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Published: 2007-07-26 16:38:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 5598; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 1364
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Description and I wrote this in fits and bursts between Serious Edits as a palate cleanser of just plain fun/entertainment/more fun. We brainstormed it with and then wrote it for , who in turn illustrated it.

If the idea of two princes doing it on a polar bear rug does not please you, then you should not read this story.

NOTE: BECAUSE THE STORY IS SO HUGE, you have to press "download" to read it. SORRY. It took me a really long time to figure out why the story wasn't showing up and what I was doing wrong.

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Comments: 31

mikileereyes [2010-01-18 01:10:41 +0000 UTC]

"thumb crooked in at the soft fold"???? i think i just finished a whole tissue box full of nosebleeds.
**favourited**

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SnowyHail [2009-07-14 10:50:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I am wonderfully delighted. Not "SQUEEZOMG YAY" but.... Content. In only the way a wonderfully written story can make me.

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bloodycrusifix [2009-04-30 22:41:23 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that was beautiful... The best I've ever read.

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poppikun [2007-08-10 03:04:23 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could read it but I have no time >___<

And being 14 years old and extremely childish... I'm impatient!!!

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poppikun In reply to poppikun [2008-03-26 12:23:11 +0000 UTC]

Damn... that comment was from a looong time ago. I'm 15 now xD

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jbay64 In reply to poppikun [2008-03-26 02:12:11 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could to but unfotunetly I to am 14 and have the atention span of about 1 minute. I bet it's realy good though. Mabye I'll download it and read it in school...XD

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HerrSehnsucht [2007-08-02 18:19:04 +0000 UTC]

Veeeery nice! Mmm. As much as I like this sort of thing, I haven't actually read much. Your work is long but not too much so. It reminds me a little of Alec and Seregil of Nightrunner fame, if only because of the hair colors. I admire your writing style very much.

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tinuon [2007-08-01 18:01:16 +0000 UTC]

...wonderfully written...

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Xannish [2007-07-30 08:00:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow. And normally, I get bored by erotica.

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towson [2007-07-29 16:32:12 +0000 UTC]

That was incredible! I couldn't stop reading from the moment I started, how beautifully written.

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towson In reply to towson [2010-07-29 16:20:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh my GOD, I came back to reread this three years to the day.

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frania [2007-07-27 15:37:06 +0000 UTC]

Alright, your writing is amazing, stop rubbing it in

(have yet to consume daily cup of warm brown liquid. Sorry for rambling and/or bad grammar)
Actually, what I really loved about this piece, more than all the lovely descriptions and everything, was that you made it seem real, like part of a bigger story. I had trouble believing that I was actually reading something smutty, because it was far too pretty and detailed and good, and it had too much storyline.

In other words, absolutely brill. Your characters always seem like they exist outside of the pages you've written.

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ladyjaida In reply to frania [2007-07-27 19:53:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you SO much. The idea just started as a bit of a toying about/joke with and but then all of a sudden we started to really care about the characters...so it's awesome you did, too!

Aie, yay, so glad you liked it.

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valisis [2007-07-27 11:44:57 +0000 UTC]

waugh somehow I've neglected to +fave this retarded!

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ladyjaida In reply to valisis [2007-07-27 19:52:45 +0000 UTC]

WHATEVER YOU'RE WONDERFUL BANANAHAMMOCK

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Drool-in-terror [2007-07-27 06:42:29 +0000 UTC]

I worship you...

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ladyjaida In reply to Drool-in-terror [2007-07-27 19:52:21 +0000 UTC]

Not worthy, not worthy! <3

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Drool-in-terror In reply to ladyjaida [2007-07-28 01:53:56 +0000 UTC]

Hehe Bastian reminds me of a character of mine... if you ever have the chance, check this out: [link]

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Kiyari [2007-07-27 02:23:51 +0000 UTC]

Why does this not have more favourites. The entire thing was absolutely lovely. The imagery, the careful descriptions of the characters so by the twelfth paragraph or so, I was completely smitten with them both and even the ADJECTIVES used to describe them was very calming to read. It moved at a very... self centered pace, like something comforting. It didn't go too fast or too slowly, which is a nice pace to read at, considering the topic matter. And the metaphors were just . The mental comparisons the two of them made about each other made me absolutely melt. D:

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ladyjaida In reply to Kiyari [2007-07-27 19:51:34 +0000 UTC]

;____; thank you so, so much. This is such incredible wonderful sweet fabulous feedback, I will print it out and keep it with me always. SO glad you enjoyed the read!

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Kiyari In reply to ladyjaida [2007-08-01 07:19:04 +0000 UTC]

Wow! XD;; I had no idea this (not even a) paragraph review was worthy of being printed out~ I really just typed out what came to mind, and it's nothing compared to the story. You're welcome, and thanks for writing such awesome stuff~

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hokuto [2007-07-26 22:44:12 +0000 UTC]

... that was both delicious AND political! I could not approve more. =d

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ladyjaida In reply to hokuto [2007-07-27 19:50:06 +0000 UTC]

Mmmm, aren't politics delicious? They make sex sexier! Or something. At least, so I'd hoped.

Time to flail happily with delight that you liked it. So glad!

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rinamo [2007-07-26 18:36:51 +0000 UTC]

read this on livejournal, and it's just so goregous, and magnificent, and i love both of your writing so much <3 *flail*

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ladyjaida In reply to rinamo [2007-07-27 19:49:31 +0000 UTC]

A million thanks! We're so glad you enjoyed it!

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olukemi [2007-07-26 18:06:00 +0000 UTC]

Like I said before: blows everything out of the water.

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ladyjaida In reply to olukemi [2007-07-27 19:48:49 +0000 UTC]

I thank you! <3 also for the pimping. You are my pimping hero.

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olukemi In reply to ladyjaida [2007-07-27 21:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, can I be the Scarlet Pimpernel? The rockingest pimp what ever pimped.

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boxedlemon [2007-07-26 17:49:43 +0000 UTC]

Wonderfully erotic and well written! Ahh her art and your story... *drool* God why are you both so inspirational?!

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ladyjaida In reply to boxedlemon [2007-07-27 19:43:50 +0000 UTC]

Pssshaw! and I are staring at your gallery right now and getting stomach clenchy and jealous and full of awe.

(Also, uhm, thank you!)

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boxedlemon In reply to ladyjaida [2007-07-28 05:13:01 +0000 UTC]

PFFT lies liiiiiieees! DDx Being on dA makes me feel insignificant compared to all the geniuses here. *hinthint* Ah, I forgot to fav this. *slaps self*

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