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Description I'm thinking about entering this picture into a contest in my camera club. What do you think? Does it work as good as I think it does in B/W or is the version in color [link] better?
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Comments: 45

Stumm47 [2008-03-17 10:23:35 +0000 UTC]

Nice tone and composition but the flower in front needs to be in focus too.

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DarkGoddess28 [2005-05-12 02:57:23 +0000 UTC]

Your title is perfect... so much so that juts reading it and realizing it made me smile - ear to ear

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lexidh In reply to DarkGoddess28 [2005-05-12 10:30:04 +0000 UTC]

I love doing that

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DarkGoddess28 In reply to lexidh [2005-05-12 11:10:16 +0000 UTC]

and I love reading it - a perfect match!

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Boeing747 [2005-02-03 04:50:23 +0000 UTC]

Cool. Nice perspective and blurring.

I do shots of flowers and plants too. Check out my gallery.

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sunnie [2005-01-03 23:11:16 +0000 UTC]

I really like this in b&w, it gives it just the right feeling. And I love the focus you've got, too, with the soft at the front and the sharpness further back, it's unusual and it works so well.

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thedrifterzaz [2004-12-12 05:47:51 +0000 UTC]

i love this kinda picture. great work!

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flesh-was-sweet [2004-12-10 18:05:34 +0000 UTC]

B/W definately - i love them both but this is my favourite!

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laurencerobinchabot [2004-11-28 01:38:08 +0000 UTC]

Love your flower

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Dkelabirath [2004-11-27 12:12:33 +0000 UTC]

Very nice picture - no, stunning picture - go ahead and enter it. I hope you win.

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xxxbrokenxxx [2004-11-17 16:15:12 +0000 UTC]

wonderfull

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yehahatheinsomniac [2004-11-16 19:40:18 +0000 UTC]

nice close up the colors are sharp.

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aneesah [2004-11-16 15:28:36 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, well, tough decision. I think the b&w is slightly better. But both of them are really pretty, so it doesn't matter that much.

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xseption [2004-11-16 15:07:16 +0000 UTC]

what camera club?

I like the b&w better

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rjtortoriello86 [2004-11-15 05:58:27 +0000 UTC]

Great pic, def enter it. You're stuff never ceases to amaze me. Keep up the great work!

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teenie-beanie [2004-11-15 02:33:00 +0000 UTC]

I think I prefer the color, but this one is just as great!

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blueguitar [2004-11-14 19:03:27 +0000 UTC]

I was going to say that I like the color one better, but then when I compared them both next to each other, I do like the b&w one better- it looks more artistic.
I love this photo. that front daisy looks like it's trying to hog the picture.

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BattyBones [2004-11-14 15:20:18 +0000 UTC]

Just beautiful in it's symplicity.

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Lanriente [2004-11-13 19:35:10 +0000 UTC]

you know... i love when you photograph some daisy.... it's so beautiful flower... *^^*

and moreover my name is daisy in french 'marguerite'... hum ...

and to finish your pictures looks so beautiful ^^

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LadyTigerLiLy [2004-11-13 18:03:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I don't know! They are both so beautiful!

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nirel [2004-11-13 10:42:07 +0000 UTC]

The composion of the flowers is great
I think that when we use b/w effect on regular flowers it makes them look special, right?

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jeroenm [2004-11-13 08:56:32 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done! I know how hard B/W is but you did a GREAT job!

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Stuz [2004-11-13 06:52:14 +0000 UTC]

I like the effect of black and white..

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Hikari-An [2004-11-13 03:10:18 +0000 UTC]

I think I like this one best. However, it might add interest if you were to lightly tint the petals in some pale yellow or purple or blue... green... red... Yeah, I think I would prolly tint it. And then if you didn't like the outcome submit it as is right now.

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ShatteredSoul616 [2004-11-13 02:12:21 +0000 UTC]

I think it's much better as B&W! It's more interesting that way.

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oishiiramen [2004-11-12 23:40:21 +0000 UTC]

wonderfully simple. the tones are great, too.

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werol [2004-11-12 23:26:52 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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Argocat8 [2004-11-12 23:12:12 +0000 UTC]

B&W version is a bit more interesting I feel
go with that one!

