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puddenhead86wmrg [2013-08-04 03:07:37 +0000 UTC]
This is really beautiful. You are very talented.
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ArcticIceWolf [2012-11-08 20:06:28 +0000 UTC]
TheyΒ΄re so cute! The black one with the stick reminds me of Fell from The Sight when he was a puppy...
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ArcticIceWolf In reply to LittleForestWolf [2012-11-10 17:01:14 +0000 UTC]
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! *excited squeal*
Another Clement-Davies fan!
Did you read Fire Bringer and Fell as well? (I know Fire Bringer is not a wolf book, but itΒ΄s also EPIC! Best book about deer known to me...)
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LittleForestWolf In reply to ArcticIceWolf [2012-11-11 02:07:34 +0000 UTC]
I did! Loved it! Have you read "The Telling Pool" by him as well? Not my favorite but still good.
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ArcticIceWolf In reply to LittleForestWolf [2012-11-11 03:33:21 +0000 UTC]
Telling Pool? Not yet.....
I recently made a drawing of Liam from Fire Bringer (together with Rannoch still as a fawn, when he had his back leg broken) I will upload it soon on my account!
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ArcticIceWolf In reply to LittleForestWolf [2012-11-11 17:21:37 +0000 UTC]
Hope I can scqn & upload it tomorrow....
I havenΒ΄t seen any drawings of Liam on DA, though there are some Fire Bringer artworks- thats why I drew him!
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LittleForestWolf In reply to Haltaar [2011-12-22 03:09:48 +0000 UTC]
I did, you can view them in my gallery.
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NukilikUlva [2011-12-12 01:25:36 +0000 UTC]
This is so cute it looks like my main character and her two silings as pups :3
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Onyxmaymay [2011-12-09 01:19:05 +0000 UTC]
Not a fail!
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FantasticFennec [2011-12-04 19:09:12 +0000 UTC]
This is brilliant, I love it. Please do upload the close ups of the pups, I'd love to see that. Beautiful picture.
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StrawberryR [2011-11-12 17:23:28 +0000 UTC]
How pretty. :3
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Werewolfling [2011-11-12 06:44:11 +0000 UTC]
Squee! I love the grey one! I want to huggle his cute butt!
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lemurkat [2011-10-16 09:30:57 +0000 UTC]
It's a lovely piece, with a few anatomical flaws that have mostly been pointed out already. Although I think the brown and tan wolf pup's right front leg is positioned a little too far forward.
One thing you might like to consider if you did another piece is to put the pups in quite different poses. They've all got the two paws up, two paws down, pose, which looks a bit too uniform. I would probably have made one jumping - probably the black one, and looking back at his siblings. One of the things I learned in an "illustrating children's book" lecture was that the viewer's eye automatically follows the illustrated characters lines of sight - and therefore you need to keep their gaze within the page - by not having them stare off the edge.
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amirila [2011-10-10 07:49:37 +0000 UTC]
the back right leg on the grey wolf seems a little off in how it is placed in comparession with the rest of that pup. But other then that it looks really awsome. I specialy like how you did the fur on the third wolf (the brown one).
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airelementdragon [2011-10-10 07:48:00 +0000 UTC]
cute!! it's really nice
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opal-fire [2011-10-10 01:16:38 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, okay then! The black pup looks good, especially the mouth and legs, but there is something off with proportion of the face... I can't quite put my finger on it. The eye looks placed wrong, but then again it may look that way due to the placement of the ears or something. The only other thing is the tail, which should probably be placed lower.
The white pup's only problem, as far as I can see, is the eye. This time I'm quite certain that it should be placed lower, and maybe even more forward. But the rest of him looks great.
As for the brown and tan pup, you got his eye really well. But there is a problem with the muzzle. I think all you need to do is make the lip begin higher, so that it sort of tapers from the nose. It's kind of hard to explain, but hopefully you'll get what I'm saying if you look at a picture (like this: [link] )
Thank you for being brave and letting me critique! I hope that this can help you in some way.
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LittleForestWolf In reply to opal-fire [2011-10-10 01:27:59 +0000 UTC]
I tried to make the black pup's head turn toward the viewer, maybe that is why it looks weird. I agree with the grey pup, I think the eye should be bigger too.
Thanks for the suggestions! If I ever get around to editing it I will definitely take this into consideration.
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AspendingKills [2011-10-08 23:39:33 +0000 UTC]
Awesome, I LOVE the style!
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LittleForestWolf In reply to AspendingKills [2011-10-09 13:06:36 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I think my painting style is finally starting to look uniform.
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Aiohon12 [2011-10-08 23:31:12 +0000 UTC]
amazing pic
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LittleForestWolf In reply to tekah [2011-10-08 22:55:05 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! All (well most) puppies are cute.
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IamETOH [2011-10-08 22:27:55 +0000 UTC]
nice birch trees
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LittleForestWolf In reply to IamETOH [2011-10-08 22:32:58 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! They are my favorite part of the painting.
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