SpIkEr27 [2009-08-04 04:04:51 +0000 UTC]
Wow. This is really good! You should really consider continuing this story! The plot is great and the style & tone is exquisite. I love it!
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Kyohru In reply to SpIkEr27 [2009-08-04 14:42:34 +0000 UTC]
thank you i have considered continuing it, but it was a class assignment that i did so long ago that i forgot about it...
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rahwyn09 [2009-05-09 19:49:08 +0000 UTC]
This is done very well! Focusing entirely on the sense of hearing makes this dialogue run more smoothly than many do and really reveals the characters with a unique perspective. Bravo.
Kyohru In reply to rahwyn09 [2009-05-11 00:47:16 +0000 UTC]
thanks i just hope my teacher feels the same way...