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Description My contest entry for ~narutofanclub
Its soo late but ohwell... I wasent really planing on entering, but I had to make an history for my character Lin, for the RP I have with Rere and the contest inspiyerd me.
It was done at OC ((Yes! Fear mouse powere Xx)) Because i have an artblock and it seems i can only draw at OC. 0_0; I worked sooo hard. ~Nat-Dohma 's story and mine are connected ((hers will b on the missing nin contest)) so she helped me out. ;3 ENOUGH of my EVIL babbling!

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Name: Lin

Age: 12

Rank: Gennin

Personality: Childish. Turns out to be very hyper when she gets to know you.
Very caring and sensitive but always manages to keep her spirits high
even when facing the worst. Likes to help and can be very stuborn and determained.

History:
Half a millenia ago in Makai (Demons world) there lived 3 of the most terrifing demons the underworld has ever seen; they were the Usako Youkai (Rabbit Cat Demon), the Dragon Youkai and the Coyote Youkai. They were called "The Demoniaca Trinity". Makai lost many powerfull demon clans to the three demons just for theyr own amusement. It was one of the most terrible Eras for Makai.
As they became more powerfull, they were able to find theyr way in to the Ningenkai (Human world). Just Like in Makai, many humans lost theyr families and many clans were extinct, many secrets gone with them (jutsus, etc.). The ningens (humans) decided to seek help from the 5 powerfull mages, whom at that time were like the Hokages. So they challenged the 3 demons to a duel on the waste lands. The Demons had come to them, having nothing better to do, and thought that this would be amusing. After a while of fighting the Demons had destroyed 2 of the 5 mages. There were an equal of 3 mages left (2 girls and one boy).
The 3 mages decided to seal them with Hakke Fuuin Shiki to seal the demons inside themselfs, so then, theyll commite suicide and there will be no more threat since the demons will die with them. But alas, knowing this, the demons made a counter spell. The "Renacer spell", a spell that allows you to be reborn on a human vessel after you die. Bouth theyr Jutsus got mixed which created a Fusion of some sort. After that there was a huge explotion. Once all the smoke cleared out there was no trace of neither the demons, nore mages.
The ningens where very confused but where happy the demons where no more.
After half a millenia, the story became leyend. They used it has a fairy tale for the children.
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One day at the snow village, a lady gave birth to triplets. Her husband was a missing nin and since they didn't want him to be caught they decided to lived on a snowy mounatin a bit far from the village itself, but close enough to go walking and do some shopping ( Or steal food 8D). Her triplets (1 boy and 2 girls) had marks on theyr foreheads. Each had a diferent mark and diferent animal parts. They decided to keep them a secret but one day when she was shopping, she was followed by one of the villagers. He found out about the strange babies and that her husband was a missing nin. So they waited until they were asleep and the villagers burnt theyr house. The mother escaped wiht one baby and the Father escaped with the other two. She thought the father had died along with her other two babies and he thought she had died aswell. She fled to Konoha while he fled to the sand.
In Konoha when Lin, the child the mother had taken with her, was eight her Mother got ill and passed away shortly after.
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Since then Lin has lived alone. She is often mistaken for a very dengerous green haired missing nin from the sands by anbu.
At the age of 12 she meets Mago, a runaway Kazekage from the Oni village. Mago is searshing for the one who killed her father, who is the green haired assasin. Lin teams up with her in order to find the guy that everyone confuses her with...
8D the end..... for now... XD


Likes: To fool around, food, her bird called "sasuke" and the moronic monk Mago. XD

Dislikes: Anbu (because they always seem to mistake her for her missing nin borther), squirls, lies,
cold poeple and the huge smile from the ramen bar lady.

Weopon of choice: Kunais.

Jutsu skills:
1) Katon Ryuuka no jutsu- Spits Fire.
2) Katon Karyuu Endan- Spits fire in form of a dragon.
3) Katon hausenka- Spits a lot of fire balls.(needs to perfect)
4) Katon Gouka Kyuu- Like the first, but its much more powerful-er(needs to perfect)
5) Katon Silver Fire No Jutsu- Original Jutsu of the Dragon Youkai. Calls upon the spirits of Silver Fire Youkai to help her in battle.
6) Kunai de hielo no jutsu- Concentrates Chakra on her hands making kunais of ice.

Future Dreams,Hopes or Goals: To Find out who is this misteryius missing nin they confuse her with and learn more about her past.

Extra: She is the dragon youkai of the "demoniaca trinity". Has dragon traits (tails, feet, great abilyti to use fire). Has a Symbol on her forhead from the dragon youkai. Anbu mistake her for her brother, a missing nin of the sands. Passes her time at the ramen bar with Mago.
"Quote: Did the Anbu send you? "

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END
Sorry it was so long! But im sure it is interesting. Ahwell..
Lin © me
Mago (( mentioned in the history )) © ~ buzzedbunny
Story © me and ~Nat-Dohma

EDIT: It's not Hokage, it's runaway Kazekage. The Club corrected me. Hokages are only for the Leaf Village. Thank you to them very much. ^^
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Comments: 25

swordbunny4486 [2007-09-07 16:33:00 +0000 UTC]

cool

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dx-sz [2004-08-31 22:14:27 +0000 UTC]

wow o_o i love the scroll thing, and how 3d it is. his pose rocks XD the background is so pretty too

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Lin-Niccals In reply to dx-sz [2004-08-31 22:24:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you so mucho! :3

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dark-mermaid [2004-08-18 22:17:21 +0000 UTC]

WOAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! duuuuuuuude.... Gotta read it!

