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Very nice piece! I really like the sense of atmosphere - the jungle feels muggy and the air heavy. The lighting coming through the tress in the background works well, and I really like the highlights on the plants in the foreground.
I'm going to start getting picky because I could go on about the nice things in this one for a while - but I do want to give some constructive criticism!
The left leg (our left) leg on the standing figure are a little off, mostly in how the foot is oriented in relation to the knee/leg. The right arm (our right) feels a little stiff, like it's bent the way it is just so we can see it.
The only other thing I notice is that the trees in the background sort of follow the contour of the figure. I know that was probably done so the figure is kept against the light in the background, but I feel the tress follow around him too perfectly. It sort of makes your intent obvious and doesn't look natural.
A great overall work!
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