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Nice artwork thou
The 'body flow' or anatomy or whatever you call it is really good
So as the hair
I took an eye for the top, the blouse seems nice and so are the bottom clothing as well
The shoes on the right kind of needs some...I think you kind of missed the heel part
I just noticed that the face (it's really nice actually)
You kind of need to soften the lighter part with a neutral color
I hate to say that you kind of need to fix the right foot because it kind of looks so off...
I wish that my opinion is helpful enough, have a nice day
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Hello! Let's take a look at this beautiful work!
Alright, we'll start off with vision...well, you title says nothing about who she is, and I cant tell, either, by the drawing. There doesn't seem to be any story here (which is totally fine! Don't get me wrong, reference sheets, or just simple sketches of the characters are just as, if not more, important!). So, I think I'll give you vision a 3 star rating. Three for her running pose and her basic actions (I can tell what she is doing pretty easily) and -2 for a little confusion as to who she is. I hope this wasn't to harsh!! I'm really sorry if it was!!!
Now, let's move onto originality. Well, you get a five star rating because, as far as I can tell, this drawngis completely original. I love her design and expression! Wonderful job!
I'm not sure what your drawing techneque was, but let me just say, I love the way you draw! This one is so loose and sketchy, yet it still looks very finished!!!! I love the movement you've managed to capture. She doesn't look frozen, and stuck in one position, but looks as if she is in mid run! Great job!
Now, you impact...I feel no emotions towards the story behind this piece, because I can find none. I do feel like she might be a writter or a scribe of some sort, and that's awesome. So, people can be impacted by the story they create in there mind, inspired by this drawing, but not impacted directly because of it. But, as far as impact goes, it didn't strike any emotions into me directly....so, I think I'm gonna give you a two star rating on that one.
This was hard for me to critique because I feel like lots of these questions (2 out of the 4) are about how much story it shows, what emotions it displays....and not all art is created with a story, or made to make people feel a certain way....so, the only reason I was harsh on the first and the last questions is because they didn't relate to your wonderful drawing.
Anyway, I hope this was a fair critique! Thank you for sharing your wonderful art with all of us!
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