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Lil-Magpie — Eyeless Jack X Intelligent Reader - Chapter 2
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Description        Without a moment of hesitation, I bolted.
       My attacker was as good as paralyzed on the ground, fallen in obvious pain. His muscles were contracting in the residual effect of the electric pulse. He’d be unable to efficiently run for a while. Therefore, I knew I had a much higher chance of escape.
       Also, I gained some new information about my attacker. It seemed he was, indeed, a serial killer or pastime murderer. He had raised some sharp metal object to injure me before I turned around, showing he was likely more intent on killing me than taking advantage of me. Along with this more likely motive, his appearance supported the serial killer theory.
       In the light of my flashlight, I saw that a mask covered his entire face. It was a startling blue color with black eye-holes and waxy looking paint. It was frightening to say the least.
       I filed all this information to the longest-term memory I had, knowing that the man was someone I didn’t want to meet again.
       I ran around a corner, skidding into the light of a populated street. I dashed onto the sidewalk and melded into the thinning throngs of people. I hid within the bodies, taking a longer roundabout route to my apartment.
       As I walked home, I couldn’t stop the jitters that ran up and down my body. I struggled to stay at an even pace and keep the odd grin off my face. It was difficult, but I made it to my door without mishap. I fumbled with my key, struggling to get it into the lock. My lips quirked into a smile as I recalled the alleyway meeting… Nope! Stop right now! That was NOT fun. I could have died! That was super dangerous…
       And it was something that absolutely thrilled me.
       I hadn’t had a moment of that level of adrenaline since… since roller-coasters stopped working on me… Since horror movies stopped scaring me. I hadn’t felt so alive in so very long…
       Oh! And the calculations! The low chance of victory, the underestimation, the tactics! The strategy of it all was exhilarating. I shut the door behind me once I slipped inside, making sure to securely lock the knob and deadbolt. I leaned against the shut door, letting out a shaky breath through upturned lips.
       Now what do I do? I scowled, considering my options.
       I could… call the police? My face scrunched up as I pushed away from the door and headed into the kitchen, dropping my purse on a lone chair. I’m not going to call the police, that would be pointless.
       What was I going to say… ‘hey, there was this guy with a shiny weapon and blue mask… and he tried to kill me in an alley but I shot him with a taser and got away?’ That sounded like a prank, even to me. No one wears a blue mask and goes around killing people besides that fictional prince from Avatar. I took a second to analyze the mask, could it have been the ‘blue spirit’…? Heck, no. That wasn’t some prince – that was a murderer! A mysterious, awesome, and thrilling murderer….
       That almost killed me!
       What a day!
       I could use some spice to my life! Something challenging! I knows I’ve tried other things. Sure, I got into MIT easily but it wasn’t exciting enough. The bar is more exciting than a school. I tried base jumping, sky diving, trapeze walking, deep sea diving, mega chess tournaments, karate challengers… I’ve tried it all! But nothing was as exhilarating as that pursuit… I tried to keep the smile from my face, but it was useless. I liked what happened tonight, no use denying it. I can be quite the adrenaline junkie and that was just… well, almost too much.
       A dull laugh passed through my lips as I made a midnight snack. Tonight’s dreams were going to be good. I can already tell. Or would they be nightmares? Who knows?! I love not knowing for once! I love all the variables that have now entered my life. I wonder if I’ll ever see him again… I took a second to consider the probability of another meeting... It seemed...
       Unlikely.
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Comments: 39

DieDie2 [2018-07-27 16:04:40 +0000 UTC]

I sound very insane. author how did u know I was insane irl

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SpitfireTheWounded [2018-01-21 05:21:03 +0000 UTC]

Mmmm. That good ol’ dark lunch

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Lulana13 [2017-04-11 10:37:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh! And the calculations! The low chance of victory, the underestimation, the tactics! The strategy of it all was exhilarating.
...
Hermione, go home, your drunk

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Lil-Magpie In reply to Lulana13 [2017-04-22 03:34:19 +0000 UTC]

Haha! When I read that last line I actually laughed out loud. I never thought about that.

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Lulana13 In reply to Lil-Magpie [2017-04-22 03:36:27 +0000 UTC]

lol

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ShadowXLoki [2017-02-18 04:32:16 +0000 UTC]

yup im insane (i am)

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GothicLolita527 [2017-01-06 05:03:45 +0000 UTC]

I think reader is secretly kinda insane...

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Lil-Magpie In reply to GothicLolita527 [2017-01-06 05:50:30 +0000 UTC]

Or on the way to it. XD

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Talya-Serket [2016-10-05 12:30:56 +0000 UTC]

Gosh, Reader-chan is like Sherlock...
Frolicking about murder and high-class-cases
 the game is on~

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Lil-Magpie In reply to Talya-Serket [2016-10-06 17:20:59 +0000 UTC]

I never thought of that, but it makes sense!

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Talya-Serket In reply to Lil-Magpie [2016-10-07 05:18:48 +0000 UTC]

It does, right~?

