showcased [2010-01-18 03:25:18 +0000 UTC]
Ahem, Carrie, once more I have returned to deviantART for a sneaky few minutes to check out what else you've put up. And I am quite pleased...their facial expressions are nicely done and I like how you shade; it's definitely improving. Plus, it's Gintama, how could I not like it.
Now...the lighting on Gintama's back is done well, but I find the shading on their clothes a little odd. I'm not sure where your other light sources are coming from, but it looks like it's coming from the food (as if the food's glowing). I'm not sure if that was your intention, but it's just a note.
You mentioned that his right arm looked a bit stiff, and I agree. A little bend in it or something wouldn't hurt. Also, I don't know if it's just me but his right arm also looks smaller than his left.
Well, other than that, it's an adorable picture. I like it very much.
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