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LindsaysDrawing [2014-08-18 11:38:08 +0000 UTC]

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Your atwork is beautiful ! You should do the shadows or color for the drawing to be more real.
However, the right eye is bigger than the left eye ^^'
Otherwise I think yoour drawing is quite well, the only thing missing has the coloring to make it even more beautiful and add shadows to do a little more real :3
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Sokomin [2014-08-03 04:46:47 +0000 UTC]

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Hi there! first off, your line qualities are very good (when i mean by good..it's very clear and there are no scribble marks here and there><)
The snout and the mouth proportions seem right and the hair...looking good!
I believe you can add some changes to make it look awesome!!!
Maybe few hair strands (using that clean lineart of yours) will give the hair more of a volume. Also, since the character is turned to a 3/4 view~ the left eye (from my point and not the character^^) doesn't have to look smaller than the right! All you have to do is flatten the left eye and be sure to keep the "size" similar to the right!

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Eaohkan [2014-08-03 05:00:00 +0000 UTC]

Looks really good. You should definitely color this if you haven't already.

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