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KyraShangea — Delicate V. 3
Published: 2007-07-08 04:16:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 549; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 21
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I know, I know. Some of you are probably thinking I'm trying to milk this for all its worth. That would only be if I didn't scrap all but one.I just can't wait until the scrapped versions disappear from my main page. Makes it look like I do the same piece over and over again!
Anyway.
I took some suggestions that people gave me to do this. (I'll draw something new eventually.) I darkened the lines, but not too much. The background is a little less busy, and lighter. I added the white border because I wanted to give an effect of her fading away.
So.. I hope you guys like this version! Tell me what you think, any final advice! I won't be updating it again, so which ever one gets more love will be the one that stays. VOTE TO KEEP YOUR FAVORITE DAN--- Oops, this isn't So You Think You Can Dance.
Oh yes, expect this to be scrapped. Or I can scrap it now, considering it will have gone to your inboxes already.
Just because I'm busy and it takes awhile to respond, thanks ahead of time for comments.
Version 1 --> [link]
Version 2 --> [link]
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Comments: 34
I think it achieved a medium between ver. 1 and 2. It still looks great!! and adding the border was a nice touch!
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;_; I can't decide!!!!! This background is better than the first one... I guess it depends on exactly what you're going for... The plain lineart seems kinda glowy. I really like both this one and the plain lineart... but I guess you should probably scrap the plain lineart, because this one does feel more... finished. I do want to see it colored once you get a stylus!
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I like it, but I'm sticking to the regular pencil one. To me, the colored bg gets in the way, the darker lines get rid of the softness. Call me an originalist. I don't know, but I'm still in love with the sketch withought the bg. Also, the bg makes it look flat. PENCIL SKETCH FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PERFECT!!!
it could use some other colors here and there... im not quite shore what exactly... but wth i have no sence of effect coloring 
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Mhm, I like this version the most, so... I must fav it, to keep it here *^^*. Though, it's not exactly the perfect one I imagined, but... Nah, whatever, I like this girl anyway ^^". And yes, soft blue was a very good choice~~
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yup, best one
haha nice to know you used my suggestion, makes me feel good inside, lol ^_^
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Best one yet! 
The BG settles nicely here, and the expression is as beautiful as ever ^-^
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i think u should just color it already!!
the line art is great, the expression is excellent, and the composition is nice too.
COLOR!!
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But then the lines would have to be inked (I don't like coloring uninked lines) and my stylus isn't working!! T_T
So maybe I'll color it when I'm in school again, and I've picked up a new stylus.
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S*** i havent inked anything lately. u dont need to. just adjust the brightness/contrast, seperate the lines from the back and color.
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Maybe, maybe. Still, there's the whole time aspect. ^^
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hmmm i c. that could be a problem...
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