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Published: 2014-06-19 06:06:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 341; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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I saw my drawing of Rin I made around 9 months ago and decided to draw her again to see how much I've improved!Also, I'm still playing around with digital art to see which works best for me.
Kind constructive feedback will be much appreciated.
Enjoy!
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I think you did an awesome job at the coloring and shading, especially with the skin and the yellow bow on her top. One thing I noticed is that the lines around her stomach are very straight and I think it might look better if you hinted at the hips a little. Of course Rin is only a young teen (if I remember correctly), but I still think that the line from her torso downwards would go outward, even if just a little.
On the other hand, her hands look great and I love her facial expression as well
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Ahh thank you very much! I'm glad that you liked it!
I see.. I'll try to improve more at the anatomy, and i'll keep your suggestion in mind.
Thank you very very much again!
I really appreciate your critique
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You're very welcome, glad I could help out
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