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hnng I want to continue the story! But I have to finish this scene first...
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The pain of the early pages: you have to get through them to be out of the beginning XD
It's cool to see you experimenting with the style though. Do you prefer doing pages by hand like the earlier ones or these digital ones? O.o
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It's painful alright! I think I prefer the style of page 2 the most, mainly because of the detailing. In the future I'll try to merge that with the GBC style. :->
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Oooh, can't wait to see it! o.O
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True dat. I think I'll trade numbers with him next time I play through Johto.
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Extreme circumstances call for extreme measures!
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At least Joey is a sportsman. I can understand why Joy did that, she just wants to see her brother succeed. If that means she has to wear a skimpy outfit, and act like that, then she'll do it, because she loves her brother. It's just that Joey wants to prove he can stand on his own two feet, that brought that plan crashing down.
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This is the kind of analysis that makes storytelling fun :->
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It's just something I do with stories I like. I usually deconstruct them, and see what makes them tick. It's a mutual benefit, because I gain a richer understanding of the story, and I return that favor by helping the writing process with angles, and ideas the writers didn't think of. I've helped a few people improve their stories, by deconstructing, and coming back with ideas that will make their stories run smoother. Whether or not the author uses my ideas, is up to them. I offer the ideas freely, no strings attached, and the author decides whether or not to credit me. So that's what I do. ^^
Also Merry Christmas to you and yours. ^^
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Wait, does this mean Nurse(?) Joy and Lars won't be travel buddies now?
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It would have worked if Joey was as mischievous as her.
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i think i should stop giving her new character traits xD
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Maybe so. XD But, doing it gives a bit of a plot twist. We never see it coming....... I think it'd be cool, in the future, that each time the MC goes to a new pokemon center, each nurse joy has some quirky personality trait.
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We'll see what I can brew together. I already have a plot twist in which I have some struggle adding, so that comes first! (For now, that is x)
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Oooh plot twist!!!!! 
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It will be terrific!
or terrible idk
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Hah hah. xD Well, I think either way, i'll enjoy whatever you write.
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I will never look at Nurse Joy the same way again…
(Good job as always!)
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Lars.
How the hell did you resurrect without a Revive ?
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There's no Nuzlocke rule that says you can't use Revives on yourself
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yeah but where did he find it this early on in the game ?! D:
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