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sugar-pony [2004-11-12 22:15:14 +0000 UTC]

I really like this, the greyscale one. If it was me though, I would have had the focus on the flower in the foreground. But, art is expressing yourself, so I think this is great the way you have it.

If you do decide to enter the colored one, I'd alter the color a little bit (like use the burn took with exposure at 13% if you had Adobe Photoshop).



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lexidh In reply to sugar-pony [2004-11-13 00:28:42 +0000 UTC]

I don't like that "focus in front, blurr to the back" rule This is very artistic, even for me!

I'm gonna go with the b/w one, the colors really doesn't do anything for the image I want to show off.

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FairyAngelPixie84 [2004-11-12 22:03:26 +0000 UTC]

they both look really nice!

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pichu4850 [2004-11-12 21:37:56 +0000 UTC]

I rather like the b/w version better, because most of the color thats in the Colored Version is the yellow center, so it looks kinda weird. (not to mention it also looks like my breakfast of sunnyside up eggs this morning) soo.. i think ure better with the black And white n_n

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MegOctavius [2004-11-12 21:31:00 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful! You should enter it!

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kaffedyr [2004-11-12 21:10:40 +0000 UTC]

Yes, this really works great as B/W. Good judgement, don't have doubts on it
And I agree with ~Venire 's comment about placing of focus The way you've chosen to "reverse" the composition makes this more outstanding and interesting. Rules are best when broken in a delicate way I love this.
The petals of these flowers seem somehow.. uhm.. the texture is a bit weird (which is good), they almost seem to have ash or dust (or "someone's tried to draw with a pencil on them, and then tried to wipe it away" as I first thought My thoughts live their own life). And this works very good in this non-coloured version of it

You should have good chances with this photo in a contest

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kaffedyr In reply to kaffedyr [2004-11-12 21:14:46 +0000 UTC]

Well, that's me; babbling myself away from the original sentences
"ash or dust ( ... ) spread all over in a thin layer" or somethingblabla Yes, that was what I tried to say

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lexidh In reply to kaffedyr [2004-11-12 22:19:07 +0000 UTC]

Hihi, hett tips, blir det for komplisert; ta det pΓ₯ norsk Ikke sΓ₯ slitsomt da
Men jo, jeg tror nok dette bildet blir med i klubbkonkurransen. Litt for fint til bare en normal "mΓ₯nedens bilde"-sak...

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kaffedyr In reply to lexidh [2004-11-12 22:25:10 +0000 UTC]

Tror du, helt Γ¦rlig, at jeg ikke er istand til Γ₯ skrote ivei pΓ₯ mitt eget morsmΓ₯l ogsΓ₯?
Men, ja, det kan forenkle i noen tilfeller

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lexidh In reply to kaffedyr [2004-11-12 23:20:56 +0000 UTC]

Jeg synes det er lettere Γ₯ skrote pΓ₯ morsmΓ₯let egentlig Skroting gjΓΈr man jo uansett...

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kaffedyr In reply to lexidh [2004-11-12 23:24:01 +0000 UTC]

HΓ¦hΓ¦, du har et poeng. Og skrotingen "hΓΈres" mer meg ut nΓ₯r det foregΓ₯r pΓ₯ norsk

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lexidh In reply to kaffedyr [2004-11-12 23:31:07 +0000 UTC]

Hihi, det kan godt tenkes Jeg har aldri hΓΈrt deg sΓ₯nn irl, ikke pΓ₯ telefon en gang!

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Venire [2004-11-12 20:33:26 +0000 UTC]

This is very, very pretty! I like the B& W version alot better myself. I think it's contest worthy. I like how you break the 'foreground in front, background in back' idea that's used in nearly all conventional photography. Nice work

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poisonedrose3 In reply to Venire [2004-11-14 02:47:20 +0000 UTC]

makes a good point about how the foreground is in the back. Very cool!

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lexidh In reply to Venire [2004-11-12 20:35:44 +0000 UTC]

I like breaking the "rules"

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Venire In reply to lexidh [2004-11-12 20:41:53 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, it can really help to make your work stand out.

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phaselock [2004-11-12 20:31:36 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful picture

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