Comments: 8
Balasar [2009-11-14 22:50:28 +0000 UTC]
Like it! well done.
The critique: The proportions and concept is good. it does seem to be fromthe rule book to the specifications noted.
The consistancy of details are even, so you don't have too much in one area or too little in some others, well done.
second note: while not really noticable until I actually looked into it. The shading and light source is very undefined and confusing.
with many inconsistancies.
You have some parts that are very sharp in contrast, giving it a very flat and angular look, as to a more gentle blend of shading, making the surface more round.
Hope this has helped. Luv to see more
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Leviatham In reply to Balasar [2009-11-14 23:13:57 +0000 UTC]
Hallo there,
Thank you so much for the comments.
You're absolutely right... I didn't really think much about the lights at the time of drawing it. At the time I was more into getting the shape and the elements with enough "description" and details so later I can put it in photoshop and "paint" it properly.
The contrast is my inability to control my own pencils... Been drawing only for a year or so, so still a lot to learn. I will make an effort to look into contrast though... it sounds great advice.
Thank you so much!
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Balasar In reply to Leviatham [2009-11-15 01:41:39 +0000 UTC]
sure, no prob.
Maybe you can give me a line art version that I can modify and alter a bit. With your permission of course.
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Leviatham In reply to Balasar [2009-11-16 12:59:03 +0000 UTC]
Always happy to let people do that. I don't have a line version yet, but happy to send you the drawing via email if you prefer.
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Balasar In reply to Leviatham [2009-11-16 19:35:37 +0000 UTC]
I can download it from dA, but thanks, i'll let you know how it goes.
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Leviatham In reply to darkcat6 [2009-11-14 21:47:07 +0000 UTC]
Hey, takes one to know one! You have some amazing stuff in your gallery!
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