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LightMusashi — Young girl 02
Published: 2006-10-19 13:16:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 454; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 1
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Another one of my D&D girl's younger forms. This one should be cchallenging, even to those who know my characters quite extensively. A hint, her profession is as a maidCritique encouraged! Point out mistakes, be critical, it's the only way I'll ever get better!
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Aww, she looks adorable ^_^.
The lineart seems kind of wobbly though. I do like the fact that you changed the weight of it though.
I assume you did this with pencil 
The pose makes her look kind of worried or sad!
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the pose is supposed to, actually! ^_^
She is one of my characters with a more depressing storyline so her feelings at this point in her life weren't overly happy.
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Poor girl 
What's making her so sad?
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I don't know your characters very well, but get on AIM please? After thinking I GOT IT! Americia?
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yep. you're right. you're wrong! ^_^
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It's pretty nicely done overall, but since you said you'd like a critique, I'd say the skirt reads fairly stiff. It looks almost as if there's a ring of wire under it that's giving it a somewhat odd shape. Perhaps smoothing out the shape of the sides, adding a few more wrinkles, or going for a more natural angle might help it to look a bit better. Also, the placement of her eye or ear seems somewhat awkward. At that angle, we should be seeing a little more of the side of her face, so her eye should either be a bit further to the right, or her jaw line should be a bit longer, making her ear further to the left and the side of her face more pronounced.
Otherwise, I don't see much of anything to pick apart. Sorry if that came off as a bit harsh or anything, as it wasn't meant to. Just trying to help
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