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Published: 2018-03-12 19:49:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 993; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 0
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...I was pretty happy with how this page turned out, surprisingly enough-! It took me a while to hit my stride it feels;;;;;A-Anyway, yeeeuuuppp.... 8'>;;;
This comic is an AU from my story Iris .
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Comments: 24
Ahhhhh this is super-belated, but thank you very much!!
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every page is better than the previous one...
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Ahhhhhhhh oh gosh thank you so much man!!! ;0;
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Aaah this is dramatic, so that’s why she became agressive with Salim, she doesn’t control it as if it was her own? D:
(Im reacting now I have more time to hehe xD )
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Ahhhhh thank you so much for the lovely deluge of comments, they really made my day-!! >o<
And ahahaha, I mean, I think in all honesty she can control the arm fine from a physical standpoint, but mentally she still has a lot of issues with it!!
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Im glad they did 
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fucked up fucked up fucked uuuuuppppppppp ＼(〇_ｏ)／ AAH!
＼(º □ º l|l)/
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(Sariel can kill anyone she waaaaaanttsssss ;;;;(TTwTT);;;;
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LMAO
ahhh, I'm glad I've got you on her side, yeessss, just where I want youuuuu~ BD
(I'll convert everyone over to this small murderchild, huehuehuehue~)
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ahh the page looks so good ;__; you make everything so expressive
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Aaaaahhhhhhhhhhh thank you so much!!!! I feel like I'm slowly getting better at expressions, though comics-wise I'm still feeling my way~ >w<
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but it grew back, didn't it? honestly jean, you drama queen :')
hhhheck that perspective with the bed and the iv drip looks so fuckin good dude
this whole page looks so fuckin good dude
help me
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LMAO OH MY GOSH GIVE HER A BREAK, she's not like a certain super-fast regenerating lil freaky-dink, it still takes her a while and it bothers her a lot ok!!!!! ....ok yea she's a drama queen SO WHAT
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Ive really been loving this so far yo! And its starting to get super interesting now! can't wait for the next. Ive got to say one thing I think you handled really well is having the blood be in colour whilst the rest of the image is black and white. Like i think you really managed to make it nice and subtle so that it doesn't distract from the scene as a whole yet still rather noticeable! Its the sorta thing I always kinda mess up by just going overboard.
keep it up yo!
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Aaahhhhhhhhh thank you so much man!!!! lmao I feel like I do the red but nothin' else cuz I'm lazy as heck, but I'm still fiddling with how I wanna do comic pages for the real deal soon, since I don't quite like the total grayscale look of the comic pages overall =w=;;;;
Thanks though man!!!
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You know I think the complete grayscale actually really suits this one, but yeah I get what you mean. Like it has a particular tone to it that might not be always what you're going for. But hey I'm always looking forward to any pages you do so go with what you think works best yo! <3
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This is SO intense!! That third panel says absolutely everything. Can't wait for more c:<
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Aaahhhhh thank you so much, I'm so happy to hear that!!!!!! >o<
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Wow! This is great! And poor Jean/Sariel (TT3TT)
I wanna cuddle them, but they'd probably slit my throat {⊙□⊙}
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LMAO
I mean, we've seen what happened every time Salim tried to pat her on the shoulder, it hasn't gone too well for him so far xDDD
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Ooo yeah this is nice.
I want to say the the anatomy is really nice, especially the arm BUT I REALIZED HOW TACKY THAT SEEMS AAAAAaaaaa
The red on white pops especially well here.
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LMAAAOOOOOOO thaaanks maaan, I mean, ngl, I'm kinda happy with how the........... stump came out, LOL;;;
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It's dramatic! It's very effective!
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