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Published: 2018-03-21 01:29:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 156624; Favourites: 1193; Downloads: 0
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HAPPY SPRING!! (even it still feels like winter here in Canada...)Welp, the waiting is over, and here you go!!
Leave down the comments below and hope you enjoy! The next page will be the first page of "Children's Play" Issue 2!! At this pace, I think the update could become regular enough to have a new page once a week! ^w^
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Story, art, OCs (Kaze, Sapphire, Darren, Benonic etc.), and Cosium Universe by ME
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This page looks a lot like one the pros were cranking out for Archie the last couple of years. Now my own art is not this good, but there are few that would concern me if I made this.
!. You nicely put shadows on every thing, but it seems in a few places, such the panel where Darren addresses the other as Trails stands beside him, you're working too hard to ensure there's a shadow on everything that it makes me not entirely sure where the light source is coming from.
2. You framing on the second page detracts from the overall layout of the page. Framing is something I obsess on, even though much of my art needs lots of work. But in the mid panels of the page, you use a big framing bar just where it would have sufficed to let that third panel sit righ on top of the fourth. Also on the last panel, I under stand you were trying to create a feeling of conflict by angling the frame, however it doesn't look good as you make the speech bubble violate the borders of the frame. It ruins the frame separation.
Otherwise you designs are quite fascinating! And you make use of such rich colors! And your emotion conveys well in your art work using a very simple manga style. If you aren't a pro, you're not far from being one.
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I really dont know how to express myself right now! The thing I was mostly attracted to was the color. Its so creative and bright!
This probably only applies to me but I can see everything perfectly and I love the detail.
This is a fan based comic for Sonic but its story is really original and I love it! Its so hard for me to wait for a page all the time. Seriously I just recently got into the story because I watched the voice overs.
I love how much detail you but in this. Everything on here is amazing. Just typing this is very hard since its a challenge to express how much I like this.
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The Color is nice, the pannels are well made and the backgrounds are almost perfect, BUT, there's still some work to do about these pages.
For example the mask + eye of shadow in the last pannel, the first time I looked at shadow in the last page, it looked like his eye was really smal and the mask was almost falling offl, I think ths can be fixed by making the hole of the mask a little bigger and more to the left.
another thing is: Darren, he's cool and all, but his quils are a bit short if you
compare them to the ones he had in previous issues.
I've got nothing to say about this page anymore, exept that I really like the collouring, I hope to see more pages soon
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shut it blue boy
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tank u verie muts
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I HAVE to say this but Trails reminds me of Tails, even though tails is a fox and not a wolf. Tails' back story wasn't really cleared up in some of the comics and shows I've watched but hey I'm still getting around to it. Anyway, it would be awesome if they were somehow related, not likely by blood though.Β
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YAY!! Is finally here! been waiting for it for so long it was worth it x3 nice job with the comic! Do you mind if I can comic dub it?
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Quick question, will Sonic, Shadow and Silver EVER find out about they're TRUE past? They're parents, them being brothers, you know. Just wondering.
EDIT (From literally 30 seconds ago. And I can't delete comments. DX) WELP... I just saw the next page of this issue...
I REGRET ASKING QUESTIONS BEFORE DOUBLE CHECKING.
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Well, I can't answer you THAT since that would be a spoiler, now wouldn't it?
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Yeah... I learned that the hard way... XD
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I canβt wait to see Benonicβs reaction to the three boys SSS I think his eyes might turn red and him get really defensive towards his family.And LiyuConberma one quick question will Carrie be in Teens Play?
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Mmmm. she may or may not be a cameo in this XD
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Theres the style of Sonic Fan comics I love! I missed ya, Teen's Play! XD Your comic is as good as always!
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YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've waited so long for this!!!
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...I can only wonder when they had the time to get those portraits done on the first half of the page.
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Sonic needs to drop those purple quill cover things.... it makes him look too feminine.
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Say that to Link....
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I'm going to make an educated guess and say you are taking about BOTW: Link
2 things.
1: is not Link's main clothing.
2: story driven to enter a city that only allows women
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If you aren't talking about BOTW link... then
the classic one droopy pointed hat in the back is more masculine then this multi covered quill things.
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BotW Link.... I donΒ΄t like that dress.
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you and me both brother... you can't even upgrade it!
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Really? Huh, it seems that the power of the Great Fairy canΒ΄t reach that dress
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waaaaaaaaaaaaa <3 i really miss youuuuuuuu i'm so glad to look your art again <3
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YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S BACK! IT'S FINALLY BACK!!!:'D (sobbing hysterically)
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Trust me, it still feels like winter in PA too. Can you believe the first day of Spring was one of the biggest storms of the years for where I live? That sucked sooooo much!
However, this page most definitely does not! This just made my tired, tired day!
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Hmmmm, I wonder.
Can this will cross over with the Archie setup too?Β
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You don't know how much I missed Teen's Play ;w; < 3 <3 <3
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Fantastic!Β I would have thought I was looking at some of the pages the pros did for Archie's Sonic the Hedgehog!
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Sorry to ask this but...what the hell is a merhog? Like half mermaid, half hedgehog? