Comments: 8
Khipmunk [2005-09-11 13:11:13 +0000 UTC]
Good imagery.
"A tear for the reality of life that I can’t cope.
Someone, please wipe it away"
I love it. Very good start.
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fallen-princess [2005-08-25 12:28:57 +0000 UTC]
i like this, the tone is very effective, as is the imagery. well done
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