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ennia [2004-07-31 03:42:37 +0000 UTC]

She's scary. -_-'' It's her tail...

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Lin-Niccals In reply to ennia [2004-07-31 14:55:32 +0000 UTC]

Well miss, like it says in the description, shes half dragon. So the tails have to stay . And the reason she looks scary is probably 'cause she's in a fighting pose.
Thank you for the comment, but it couldv been more productive.
-_-;

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ennia In reply to Lin-Niccals [2004-08-02 09:48:30 +0000 UTC]

Don't you 'miss' me, I've been on Earth a few more years than you youngster. Hmmm... productive comment eh? I get all sorts of non-productive comments so i'm just passing the love on.

But anyway, it's a great pose, you've drawn the hands very well. My constructive criticism is that the positioning of the scroll kinda spoils the composition. It takes the focus away from your character and cuts the image in half when it shouldn't. Composition works when your eye flows around an image without being distracted by something that isn't central to the image. The scroll flowing behind your character first and coming out the same way you have it might be a possibility.

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Lin-Niccals In reply to ennia [2004-08-02 21:18:39 +0000 UTC]

When i sayd 'miss' I ment it in a polite way. I didn't mean to offend you.
And -this- comment of yours is the best one yet. I just kind of felt unsulted with the other one. And I'm sorry for what I sayd about your other comment, 'cause even if it hurt me, I didn't have to be so rude. My apologies. u.u

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ennia In reply to Lin-Niccals [2004-08-05 07:20:25 +0000 UTC]

I can't figure out what you're hurt about but um..sorry? Don't worry, wasn't offended about the miss. It was kinda a joke actually. Got over it which is why i gave you that feedback. Glad you apprieciated it.

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nniccals [2004-07-29 13:41:16 +0000 UTC]

Excellent job! I loved the stained glass details, and the pose! Good luck on the contest, Lin, it's really a beautiful story!

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Lin-Niccals In reply to nniccals [2004-07-29 21:27:47 +0000 UTC]

thank u very mucho nanciness!

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alinka [2004-07-28 23:49:43 +0000 UTC]

AHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH PERFEECT! *__*

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yaeya [2004-07-28 04:36:35 +0000 UTC]

What an original idea for a character!!!!!!!! You should join the club!!!!!!!!

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shiftymoof [2004-07-27 23:50:33 +0000 UTC]

Lin... this is so FREAKIN' amazing I choked on my drink. I simply love the story you have for your character! And as for the picture, it's just....excellent! The pose...the colouring! So admirable!

Come to think of it, I need to work on a story for my chara... I wanted to enter this contest, but I don't think I'd make it like...into the club in time in order to enter. *dang* xD

Again, an excellent job! I envy thy OC skeelz.

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stephtusspot [2004-07-27 23:01:21 +0000 UTC]

OMG thet's awesome X3 Love teh pose and the colours and the background and... I'm gunna fav eet X3

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Nat-Dohma [2004-07-27 16:54:51 +0000 UTC]

woot Linyness! I love our story! and the picture IS KICK ASS! I hope yew get to win SUMTHING atleast. The manangers sayd its not the most preetty ones that win.. its the originality and the story
i just hope that the club memebrs dont vote for "how preetty THE PICTURE IS" .. cuz i can belive the manangers wouldnt do that but.. im just not sure about the members... .. maybe im just paranoid XD....
anyways.. good luck!

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Neko--o-O [2004-07-27 16:54:46 +0000 UTC]

Wow awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The story and everything!!!

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xRed-thunderDragoNx [2004-07-27 16:33:29 +0000 UTC]

wow! great work!! u should make this your deviantID!

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anubis-x [2004-07-27 15:48:18 +0000 UTC]

kick ass work Lin! awesome char development and bitchin work on the art as well! :favlove:

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Candy2021 [2004-07-27 10:15:23 +0000 UTC]

woooah this kicks butt lin!!!!! i LOVE the pose and the deatils and EVERYTHING!! this ROCKS!!! i wanted to join but there requirements ta joins are so complex 9.6.... anyways this ROCKS!!!!

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Nat-Dohma In reply to Candy2021 [2004-07-27 16:44:24 +0000 UTC]

well... all yew have to do is.. send a not wanting "to join" ^^
tell them in wich village you wish to be. (sumhow i can imagine yew eather in the sound or the Oni village xD
but thas just me LOL).... aniways then you tell the reasons why you like naruto.... even if you just started reading, they still let yew in ^^...

hope that helps

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TheHappyLandfill [2004-07-27 08:33:32 +0000 UTC]

bwhahaha silly Ramen Hord- anyway waaaahhh one of your likes is me! I like yah toooo kiddo I must fav Lin this is a awesome character design <3 ^_^

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Guroobi [2004-07-27 08:06:11 +0000 UTC]

ow gosh, what a story n.n but damn, you drew that with mouse?! @_@ that's amazing!

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Nyai-Neko [2004-07-27 06:33:40 +0000 UTC]

Oooo, wow!! I loves this! xD Very nice pose and coloring an and everything! ^^

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Lin-Niccals [2004-07-27 05:29:43 +0000 UTC]

FULL VIEW

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