Comments: 8
Neo-Epsilon [2004-12-17 05:30:27 +0000 UTC]
Very cool. The only thing I can crit is the skirt armor. Doesn't fit very well at all. The rest is very cool, tho I'm still trying to figure out where the guys legs go. >_< (The head area reminds me of a Z'Gok to no end.... it's wierd)
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Legato895 In reply to Neo-Epsilon [2004-12-17 05:36:59 +0000 UTC]
lol, well i tried... i actually was toying with the idea of the cowcather, but i already tried it on the knees and wasn't that happy, oh well, im really happy with how it turned out. anyway, as for the legs (as said in the description of the pencil wip) the mech's legs are structured like a dog or kangaroo, where the foot is elongated and it walks on its toes. the human inside's legs fit in all the way up to the armor's ankle joint.
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Destriarch [2004-12-16 10:55:22 +0000 UTC]
Bloody hell that was fast, I only gave you the brief the other day LOL! It looks great. I agree with Sempai-Tem that a little ornamentation would be cool just to set the style off. I like the idea of a crest, but definately not on the shoulder guard. People might think I'm trying to emulate Games Workshop's Space Marines and that's the last thing I want. On the stomach maybe, or even in the form of a tapestry hanging from the hips or over each shoulder like one of those Jewish scarf things (sorry any Jews reading this, I honestly don't know what they're called, something in Hebrew I think like Yamulkah or somesuch but I just don't speak the language. Oh, and happy Hannukah) but don't worry about that too much if it's a hassle, it looks fantastic. Can't wait to see the inked version.
Ash
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ultimatebadass [2004-12-16 08:53:57 +0000 UTC]
Looks great! Fantastic design with lots of details. With those stripes hanging from his belt he looks like a true warrior!
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Sempai-Tem [2004-12-16 01:03:47 +0000 UTC]
I say don't skip the ornamental designs. I think there should be something of a crest either on the chest or the Shoulder front. (possible where that X on the front is) To be able to see who's who on the battle field. And that crest could be molded not painted. When I think Steampunk. I think of Victorian sensibilities. So you need to be a gentlemen and have your colors/crest readily available.
On the loin skirt yeah that could go. Maybe design the area like those cow catchers that were put on front of steam engines of old.
Also the feet design, I'd go for more angular then rounded and tapered. Even tanks in WW1 were squarish in looks. the front of the foot seems missing, something needed if traveling downhill... even though the weight is pitched to the back. Maybe repeat the cow catcher theme on the front lowwer legs as well so they can kick though battlefield debris.
Just a couple of ideas I'm just kicking around. Hope that helps.
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