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LadyMyrina In reply to DasteRoad [2007-02-14 14:12:00 +0000 UTC]
Hehe thank you for the hugs. Yeah I've always known this is the most important thing but I think now I have to start really believeing it and living it.
It was hard for me to think about or act on this stuff when I was with this guy, and we'd been togetehr since I was 16 which is quite young now that I look at it. So I never really had the chance to like myself, because there was always someone there to do it for me.
But now that hes not here and that all this strange and new stuff is happening I get the feeling I'm starting to actually like myself, because everything around me is falling apart and the only thing I can stop falling apart is myself ^____^
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DasteRoad In reply to LadyMyrina [2007-02-14 23:37:43 +0000 UTC]
everything around me is falling apart and the only thing I can stop falling apart is myself ^____^
You know, I absolutely loved this sentence. It says it all ^^
And I think I can understand at least partially where you're coming from. I'm writing a brief note about it and I'll send it to you shortly, because I prefer to talk about some things eye-to-eye rather than through comments ^^'
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DasteRoad [2007-02-14 13:55:03 +0000 UTC]
I really like the idea behind the drawing and your choice of colours! Also the girls' outfits are both gorgeous, albeit being so different.
If you don't mind a bit of constructive critique, the only thing I would point out are the poses. I don't find them 'wrong' or something like that, I just would have done them differently and this may be a matter of personal taste. I like how the one on the right seems to be sitting there both proudly (chest and head pointing high) and playfully: it's perfectly fitting with her mood, she's clearly happy about her love and she knows it. The one on the left is the one I would have done differently: I like her sad, vacant stare and the little floating broken heart, but her stance is very similar to the "happy girl in pink". I would have slanted her shoulders and back, making her look slightly curled up, to emphasize how she's feeling sad and hurt, instead of pushing her chest forward. This is a bit hard for me to explain without being in front of you with a piece of paper to doodle upon, but I hope it makes some kind of sense
And of course, I hope my point of view was some help, or at least interesting for future pieces and ideas! As I said, this was mainly a matter of personal taste.
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joshead224 [2007-02-14 13:34:29 +0000 UTC]
wow this is really great..i love the split personality idea.. good job *favorites*
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