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Kuroude7 — I'm sorry
Published: 2005-11-27 16:17:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 250; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 5
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Description Slip away, slip away,
Following but led astray,
Dreaming up while hand in hand,
Of better times, in our own plan,

But dreaming has a price itself,
Putting others on the shelf
and making us oblivious
to others, our own frivilous

Thoughts, ideas blocking,
Blanking, nightmares stalking,
Thanking, creeping, crawling,
Shining and enthralling,

Delving deeper, farther, faster,
Prices steeper, soon outcast her...


In reverie
Majority

Stupidity
Offendingly
Rescinding thee,
Regrettingly,
Your sanity.
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Comments: 25

petit-chou-fleur [2005-12-03 18:12:46 +0000 UTC]

I agree, the rhythm is extremely affective! I love the themes you talk about too

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Kuroude7 In reply to petit-chou-fleur [2005-12-04 15:24:01 +0000 UTC]

Well, thank you! I'm glad you like it, thanks for the fav!

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petit-chou-fleur In reply to Kuroude7 [2005-12-05 18:30:47 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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starryblazevampyre [2005-11-28 11:43:22 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous! The flow, indeed the beat, is amazing. I luv it!

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Kuroude7 In reply to starryblazevampyre [2005-11-28 22:47:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks muchly.

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starryblazevampyre In reply to Kuroude7 [2005-11-30 10:28:22 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome! Good Work!

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Thaumaturge [2005-11-27 21:30:02 +0000 UTC]

Good work indeed, Cloud! I like it!

It is quite quick, quite sharp, which works well here, I think.

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Kuroude7 In reply to Thaumaturge [2005-11-27 21:32:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Thaum. It's meant to me. I'm wondering, though, if anyone caught the hidden message in the poem.

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Kuroude7 In reply to Kuroude7 [2005-12-05 07:58:55 +0000 UTC]

And by 'meant to me', I mean 'meant to be'.

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Thaumaturge In reply to Kuroude7 [2005-11-27 21:38:20 +0000 UTC]

I think that I do... I'll tell you when I next see you on MSN, and you can tell me if I'm right

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Kuroude7 In reply to Thaumaturge [2005-11-27 21:47:46 +0000 UTC]

Excellent.

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bellaphotography [2005-11-27 20:11:58 +0000 UTC]

this is great, sweetie... it sounds almost like lyrics to a song. you have a wonderful talent keep up with your great work

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Kuroude7 In reply to bellaphotography [2005-11-27 20:15:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^_^

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bellaphotography In reply to Kuroude7 [2005-11-27 20:20:22 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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mafia-muffin [2005-11-27 17:53:06 +0000 UTC]

I like this Especially the last stanza. It feels like it gets faster with each line, at least when I read it, which is very effective.

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Kuroude7 In reply to mafia-muffin [2005-11-27 17:57:48 +0000 UTC]

Arigato! ^_^

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mafia-muffin In reply to Kuroude7 [2005-11-27 23:52:39 +0000 UTC]

Indeed ^_^ (I don't know what arigato means >_>

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Kuroude7 In reply to mafia-muffin [2005-11-28 04:00:02 +0000 UTC]

It means 'thank you' in Japanese. XD

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KH-fangirl [2005-11-27 17:04:14 +0000 UTC]

Wow, its really good!
~ megan

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Kuroude7 In reply to KH-fangirl [2005-11-27 17:46:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I like this one. ^^

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Kuffie [2005-11-27 16:59:35 +0000 UTC]

Dude well done *claps*

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Kuroude7 In reply to Kuffie [2005-11-27 17:46:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. :D

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redandgoldseeker [2005-11-27 16:22:25 +0000 UTC]

ahh gorgeous breathtaking i wish i could write liek you im a bit of an all rounder i do mixed media peoms ect the list goes on but your brilliant ^^ keep it up

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Kuroude7 In reply to redandgoldseeker [2005-11-27 16:28:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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redandgoldseeker In reply to Kuroude7 [2005-11-27 16:37:44 +0000 UTC]

thats fine

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