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Published: 2009-03-20 18:53:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 204; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 5
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Blah. So this is me being bored a few weeks ago and ultimately getting pissed off because I couldn\'t get this to look exactly right. It\'s so \'off\' and so I decided since I\'m oh so frustrated with it, I\'d see what you lovelies had to say about it as far as critique and improvements.There\'s a few little things here and there that I have yet to fix, like the two humps on the top of the bubble thing that I have no ida how they got there. -_-
And I think the truck looks too \'toyish\' or false.
Lord knows.
But comment, good or bad.
Critique helps the artist improve. I enjoy it actually.
An outside eye is what I think I need.
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Comments: 5
OK, First off I 
Im no good at critique, but I would work on the bottom of the bubble,to me it looks too flat.Try and blend it with the asphalt(listen at me
Well I told you Im no good at critique, but I hope it helps
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Ahhh. Thank you for the critique love.
As for the darkening and blending into the asphalt, it's meant to be, or so I envisioned it, to be sitting atop the asphalt. And the wind is swirling around the bottom of it giving it that 'tornado' like feel to it I suppose?
I dont know. I'm not sure about blending it in. That may be weird.
But I'll surely play with it.
And when you say blending yo dont mean 'merge' do you?
Or do you mean 'tone it down' so it's less opaque?
Lord knows. Correct me if I'm perceiving this wrong, lovely. <3 I'll take all the critique I can get.
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Well I told you Im no good at critique
I dont mean merge,maybe tone the bottom lil bit
Im sorry for not really helping
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No! It's great. I really appreciate the input. I'll play with it tonight and see what I get.
Thank you.
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