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Lil-Magpie [2016-07-05 14:34:49 +0000 UTC]

The comment below is hidden because it is spam - please disregard, I don't censor comments on my work.

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lumicrystallous [2016-06-23 02:36:26 +0000 UTC]

'unlikely' LET'S HOPE SO

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Lil-Magpie In reply to lumicrystallous [2016-06-23 02:37:10 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Clouisery [2016-01-16 01:29:45 +0000 UTC]

The chance of meeting him again is 'unlikely'?... Guess again. You're 'the one that got away' and no Pasta would EVER stand for that. You just made yourself his new obsession. Have 'fun' with that.

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Lil-Magpie In reply to Clouisery [2016-01-18 22:16:19 +0000 UTC]

Of course!

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Clouisery In reply to Lil-Magpie [2016-01-19 03:09:25 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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XxMySearchingSoulxX [2015-06-25 07:46:34 +0000 UTC]

Do we meet again? O.C asks...

Who knows eheheheheh ;}

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lucy-the-killer123 In reply to XxMySearchingSoulxX [2015-10-29 00:54:00 +0000 UTC]

i love your picture its marshall lee right?

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XxMySearchingSoulxX In reply to lucy-the-killer123 [2015-12-30 04:56:34 +0000 UTC]

My profile pic? Haha no that's my O.C Alexander :3

Someone drew it for me lol

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Lil-Magpie In reply to XxMySearchingSoulxX [2015-06-25 15:08:44 +0000 UTC]

You can't get away that easily. XD

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zeepaarden [2015-06-03 21:34:26 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!!!

And I absolutely love your name and icon.♥

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Lil-Magpie In reply to zeepaarden [2015-06-03 22:23:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Next chapter is up!

And thank you for the complement! I love magpies I am thinking about changing the icon though. It's a picture from Wiki Commons (public domain), but I want to put my own art there if I can.

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zeepaarden In reply to Lil-Magpie [2015-06-04 15:35:03 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! You can also search it up here on DA and edit it a bit for a nice look. (Just a tip)

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shywerido [2015-06-03 01:06:56 +0000 UTC]

Yaaayy!!! The Reader is so awesome in this!!!

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Lil-Magpie In reply to shywerido [2015-06-03 20:24:59 +0000 UTC]


Yay!

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JenTheKiller123 [2015-06-02 23:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic chapter as always~! I'm really excited to see what happens

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Lil-Magpie In reply to JenTheKiller123 [2015-06-03 20:25:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
Next chapter out really soon~~

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mariialai [2015-06-02 21:40:28 +0000 UTC]

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS ♡.♡ and probably you too.

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Lil-Magpie In reply to mariialai [2015-06-03 20:25:47 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks.
More on the way~~

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VeiledIridescence [2015-06-02 21:31:17 +0000 UTC]

~ The only thing to fear, is fear itself. But for some, fear is the most exciting thing they come in contact with.
It may seem crazy to some, if not most, people... But to those who live off of the adrenaline and fear, it's the
only thing keeping them from going completely and utterly insane. ~

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Lil-Magpie In reply to VeiledIridescence [2015-06-03 20:27:48 +0000 UTC]

Exactly!
The only way the plot of this works out is if the reader LOVES this challenge/adrenaline rush. This will be crucial in upcoming chapters~~

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shywerido In reply to VeiledIridescence [2015-06-03 01:06:22 +0000 UTC]

Lol. Phobophobia. XD
(If you dont get it then...Nerd Problems. )
-
Fearing Fear itself is actually a phobia!

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VeiledIridescence In reply to shywerido [2015-06-03 03:54:33 +0000 UTC]

I know, and that's what makes it amusing, hehehe~.
At least it's better then the fear of long words... XD

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KieruThoruAmaya [2015-06-02 19:35:39 +0000 UTC]

*silent fangirlish screams* I absolutely have no interest in E.J whatsoever but I am in love with this already! 

You just keep getting better and better ヽ(*´∀`)ノ

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Lil-Magpie In reply to KieruThoruAmaya [2015-06-03 20:26:15 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'm glad it's still interesting even if you don't care for EJ.

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KieruThoruAmaya In reply to Lil-Magpie [2015-06-03 22:05:34 +0000 UTC]

I'm willing to read all of your work, !
You have so much potential of being a good writer!

I'm certainly enjoying how the reader reacts to danger. Finally, a brave attitude towards a Creepypasta for once * u *

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Lil-Magpie In reply to KieruThoruAmaya [2015-06-03 22:26:56 +0000 UTC]

You're too kind...

And I agree. I was tired of reading stories where the main character stays still like nothing's happening, screams, faints, runs, etc. I wanted to have a reader that is brave and independent, but not a killer. That is the goal~~

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KieruThoruAmaya In reply to Lil-Magpie [2015-06-04 00:33:54 +0000 UTC]

You have succeeded on fulfilling the goal! *bows* Quite intensely as well~
See you in the next chapter ^ u ^

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