?  

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SilverFae16 In reply to KristalDawn07 [2016-02-17 12:32:40 +0000 UTC]

Yep. It also catches Fuyumi out, as she's used to Nao being quiet and not that type. ("Aw, Nami...") I laugh at her reaction sometimes...

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KristalDawn07 In reply to SilverFae16 [2016-02-17 14:17:38 +0000 UTC]

 

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