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Published: 2009-12-16 05:45:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 62; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Streaming down the window
Rain makes no sound.
It is barely noticed
by all those around

They go about their tasks
with such happy jest.
Rain, they do not notice;
This, I must protest.

How can they not see it?
For it is quite plain
the rain is streaming down
the darkened window pane.

But no one even cares;
and they question not
why the rain is falling.
But there is a lot.

I, though, see the rain,
with my vision clouding,
up in the darkened sky.
Loudly, it is shouting.

I know not the reason.
Please do not ask why
the rain is streaming down
from the darkened sky.
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Comments: 6

FallenAngel080 [2009-12-17 09:53:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow that was really good. D:
Hope the sky clears for you.

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Kyohru In reply to FallenAngel080 [2009-12-17 15:22:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks i think it did. but i found a bright side to my down side: it benefits my poetry yay! lol.

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rahwyn09 In reply to Kyohru [2009-12-26 18:20:25 +0000 UTC]

Tis always a small side benefit of pain and hardships. We love you, dear.

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Kyohru In reply to rahwyn09 [2009-12-26 18:58:23 +0000 UTC]

i love you too and i miss you! why are you always so busy!?!?

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rahwyn09 In reply to Kyohru [2010-01-04 09:11:35 +0000 UTC]

I dunno!!! But it's driving me MAD!! I need summer vacation already... sigh. :/ Any-who, I is trying to be better.

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Kyohru In reply to rahwyn09 [2010-01-05 04:28:10 +0000 UTC]

yeah. i do get to see you tomorrow and i am looking forward to that!!!

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