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I learned a lot from this pic...it probably took me longer than it should have but oh well, I guess I can blame that on the crappy line art from the start.As you can see I was incredibly bored over this week off school so I broke down and did char profiles...I'm on a profile spree.
The details on the list thing there are taken from my camp ID card where the dude making it didn't really have a clue about most of the details so I winged them...(wung?). Hence the ish-es. Most of those details won't make sense anyway but they are correct...which is why it was fun.
I finally gave a half assed attempt at muscle anatomy this time...I don't know how it faired in the end but I'm sick of fiddling with it. And I was sad that I couldn't make his hair as shiny as the last pic...TT.TT I also found a style that I liked with his swords there, that was fun!^^ OH OH, and his belt? That is my belt! I have one identicle to it, and I actually had to take some of the details off because of my crappy paper but yes it is my all time favourite belt! *is obsessed with belts*
So yeah for updated char profiles! He was over due...the last profile of him was old and incredibly crappy...*shudder* I think I scrapped that...which is a good thing.
Keraph (c) Me
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cool design, the pants are my fav
I like how theyr are shredded and all by the shoes
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this pic is so hott!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Dude i like your character's swords what are they called and how do they work? and whats the in-depth story behind your character?
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oh man you really shouldn't have asked. I'll be ranting for a week. Um, the swords are Nidor with characteristics of basically air/oygen and Helegehn which has characteristics more towards hydrogen (i think it even burns when he has the thing mastered). They combine to make and arrow shaped sword called Nen, taking on characteristics of water. Cuz that's just how original I am...=.= ahem anyways yeah. When Keraph is at full power they weigh nothing, but combined Nen is very heavy and requires two hands normally. He can change any of the 3 blades into their elemental phases at any time, like per say to pass through an enemies sword and then resolidify as metal to slice the enemy, etc.
Keraph's background...is really complicated. In a nut shell he's the water spirit but doesn't follow the rules the other five spirits do. He eventaully has what serves as his heart and gives him his power ripped out of him for betraying them and is given a sort of fake heart and is now mortal. So he has to cope in the main story with being mortal and having a spirit body and all this. It gets really tricky when his body needs more power than the fake heart can supply...um, lets see. Each of the six spirits is marked under one of the seven sins, Keraph's is Avarice and he later learns to fuse with it making it his alter ego instead of takign control of him and destroying everything...thats a quick exlpaination anyways. i'm just glad you were interested enough to ask but im sorry if i rambled, ^^:
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Don't be i love hearing the explantion i was actully thinkign on how simialr may character is to yours...lol My character is a chinchillian (half human and half chinchilla) he has a human apperance but a chinchilla tail and ears. May character weilds three swords two of them are revrse blade the Sword of Mercy and the Sword of Judgment then his thrid and final sword is the Sword of Blood or nicknamed for the Crimson blade due to all the blood that was shed by it.
He also has fingerless gloves marked with a white X then he un does the chains around his pants and wraps them around his fist making him a lehal fist fiter on top of that he has the light and dark skills. Example my guy's main problem is the Sin of Wrath when he loses control his whole body its covered in darkness and his eyes glows red kind of looking like Anti-sora you know? and he is really powerful like he can make shadow copies of himself that mimic what ever he does like a relfection then he has his dark barrier and his deadly heat seeking death beams.
But when he has a pure desire to stop lets say someone from dying and he is on his last leg he can achieve the light mode or a super mode where his skin become a paleish grey and his eyes go black with red rings around them his hair becomes silver-white and he is much stonger and faster then anything and in that mode he can do attacks like Heaven's Judgment and Divine Blast or finish things up with the Divine Ball. in his normal however he can change into a chinchilla or a werechinchilla or talk to a chinchilla...lol
I was thnking it be cool to have your character pop up in my story and have them fight you know? it be like one of those cross over events it be awesome you know? I can see the fight secnce play out in my head now your fallen spirit vs my chinchillian who i named after me but i'm going to eventully change his name to Vein i think or it might be his code name...lol please tell me more about your person i'm interested in hearing more so please rant all you want i'm all ears.
