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Kzira03 — Winter Melody Ch 8 Page 12
Published: 2011-02-26 22:56:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 5908; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 25
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PLEASE READ THIS PAGE FROM RIGHT TO LEFT ...thank you
Finally! Allen found Lenalee but she lost so much blood
I know I haven't put a lot of kissing scenes. Don't wory guys intimate moments will come later on
Just bare with me 
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omg i totally thought allen was groping lenalee's boobs in the third panel, too! of course he isn't bc he would never do that but it looked like it at first with that angle lol.
great job with the expressions and the detail!
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o. it kinda looked like it lol i havn't read this cuz i'm not a lenaleexallen fan, but the drawing are amazing! they are super close to the ones in the manga! or are you just copying the manga and drawing it? like i said i havn't really read it...
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oh its alright if you're not a fan of Allen and Lenalee and I'm not entirely copying the manga. I only use the original manga as a reference to some action scenes but I change the drawing when its comes to my doujinshi. Also, I use the manga as a reference to some scenes about Allen and Lenalee.
Hope you're not upset about myself using the manga as a reference.
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no, its just i didn't read it so i wasn't sure if you were just trying to draw pages from the manga or if it was your own story. i kinda thought it was your own plot or whatever, cuz i saw someting about allen and lenalee kissing, but i wasn't sure. but the artwork is super good, even if you do have references.
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Lenalee. D8
Poor girl, I hope everything will be alright with her and Allen. :0
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nope
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sorry its just I am no fan of Neah(not Allen NEAH they are 2 diffrent people) he pisses me off big time
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yeah I get what you mean.
Neah does make me mad too because he is using Allen. Damn it!!!
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I thought Allen kissed Lenalee O_O
Oh well. my bad
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wow you're the only one who noticed and found out that they did kissed
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I knew it! He kissed her again!!
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I will even add some intimate moments hehehe
right now school is taking my time to do my arts...dang!
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Same here!!!
I really miss making doujins!
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yeah
AWESOME!!!
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EHHHH?!
For real?!?!
YAAAAY!
Thank you very much!!!
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lol you didn't know?
you should check the updates more!!!
your very welcome you deserve it
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yeah I improved a lot
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Aww thanks, but no problem
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My only complaint is the rips in Lenalee's tights. Rips in tights end up more circular because of how the fabric is stretched, or end up in runs which go up and down the leg. I would know. XD I did ballet for years.
Now to keep reading.
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yeah you're right. I forgot about that. oh well! but thank you for you're feedback
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I will and thank you so much
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Inner Me: Nooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate cliffhangers!
Logical Me: But it's only to add a more dramatic effect.
Inner Me: I don't care! I want to know what happens next NOW! *takes a pillow and rips it open with immense strength*
Logical Me: Don't worry, hopefully the next update doesn't take too long. *sweat pours down face in fear of Inner Me*
Love the work so keep it up!
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woah lol your inner self is very eager to know what really happens next
I apologize for the cliffhangers.
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Your inner self scare me than my own inner self (mine inner self was creepier...coz she's a little girl way and total cute of myself...)
But I agree with your logical self...
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