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lilmorbidprincess — Blood
Published: 2003-10-01 15:51:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 4440; Favourites: 160; Downloads: 129
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It runs through my veinsLike liquid fire
Causing so much pain,
Yet bringing such joy
Flowing through my muscular heart
And stright into my thoughtful brain
Giving me life
It is the blood of time
Carrying me out of the past
And propelling me into the unending future.
Comments: 25
We only have 2 minutes to live without air, but breathing resets the clock
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Did you drew the pic for this poem? It's amazing.
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Its a beautiful 'popcorn poem' Great Work XD
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
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i like the beginning but the end seemed to kinda loose rythem
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yeah, this isn't one of my favorites. But it seems to be a big hit with most people, which really perplexes me. lol. Thank you for the comment.
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lol. no problem ^^ sorry for the critic comment tho :/
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Don't be. It's alway welcome.
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lol. ^^ ok thank you ^^
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I liked both of them! There's something haunting about them..... Which I like. I love how the poem ends on a positive note. 
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Thank you. I like this pome alot, because it was so spontanious.
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Love the pic 'beautiful by the way'
Love the poem as well
short but good
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there is so much soul in it! perhaps from the painful insparation? perhaps the undeniable truth liying within? perhaps the powerful visual? wherever the poem got its power it is obvios that you have an amazing talent. I beg that you continue no mater what anyone says!
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I will. And thank you My poetry is my heart and soul, so it makes me happy to know that others love it as much as I do.
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always a plesure. I wish I could say the same but my heart will allways belong to a sertan somone though it herts it will be that way forever more. mayhaps that you would take a look into some of my poems? its more of a beg than a ( ? ) so you can ignor if you like.
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I would be glad to hun.
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Wicked poem and pic. Gotta love the thorns.
And teachers are always concerned when someone writes something macabre. For one, many don't understand the genre well and for two they have to think about the mental faculties of their students. Can't be too crazy. XD
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kinda creepy but ill be compleatly honest with you its kick ass nono bad ass! i love it! <3
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Very nice poem.
LOVE what your inspiration was.
Well, could have been worse. You could have told your teacher that how the idea came about, "got the idea in your class".
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wow
i love
i like the pic to
but i love the poem more!!!!!
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Love the poem. Very out-of-the-box medium you used there
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Thanx. Hope you liked the poem too.
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