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wow a chinchilla! That's awesoem and by far one of the most original ideas I've ever heard!^^ SO cool. Does he run like antisora too? lol sorry, i had too...
ahem, anyways. I guess I should have put everything into a complete profile sort of thing...oh well
It would be so helarious to have them fight!^^ Except that I think of rpgs and my char fights anothe rpersons char and everyoen wants to win and it gets all weird....cuz you know how everyone makes thier characters almost invincible? yeah...
not to say ker doesn't have weaknesses...his weaknesses are what the book is basically about...liek say, when he pushes his mortal body beyond it's limits and crosses that border between mortal and spirit body limits, his mortal body has to make up for the extra energy he's trying to use so it starts to eat itself on teh inside. Heh, lets just say there's a lot of blood in this story, XD that and he can't use nen, nidor or helegehn to their full potential in that form either. Like they only wiegh the same as water, or say oxygen but they still stay metal and dont' actually change form.
But other than that, he's still this wicked swords man. Hmm lets see, the way he fights with two swords is more like break dancing without gravity.XD hah fun
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I post my story on my DA page it's called Saint Poole or SP for short you should check it out...lol my guy is far from invincible and he loses more then he wins, in fcat he rarely wins...lol also my story has alot of blood and battle in it to. In book two though i'm bring his the number of swords he uses to three i realzied using 5 or 6 is just a little too much. But yeah um it be cool to hae your person randomly pop up and fight seeing how in book to my guy has to trael from world to world trying to find his way back to his and not get tempted to stay in one that he adores more thne his own home world...ll also my guy has a whole lot of mental iusses...lol and no he doesn't run like sora....lol
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lol yeah, ker never wins either...
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Looks like our guys have a lot in comment, i have a picture on my DA ID of Saint Poole when he was human >_> <_< i need to get a chinchillian pic of him up now...lol But whats funny about my story is the emotioinal problem the hero goes through are the same problems i have to go through in life...lol As for the running he runs like a normal person and not on all fours like antisora....lol although i could use that to creep people seeing a human that all black with red eyes running at you with it's tail in the air...lol
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i would guess that most people's characters have a lot to do with what they do in life.
lol and yes that would deffinetly freak people out, XD
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The reason i chose the chinchillia theme is after my beloved chinchillia Romeo who died about 3 or 4 years ago just a year before my grandma...so this is really in memeory of the little guy who was one lazy and other then me, mean to everyone else...lol Anyway i'm getting ready to do story two because story one is about to be done and so i need a new guest partner...i want to use your guy because he is just what i'm looking for someoen who can rivial my guy and be the hero/villian at the same time with my guy. Also seeing how in book two my guy is jumping from world to world tryign to find his way back it'll be good to have a battle buddy, because if i conitnue to write the story as i am now my guy wont even get past the frist mini villian...T_T so what do ya say? if you say yes i need a more in-depth on your character's personility, and a list of his powers as well and the full extent of what he can do and what happens to him when he uses's to much power and so on and so fourht...lol Also ever think of posting your story on DA so people can read it?
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alright, ill put the full profile somewhere...and I can't post it on DA because well 1 it's not finished and I woudln't want to be pressured into writing more on it or finishing it or anything and 2 it gets pretty rated at parts...which is why I wrote it for myself...that being said I have to add that Keraph's personality is very hard to explain.
the profile you use for him will have to be one of many points that he is in in the story. He has defferent designs, abilities, even personalities, weapons and goals in different parts of the story. For instance, near the end he gets a shard of his soul stone back and has his spirit status and abilites restored, then a little after that he actually fuses himself with Avarice, his sin alter ego and is different again...wow he's complicated...=.=
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But on the bright side it allows him to have unlimited potential. Also my story a little rated as well but i still post it up for people to read and enjoy. My character to goes through different weapons as well...lol Hey thanks and odn't worry your guy will be seen as often as my guy will be seeing how they travel together and there be many chapters were it's just about him or just about my perosn because they had to split and so on and so fourth.
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I just finished writing the final cahpter of Saint Poole yeah!!! Now i need to get everyhing together for the next story...*sighs* you should read chapter 65 of my story it's the end of the book and man i love the ending it's great...lol
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ending of books always scare me. Almost as much as the ending of a game. It means it's over and there is no more to read...TT.TT but that's just me. XD
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True but also it means were moving on to book 2, by the way in book two i'm goign have both our character's be rivials if you don;t mind to make the story more interesting you know? Also if you wouldn't find doing fan art of them fighting that be cool two. Also who's the girl? and whats her realtion to your character? Also want to know how many different personilties, wepaons, and powers does your guy have don't you have like a character listing or something?
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ohoh woah that was a lot of questions.
The girl is Qali. She followed him back to his world and he is training her to become this sort of miracle spirit thing that leads to paradise and all this.
Technically Keraph has three personalities. Boring and lifeless at low tide. Hyper and with more energy at high tide. And then he is actually able to experience human emotion when he fuses with Avarice.
His weapons...just Nen.
