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lesseroflindsey — I'll just be honest.
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Published: 2004-06-09 15:49:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 497; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 122
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I could drag something out ---make our sex sound great.but the sex is a chore.
Our eyes avoid contact. We don’t like to think we are sinners.
We turn off the lights now, we can’t even look at each other.
Don’t you feel dirty? Making love to a stranger?
I’ll just be honest. I get more pleasure with the other boys.
I said I do. But I don't.
It’s not something sweet anymore.
I don’t cry anymore.
I don’t love you at all.
I never did.
It’s safe to say I used you.
Comments: 27
Ur a bad bad girl.... oh and cold too.... love it...
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You did a great job with this.....and it's such a touchy topic. You described the feelings perfectly.
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lindsey, wow. i totally missed this in your gallery. i love it. very very nice.
dont forget how much i love you.
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what topic can appeal to people more than sex? so raw and straight forward. oh how i love this.
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yea imma have to agree with ur watchers...this is wonderful. i absolutely loved the last line. and the entire poem just led up to that line so perfectly. its kind of ironic too cuz at the beginning, the person seems like they are mocking the person they had sex with, but then it changed and u felt srry for the narrator (or at least i did) and u thought maybe it was something the other person did to them. but then, at the end, that last line hehe...just it flows back to the beginning. this is great..and im surprised i got a comment like this out. hehe fantastic job as usual ^.^
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aww that was so nice!! thanks for checking the preview out, a lot of people dont mind it. THANKS a ton for the nice comment!
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ps...i loved the preview image..it gave me an idea and the words fit perfectly ^.^
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!! I WANT TO MARRY THIS MASTERPIECE. I, um, understand it... quite well. >.<
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nice..i really like this one good job chick!!!
CKK
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How much blood do I have to lose before you talk?
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i love this, i love the topic. i loooooove writing about usuing people. great poem! must fave!
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and I love you. Thank you so much.
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wow...i feel weird b/c in the strangest way i feel like i can relate to it...I love it!
"Our eyes avoid contact. We don’t like to think we are sinners." that is my favorite line...
very good work Lindsey! very good...
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thank you very much. it means a lot my friend.
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haha, I always get about 4 orgasms when I see a deviation from "lesseroflindsey" hehehe, Anyway, this piece is quite arousing. Thank you
D another INSTANT +fav!
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wow ..being honest about a topic like this is the most daring thing you could do
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wow ..being honest about a topic like this is the most daring thing you could do
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I'm loving the ending line, just beautiful. The bold and the underlining also goes very well with this. I hate to leave you with few words, but there really isn't much else to say other than it's freakin' fabulous. 
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of course i love the topic. sex=delicious....haha well and of course this is fantabulous....youre an amazing writer and i love how you worded this..and wrote it
nice job funny kid
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mmm, sex :]
I don’t cry anymore.
Our eyes avoid contact. We don’t like to think we are sinners.
you know what you're doing, and even if you don't , it all turns out the same: fantastic.
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very, VERY good job. lack of words, favoriting...
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Yes, the talent is there. In any style of writing you choose it is there.
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so basically, what i'm seeing here is: you can write anyway you want an it still turns out lovely? the first line is a great attention getter, the body is wonderful, and the ending line is probably my favorite line in the whole tihng. you've got talent, woman. =]
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