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LeyuArt — Flamedance - Lina from DOTA 2
Published: 2013-12-24 22:02:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 1286; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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I finally finished the drawing of Lina.Your critic would be much appritiated
I had to make a photo with my handy,
because the picture was to big for my scanner ^^
Tools:
Graphite pencil H-B9
Kneaded eraser
DIN A 2 paper
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Comments: 6
It's a good representation in graphite. What I see that I can give advise on is to maybe either let the edge line on the hands and arms be even softer to imitate the glow. Otherwise you could try going darker on really everything the isn't in the glowing areas. Also, in the face maybe use a little more shading so that the glowing tattoo and the flame hair have even more contrast. this is just an opinion. I really like the way you handled the flames and you kept the proportions, perspective and foreshortening accurate. Graphite can be tough to keep the highlights clean. Nice work!
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My God, its Lina). You delightfully portrayed it. You drew a perfect flame!!
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Nice work with the flames! I sent you a critique. i hope it helps...
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Thank you very much! Every critic is helpful to improve the skills
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You are very welcome! I believe in sharing the skills that I have so that we can all become great together. I've been an artist for a long time and I've found that most of us are very independent. I feel it's important that we support each other, especially that this is a very tough, unpredictable and subjective direction to follow.
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Hi, I find this wonderful. Also the patience you had for the backround is amazing, beautiful piece
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