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ktrmae — Wipe Away my Tears
Published: 2005-08-25 12:25:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 147; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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Description A tear for the reality of life that I can’t cope.
Someone, please wipe it away
And fulfill this heart with hope.
Each beat slows down with single drops,
In consciousness I plead,
For this flooding to stop.
“Blessed are the sick,” if ever that was true,
If God’s angels hear my prayers,
By chance could they send you?
My Eyes swell up and I struggle to breathe.
Lying in hospital ward 9,  
Inside my organs bleed.
Staring at an unknown reflection.
I yearn for your last kiss.
Because my body can’t hold on
Much longer,
And soon enough,
I won’t exist.
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Comments: 8

trubandit [2005-10-15 13:28:45 +0000 UTC]

i like this poem

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ktrmae In reply to trubandit [2005-10-15 13:38:52 +0000 UTC]

glad you like it!

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Khipmunk [2005-09-11 13:11:13 +0000 UTC]

Good imagery.

"A tear for the reality of life that I can’t cope.
Someone, please wipe it away"

I love it. Very good start.

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ktrmae In reply to Khipmunk [2005-09-11 13:14:48 +0000 UTC]

why ty!!

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ElementStormX [2005-09-01 08:22:19 +0000 UTC]

I like the vibe it brings in. Nice work.

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ktrmae In reply to ElementStormX [2005-09-05 01:11:49 +0000 UTC]

ty 4 ur comment. its much appreciated!

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fallen-princess [2005-08-25 12:28:57 +0000 UTC]

i like this, the tone is very effective, as is the imagery. well done

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ktrmae In reply to fallen-princess [2005-08-25 12:41:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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