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Published: 2017-12-03 07:32:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 740; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 5
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Sandra Lionheart is the main character of my web comic Sandra's Day.Sandra's Day is a monthly furry webcomic that tells the adventures of Sandra Lionheart and her friends Sarah und Cora Fox.
Sandra's Day is the coninuation of the comic A Normal Life and will include stories off different types, mystery, fantasy, or even something with a touch of eroticism.
Read Sandra's Day on:
www.brandtstory.ch/
lionclaw1.deviantart.com/
tapas.io/series/Sandras-Day
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Hello there!!
This is Lofty from ProjectComment
I would like to give you some advice regarding this illustration.
To start of, the lines are extremely clean and the hatching give the overall piece a certain attractive look. aesthetic.
The pose you used looks very natural and casual and i can see that you most likely drew the gesture line or line of action before you even started- i can be wrong but that's what it looks like to me-
From the head to the midsection you did a phenomenal job, with the face, expression, the wrinkles in the clothes and looks extremely fighting for a web comic just like you intend.
However i noticed that the legs looked a little unproportional to the body not the size but the length of the knee that is up it seems to be more flat and carried out more than it would be in real life, but this could be because she is a lioness.
Other than that looking a little bit off i noticed that all of the other perportions look fine other than that.
This is such a great frame though! its perfect for the intent you are using it for and you really taught me something with the hatching so i can use it for my own comic!
The moment she is in looks very tender and and very human like, that i am sure others reading your comic will also really appreciate the natural look in the characters, this way they actually forget they are seeing drawings made by someone and they get totally submersed in the story.
This kind of reminded me of the furry comic Blacksad the furry comic about the lawyer dude? (its been a long time). But yeah, just continue what you are doing because you are on your way to something really cool
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Thanks for the fair commend.
Your right, I draw all the hidden/gesture lines and I draw her first naked before I add the clothes.
The Manga "king of thorns" is also a very good example for hatching.
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I love your lineart, it's very smooth! I dropped by to read your comic. I really like it so far! You have some really unique poses! Can't wait to see more.
P.S. If you're ever up for an art trade, give me a holler! ^_^
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I'm glad to hear that you like my comic so far =^_^=
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Lovely pose and great line work!
Some anatomy bits though - how long is her neck? If she just tilted her head forward to read, the chin would be near the collarbone. If she tilted forward at the shoulder to read, that would rotate and compress the chest.
Straight back == chin down. Back curved == space under chin. The small deltoid adds to my confusion.
Trivia perhaps, but something to polish. Good stuff!
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