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l3onnie — [MindBound] Chapter2.6
Published: 2014-06-06 12:56:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 3272; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 0
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Thank you for taking time to read this comic! MindBound is a personal project that aims to raise environmental awareness through the weird and unexpected adventure of an imaginative girl.New to the story? Read from the beginning here .
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Haven't drawn chibis for a while and there's so much fun drawing cute stuff. :3
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MindBound
An original webcomic
Art & story by Bonnie Pang
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Comments: 8
May I recommend also hosting your comic on Taptastic? I think it would fit in with the current comics on that webcomic hosting site.
Also the second to last speech bubble should say "I thought you knew that!" not "I thought you know that!" Know is present tense. Knew is past tense. You cannot switch tenses in the same statement. Since thought is in past tense know should be as well.
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Thanks for the spell check! Just corrected the file.
Taptastic looks fun - I'll definitely check it out. I heard that there are several webcomic hosting sites. Thanks for the suggestion!
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No problem. Let me know if you start publishing on Taptastic as well. I'll add you to my reading list.
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I really, really like how you use your lines. Coloring's very nice too.
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Yay, another part.
I really like, that you continue doing this project! It's such a great topic and super exciting to read and look at.
I love how you display emotions. Being quite honest... I don't like the chibi one in the last panel. But oh well
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My webcomic is more of an experiment on art and ideas, not sure how it will turn out, but I really want to continue and finish it.
The sudden transition from "normal" to chibi is indeed quite abrupt. 
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I guess it is not the chibi it self bothering me, but they plain background
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