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Published: 2016-06-15 13:01:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 437; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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I'm looking at this because it caught my eye in a group. I really love this image, it's so intriguing.
Minor constructive criticism: If possible, it would be good to warm the clothing grid texture to at least bend a little. It's fine on most of the parts, but on his right shoulder (in the shadow) it's such a strong grid, it's distracting. Makes me realize that it's a drawing (stops immersion). It just disturbs the strong hand-drawn vibe you have there. I think the texture looks good, just if it wasn't so straight.
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Another thing is you could off-kilter the grid pattern. This will make the pattern seem more natural and makes the pattern stand apart from the table and books, because, as of right now they are perfectly parallel, which messes with my eyes. but this is a great drawing. you can see the sadness in his eyes. I think he forgot the salt.
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Thanks for the criticism
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