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lishtar — Commission - Thanatos
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Published: 2009-04-25 09:56:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 8505; Favourites: 475; Downloads: 42
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Commission for sorry for the lateness TwTThe next commission shall be done soon [I hope]
This is my OC, Valkyrie, killer prostitute on my original series, Copela. Since ~Ciputh ask girl with mysterious pheromone and cyan-turqiose colors. I used my own OC
But the result isn't same like The Depth [link]
Sorry~~~ I forgot the color pallete and the way I do that pic..
hope you still satisfied~
No need to pointing the oddness on the body..I know it orz
Character and art - =lishtar
Texture - [link]
SAI 1.01 + Photoshop for mixing texture
Around 4 hours
Listening to
The Used - yesterday's feeling
The Verve - Catching The Butterfly
Edit
Fixing the hand...
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Comments: 49
First of all gw mau kasi tau kalo yang paling caught my attention itu idungnya...
segimanapun kliatan dari angle yang begini idungnya gak mungkin sepanjang itu...mungkin mank style loe...tapi ini bagi gw kelewat aneh...kurang natural aja gituh...bikin mukanya kliatan agak2 warped off gituh...bayangin dhe...muka yang stretched down...gitu lah kurang lebih...
kedua...jarinya kepanjangan...dengan tangan sekurus ituh bukannya aneh kalo jarinya sepanjang itu...loe lagi banyak pikiran yah?tapi yaaah...gw ngerti lah loe lagi ngadepin ujian en banyak tugas yah...
truuuss...badannya...cekiiing banget...gak imbang ama dadanya yang gede...kesannya keak a stick with a pair of big breast...dan collarbonenya...gak salah tuh collarbone bisa nyampe situh?
bayangannya kejauhan lish...coba dhe dinaikin itu bayangan collarbonenya..
intinya...anatomi loe...sorry to say...rada kacau disini...beda banget ama karya loe yang sebelumnya...
banyak pikiran emank bisa jadi salah satu faktor buat ini seh...coba dhe laen kali ntar loe bikin gambar yang sama pas lagi keadaan loe tenang,dan bandingin ama yang ini...pasti loe bakal tau sendiri bedanya^^
kalo untuk soal teknik pewarnaan ama layoutnya gw gak ada masalah...as usual lish koq^^
keep it up yah^^
mahapkan sayah kalu kata2 sayah nyinggung lish...>👍: 0 ⏩: 1
huaaaaaa
makasih banget udah kasi kritik. dan emang sedang bener2 butuh.
Masalah proporsi badan [bukan ngelak si...]
lish lagi bereksperimen ma gaya gambar baru, yaa zerucchi taw la kek Clamp, punya gaya buat XXXholic ma Cardcaptor Sakura, walo agak sama, tapi ada eksploitas di bentuk tubuh, etc
mungkin perubahannya terlalu ekstreme ya...jadi lish agak susah nempatin dimana kudu semi realis, ato yang udah bener2 experimen
masalah faktor tugas, dan banyak pikiran, lish kira itu udah jadi alasan basi kalo kita tetep menghindar dari kritik, jadi lish tetep nekat tempel gambar ni
seneng juga dapet masukan2 bagus soal anatomy
anyway Thanks alot for the advise~
*chu*
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I really do think this piece is nice. The soft shades of blue and green really give it a nice touch. The fact that you shaded her skin with similar colours really brings it together, especially with the hair being the same colour. So, I really believed you picked your colours wisely and balanced everything out (Even the red blood finds company in the red ribbon abou her neck).
I believe that the posing, being sideways and offset from centre really gives it some character as well, so that it isn't as plain as it could be considering it is a simple position.
There are only a few things about this that catch my eye in a negative way. The first for me, and the most distracting, is the nose. I like how you draw noses, however, something about the way this one makes me feel like it's off, and that it doesn't really match the positioning of her face. I feel like it should start more towards the middle near her eyebrow.
The only other thing that is distracting (And this could just be me) is her chest. It seems a little too perky considering the fact that her tank straps are floating off of her shoulders. It makes it seem less soft and realistic in comparison to a real human body.
However, these are only minor things that caught my attention, and I think that the overall piece flows well and has great style. Keep up the good work! c:
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you can see your soul in ur art. another lovely one
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nice idea with the red tape in the neck....[link]
Love it
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GAWD LISH!
Your characters are always so ethereal and beautiful!
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I like it very much. Love the pale skin in contrast with the reds
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Hyuuuunngg~
*mencelos iri*
Gambarin bummie dong *geplaked*
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So beautiful x__X" I envy your ability to create such things
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I love >_
God it's been so long side we've talked LOL
You are amazing
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uoh lishtaaaaaaaaar XDDD
makin keren aja ni X3
ekspresinya manis bgt ^_^
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What a beautiful coloring... Blue and red ... very impressive ^^
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o.O
gapapa Lish..
Ni juga dh asik.Ada unsur agak psycho agi..
manteph...
btw,maksud Lish,badannya yg agak aneh tu badannya tah??? kurusan gtu??? wkwkwkwkkwk.not big deal lah.
Like it
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Too skinny yak?
Ntar aku kasi filenya -bawao flashdisk ya- juga aq print in
Hahaha Tapi awal mei ya..udah bokek T.T
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awal mei?? ok gpp ^^
hadiah yg dulu di print juga ga?? 
kapan ketemunya??? buat flazdiznya mksudnya..
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Ooh... This makes my stomache ..or hand feels wierd because of the bleeding hand? but It so pretty >_<
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Uwaah the crimson red against all the white and her skin is just beautiful, it stands out so much! 
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Hyaaaah synnie XDD
Art-trade pweaseee
-slapped
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Hum.. she seems a bit too skinny and there's something off with the face. 
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Its sooo beautiful!! I love the slight evil in her eyes as she looks at her blood covered hand. The shading is amazing as well!
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It a wonderful work. The bridge of the nose between the eyes is too high and the collar bone is too deep. I would have written a detailed critique, but I don't pay for my account. However you coloring is wonderful. Beautiful use of cold colors to make the red of the ribbon and the blood stand out. Over all good work.
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aku udah sangat sinting disini TwT
/bakar tugas2
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overall it's a good painting, but there are definitely some anatomy issues. the nose is angled incorrectly and the hands start out ok, but then the fingers get too big.
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wih keyennn xD ano, knp judulnyamlh thanatos lish?
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thanatos itu..apa ya???
keknya berbau2 maut gitu...
ya ndak si XD~ *geplaked*
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NYUUUUUUUUUUUUU warna darahnya
pucat kulitnya
keren boooo
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Gorgeous pictures. I love the contrast of the red and blue.
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