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allycat265 [2012-05-12 18:11:53 +0000 UTC]
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I love this artwork. However, there are a few things that are misplaced. But that's what makes us human- right?
Anyway, the hooves on the Gorgon's body should sink in a little bit more, rather than floating atop it. I know you were going for a snake-like appearance, but snakes are soft. Hooves are hard, therefore the hoof would sink in a little bit more. Not trying to be too harsh, just being truthful.
The blood in the tail sunk in, but there should probably be a pool by the base so it makes sense that the tail has blood in it. However, I like the way that it jumped up.
I love the eye and face, but the muzzle might need a little bit more transition, for it goes from grey to dark brown. Or it might be a bloodstain and I misinterpreted.
I love the technique of the wings, it is lovely! However, the blood wouldn't droop off of it, it would drip. Not a ruiner, but it makes the piece look a little less realistic. The shading technique you used is lovely and worked quite well.
The Gorgon was split rather effectively in half, ad I love the snakes coming out of the stomach. However, as I stated earlier, the snakey part needs to be a little 'softer' so that the hoof can sink in.
The raised leg on Pegasus looks a little awkward. The knee needs to be a little bit larger, and the hock a little smaller. However, it still looks great.
The fire seems to be climbing from the top of its cage, which really makes it look strange. I'd suggest adding a tinge of blue inside the cage and trying to get the fire to emanate from there.
All in all, this is a lovely piece, with much imagination and potential. The bloodstains on the floor ar every realistic, and it looks almost as if the Gorgon is having her last spasm before death (might that be the reason for the hooves not sinking in?). I love the background and characters in this piece, good job.
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JaeDub003 In reply to allycat265 [2012-08-23 08:05:40 +0000 UTC]
I think that what is clinging on the Pegasus is connective tissues, shredded muscles, & gore laced tendons, maybe even entrails. The decapitation would have had the Gorgon exsanginate, leaving only the still blood within the creatures body remaining, enough to smear onto a birthing miracle as is shown on Pegasus, but the design on the gory bits looks more fleshy than just some blood splatter. In the event I am misinterpreting the illustration, we could also be catching all this in mid motion before the winged coast's wings completely spread out with force & it rears back with a nigh & winny, flinging the Medusa mess about.
Either way, I wouldn't think the artist just simply overlooked the obvious way blood acts considering how every other piece of the composition shows great understanding of the subject matter... I am voting the artist illustrated exactly what they had intended & you didn't look into it hard enough before giving the critique. I maybe wrong, but I doubt it.
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LindaLisa In reply to Ferkahhan [2009-07-30 19:19:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for this wonderful crit! I am very proud of this too. I am shocked how far it has come from the first WIPs ^^
This means alot ...thank you again sweetheart!!
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MelanippeArt [2020-03-26 17:56:24 +0000 UTC]
I remember seeing this years ago and loving it. This is one of the most incredible artistic visual representations of Pegasus's origin story I've ever seen. Truly magnificent work!Β Β Β Β Β
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Dasneezequeen [2019-02-18 04:02:57 +0000 UTC]
I fell in love it the moment I saw it!
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DesenhoExperiment [2018-12-19 00:24:53 +0000 UTC]
At this moment you realize that Greek mythologyΒ is a lot weirder than you originally thought it would be
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awesomestarz [2016-01-28 19:26:14 +0000 UTC]
I t looks like it's crying...or is that just a vein in its face?
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FALLOUTDOG3 [2015-10-29 05:14:01 +0000 UTC]
how the fuck does that work!
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Brunyan [2015-07-04 16:37:10 +0000 UTC]
Amazing!!Β I love it!
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Wulfsista [2014-06-18 10:34:08 +0000 UTC]
This is totaly AWESOME!!!
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JohnPiper64 [2014-05-04 02:27:31 +0000 UTC]
This is true to the greek mythology stories. Nicely done.
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TerriClaire [2014-03-03 00:50:40 +0000 UTC]
This is spectacular! A wonderful capture of a moment in mythology. Is it still available for download?Β
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clover84 [2013-11-12 18:54:33 +0000 UTC]
awesome *__*
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Kumabee [2013-07-25 19:54:36 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing! I think the creators of the myth (were they to admit it) would even be proud that they spawned this. It's really fantastic and has made me want to look further into some of the mythology.
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Fb-PHE13 [2013-05-12 07:45:59 +0000 UTC]
That is amazing! Great work on that. Breathtaking and very stunning.
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jynxwolfe [2013-03-02 14:45:01 +0000 UTC]
This is.... Gosh, I have no words. This is simply astounding.
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bear48 [2013-02-28 01:34:01 +0000 UTC]
sweet job
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spinofsparkle [2013-01-09 23:17:11 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh! This is awesome! Well done!
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TheTundraEskimo [2013-01-05 07:36:12 +0000 UTC]
Nasty yet very cool... I LOVE IT.
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xXPUDDINGCUPXx [2012-12-30 04:05:20 +0000 UTC]
nice pic it sucks that everyone forgets his brother that was born at the same time
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xVentusXCrytsalx [2012-12-26 17:17:04 +0000 UTC]
THIS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!<33
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MAYGONLUVSKITTENSLU [2012-12-23 00:45:25 +0000 UTC]
Every detailed and epic.... O ^ O
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pegadron123 [2012-12-21 18:43:44 +0000 UTC]
awsome love it
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ParisianBelle [2012-12-19 02:13:00 +0000 UTC]
Fabulous! Really captures Pegasus's beauty while letting the ferocity of its birth (that is often hidden) show as well. Lovely piece, very tastefully done.
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AshenNightingale [2012-10-22 00:50:33 +0000 UTC]
So beautiful. And accurate, too! So many people don't get the birth of pegasus.
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Aurora8911 [2012-10-14 22:21:08 +0000 UTC]
such a beautifull artwork...majestic textures...so realistic...
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XyndnyAlpha [2012-09-29 21:50:51 +0000 UTC]
that is too creepy, so creepy it awesome...
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Fuckthisaishit [2012-09-04 16:34:39 +0000 UTC]
Makes you wonder how she went around with a giant horse with wings in her neck this entire time.
"Hmmm....My throat is feeling a bit...horse today....hhrrmmm"
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Dragonluvr1 [2012-08-19 23:25:08 +0000 UTC]
COOL!!!!
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wolfgirl-el [2012-08-03 04:40:33 +0000 UTC]
Amazing!
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seraphima285 [2012-07-26 17:40:42 +0000 UTC]
Wow.this is beautiful
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felipewii1 [2012-07-26 17:20:01 +0000 UTC]
I can't speak... absolutely amazing...
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DragonKeeper77 [2012-07-10 23:26:23 +0000 UTC]
incredible this is a beautiful piece of art
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Forbidden-Dragon13 [2012-06-25 00:23:44 +0000 UTC]
the greek in me approves very much so..
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Jumatatu [2012-06-15 02:12:55 +0000 UTC]
Hey, I love this horse so much!
So, I was wondering if you let me reference the pose and wings? I'd credit you, of course.
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