His powers...well he has control over water, all water if you can get your head around that. Bascially he can do pretty much anything to anything with a water content. He could say, turn you into dust by touching you or give you hypothermia instead. Make it rain, summon a bubble of water to float around your head and drown you...you name it. He can split water too. Later on in the story he masters his abilites and gains control over oxygen and hydrgen as well, meaning he can make bombs and suffocate people. With his abilities you can pretty much let your mind roam free.
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Thats kind of cheating, but then again my guy element is spirit and he can pretty much control and manipulate the energy into anything he wants to but remains ignorant of what he can truly do. Anyway you should watch me that way you can see when the chapters come and so you can read them and give me your thoughts to make sure i keep your character to your standards and so fourth. By the way can you explain the fusion with Avarice and more so whats the whole quest about paradise? Also whats his world like? Why did he betray the other spirits? and what kinds of enemies does he fight? What is his origins?
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Okay this is gonna be long...
Mk, since he's a spirit he's imortal. But that comes at a cost, spirits technically aren't allowed to feel human based emotions. Like love or sorrow so they can't mourn a death per say. While keraph was turned mortal he met qali and trained her, then by the end when he gets his spirit body back those same restrictions apply once again. As i said earlier, anytime keraph over does himself in his mortal body he has to under go a great amount of pain for it to even itself out. Think equivalent exchange, except in this case, immortality exchanges for emotion and spirit power exchanges for physical and mental pain. So back to what i was saying, when he gets his immortal body back he finds that he is in nothing but constant pain and agony because while he was mortal, although unable to feel emotions he subconsciously fell in love with qali. Avarice, because keraph had been banished while avarice had control of him and for the time he was mortal was in a dormant state, is now living inside him as an alter ego but nothing more. He offers keraph a deal that if he'll lend him his body and powers avarice will give keraph his power of human sin, which will allow his body to override the pain exchange. He agrees and fuses with his sin and in doing so gains a whole knew level of not only personality but abilities and limits.
Paradise: Way before anything there was a great spirit that watched over and protected everything and it was paradise per say. Then the 'great divider' that separated kaiet (name of keraph's world) from earth. So humans came through and basically destroyed everything. So teh great spirits made six spirits to go and lead her own people against the humans to save kaiet, but instead the spirits went and destroyed everything. the great spirit was angry at them then and before she died gave them each a sin ego that would unexpectably take control of them at one time and also a human body. In order to return to their paradise, they would have to find teh seventh spirit who would lead them to paradise in which the humans and kaietans live in peace. That spirit turns out to be qali, and there fore that is her role.
Keraph betrayed them not so much technically but more that the high spirit (forest) hated his guts and used betrayal as an excuse to drain his spirit power. Avarive took over keraph and ended up leading his whole country to it's death against a war that they could never win, as the forest spirit has all these different abilities and made huge monsters and stuff. So avarice tries to attack dyrok (forest spirit) and while no one knew it was his alter ego and not him, he sucked out what serves as his 'heart' and voila. Betrayal, but also he never followed the rules anyways which is why dyrok hated him in the first place.
Enemies, mostly dyrok, some funky snakes with legs type things called harrowers, and another random human he plays into everythign as well named theta. Almost everyone in the story is his enemy per say except qali...and the magority of the other spirits.
Origins? Um...he can turn into a water dragon...other than that I'm not sure what you mean.
If he's the water spirit, he's gonna have power over water and i'm not going to make exceptions for story purposes. I already made him mortal for the entirty of the story so that he wouldn't have the freedom and liberty his does with his normal abilities, but he's the most powerful of all the spirits and that's why. Water is everywhere, so there's really no place he can't feel an advantage. You can call it cheating, I'll call it science. The only thing i can think of him doing is perhaps toning it down in order to have a fair fight, but unless he's against another spirit or in his mortal body he'll have full and total control over water. So perhaps for you're story you might want to use him in his mortal form. In which case all he can do is reject water away from him or towards him but onnly in a concentrated radius and jump really high. XD
sorry that was so long...
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No bigges it gae me all the info i pretty much needed, just a feel more questions now, you said he falls in love with Qali does he eer express it to her and does she feel the same about him? Also don't i found a way to counter most of your powers...lol that will makw him perfect still for my story. Don't worry about the long comment i enjoyed reading it. Also for the sake of the story i'm goign to use word for wrod your explantions that way i don't mess up the sainty of her characters. Also thanks again. Also how often does Avarice tak control? one more think the rebellion i guess you can call it from Aarice vs the great spirit remians me of Luifcer s God the whole rbellion in heaven...lol
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No he can't express it back. Which is why I said it was subconscious. She does feel for him for a time, but after a while more as a friendship when she realized he can't express much back in return. At the end, when he supposedly has human emotion, even then he doesn't even show anything but she gets pretty attached ot him as the story goes on.
