TempestWaterdragon [2012-03-04 04:34:13 +0000 UTC]
Yes thank you for uploading this chapter and I thought that the end was sorta funny. What was Lila thinking when she trained with Todd's mom right after she got out of the hospital (yes I do know I am talking about somebody that is in a story). Anyways I will be looking forward to the next chapter the story is about to get a lot more interesting I can just tell.
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LiliacMoon In reply to TempestWaterdragon [2012-03-04 21:07:54 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome! And if you ever wanna be a great writer listen to this: *whispers* The puctuation comes AFTER the parenthese, AND the punctuation should be CORRECT, but you did that first bit, at least. Well, that doesn't really matter, but I will probably finish writing this chapter today. Stay tuned! (Oh no, this is starting to becoe like one of those weirdly narrated animes. Gaspers!)
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