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L-is-for-LOSER-17 — To Capture A Man, pg 13

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Description Intro! In this comic, we shall see how Madame originally captures her honey-bunch, the Wisconsin billionaire, Vlad Masters.
The premise is this: Our little billionaire finds himself called to office unexpectedly by a new company, urgently requesting a collaboration meeting with him, on behalf of his own company. While there, Vlad meets and unusual young woman, and as is the case when dealing with any obsessive fangirl/psychopath, things very quickly go awry.

Critique!
Panel 1: Danny, Valerie, Clockwork, and Sam?! I think they look okay, yeah? And those chairs and the table are floating. Madame sent in the gizmos to make it possible as a gift, to make sure she got her meeting booked. Oops!-- Did I just give away who this meeting was asked for by?
Panel 2: Ring around the rose-y, Let's all greet Vlad... dy? I don't think I got it right.
Panel 3: And Vlad asks the question on (nobody's) everybody's minds! Why are these people here?
Panel 4: I take full responsibility for making Danny not look Danny-ish. I tried to convert his Hartman-style hair into my style, but every time I did, he came out looking like a doofus with too much gel in his hair. So I did what gravity woulda done to that hair a long time ago: Made it swoop across his face. I also dressed him nicely for the occasion.

I'll be replacing the black-and-white's here with the colored pages as I finish them.

1 , 2 , 3 , 4 , 5 , 6 , 7 , 8 , 9 , 10 , 11 , 12 , 13 , 14 , 15 , 16 , 17

Vlad Masters and all associated characters (c) Butch Hartman
Madame President (c) Myself

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Comments: 2

bluefox117 [2008-08-19 09:06:22 +0000 UTC]

yep, danny saw his hair. wish granted

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L-is-for-LOSER-17 In reply to bluefox117 [2008-08-19 15:48:13 +0000 UTC]

Desiree must be floating around...

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