You found a way to counter? Cool what is it?
Each sin only takes control once. But because keraph was turned mortal while avarice had control, avarice was put to sleep and woke up again when keraph became a spirit again to finish his 'run' if you will. Then he comes back in keraph's mind just before they fuse, in which case I still haven't decided whether acarice will remain an alter ego or just be part of keraphs character.
^^ thats a pretty cool comparison. But even though dyrok is trying to stay faithful to the great spirit, he's a bit of a hypocrite...and works majorly for his own good. Keraph works way more in teh favour of the great spirit, dispite dyrok trying to constantly stop him. But yes, teh sins can be seen as being controlled by the devil,
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My guy can control spirit energy being one with nature seeing how apart of him is an animal that comes from nature he is more in tune he can just sheild himself in aura to cut off the water conncection...lol also even if you drain the water from someone then...well let me not spoil it you'll have to read and find out 
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okay now that is cheap. You pretty much mean that he can't use spirit energy at all, and only has his swords. Just cuz he's an animal and is 'in tune' with nature...i'm not sure that qualifies him to cut off the water spirits control of water. But hey it's your story...and if he drains teh water content from someone. They end up a pile of dirt on the floor, so lets see what you can do with that. ^^
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You clearly forgot to metion my little chinchillian has the Areis Zodiac Stone and with helpful advice from Velius who lends him her powers allowing him to use his spiritural powers he is a rather formantible foe or at least for 30 mintues then he loses control and becomes a angelic/demonic were-chinchillia that goes around attacking everyone and tries to eat them...lol Look i have a character sheet on my person in my scraps i used a gif i made in his image to make him. It also list all his weapons, moves, and powers.
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it sounds like your guy can do anythign...hell all ker can do is breakdance with a sword and control water...
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No it's much more complex then that and he can't do everything i mean you would have to read the story to understand that he is rather very weak and has no control over his powers what so ever. That and he tends to lose control alot.
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oh okay...just know that if ker touches him...technically he could do him in right then and there...but you never know. After 100 000 years of training...he has perfect control of his abilites...but we'll see what you do with him i guess, ^^
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^_^;; now your making me all nervous weather i will use him to your standards or not...*nervous laugh*
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i would guess that most people's characters have a lot to do with what they do in life.
lol and yes that would deffinetly freak people out, XD
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*shudder* you just reminded me I REALLY have to fix this one too...
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BTW this sorta reminds me of KH ART style...and the chains...how do they stay in? and seadragon (ish)? XD LMAO
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erm...the chains...i dunno, they just do...its liek inuyasha's necklace without the flashy lights and sounds...and how does it remind you of kh?
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woof! you know...if you were to be with your hwat character it would be like incest...so ill take the burden of marrying him on my shoulders..hawt! BTW your new shadeing style is sorta scareing me where all the muscles are uuuuber defined...like those really creepy muscle weight lifting psyco oiled bodies dudes
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that made almost non if not very little sense. and it appears that alot of my style things scare you lately. it's called SHADING. AND I WAS PRACTISING ANATOMY! your right i should have made him fat and flabby with a barbed wire tatoo across his gut!
open minded kelly, open minded.
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Awesome... The profile's nice, and the swordz pwn 
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Beautiful! I just love the coloring, it's so well done! I love his hair and eyes! 
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*cries* eheee...he's hard!!*whine* k im done...
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ZOMG! Kyuumu that's cool. He's so old yet so young. You should try draw his spirit formy thing.
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believe me i've been trying...stupid thing is hard to get right. =.= but i'll get it one of these days...
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O.O Wow, that's awesome!! Holy cow! I love the swords! The texture on them is so perfect, I want to think they're real! His outfit is great, too. Great work all around. ^_^
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lol...i copied the hilts from the last pic....XD I'm such a cheat
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Keraph's sword and scabbard look soo cool,. and I did notice a diff in the muscles..Thanks for trying your best! I need to read chapter three and analyze it for you
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.....what scabbard? and yes you have to read chapater three!! I can't remember too well but I think that's the good one^^
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oh well, he might be dual wielding then..it did look like another sword, but I dunno..so much shiny it got me confused!
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erm no, these swords dont have sheaths, but the ones he has at the beginning of the story do...but im still working on the design for those...
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