Comments: 23
Nagneto [2014-10-16 03:37:40 +0000 UTC]
It's very detailed. What motivates her to become Hokage?
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Ducie [2013-01-12 11:07:10 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome! She is very balanced, and I love the idea that she's a sensor type! Also, not many OC's use suiton jutsu's, so this is great too! I mean, the suiton fist is an awesome idea!
Maybe you can change the fact that she uses so much jutsu's; Basic genjutsu's, basic and advanced suiton, ánd sensor jutsu. This isn't a very big problem, butt she now has the skills of an advanced Chuunin, or a average Jounin, since her only real weakness is her Taijutsu. But for the rest, very nice!
4/5
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Kuroguns In reply to Ducie [2013-01-12 12:38:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you and yes, with those jutsus it´s quite hard to classificate which are basic and which are advanced, she´s now 16 years old and is a chuunin, she started to learn shinobi techniques quite late and thanks to this and people around she had quite quick start Also eventhough is random shinobi strong in ninjutsu and genjutsu, but weak in taijustu he could have another "weakneses" which make him worse than another person with same abilities, for example mental stability, health, getting distracted easily or not etc., it´s not all above chakra control, taijustu, genjutsu and ninjutsu
It´s just my opinion because I don´t like to follow Kishimoto´s story, timeline and so on, I have a closed community with my friends and we are happy like that We just like Naruto world and characters, but not the whole story behind it (mainly the shippuuden storyline is wrong- like war etc.) Our OC thanks to this could be different from OCs which follows the main story and I write it almost everytime to my description
Thank you for you opinion, I aprecciate it
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Tsuki-Kyobona [2012-01-05 16:31:14 +0000 UTC]
wow this is great XD one of the only OC's ive seen that ISN'T a mary sue!! nice job!
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Tsuki-Kyobona In reply to Kuroguns [2012-01-05 19:53:10 +0000 UTC]
ya XD right now i cant look up things, cause even tho im on DA at school, i cant search up anythung O.o its not fai...lol
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Lilnoo [2011-07-22 21:58:53 +0000 UTC]
If she was Chunin and 16 in shippuden she could be in Miyu Uchiha's Team she is sasuke's sister and why does she have a scar on her cheek?
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Hakouten [2011-07-21 15:37:03 +0000 UTC]
she´s cute
i love the character design
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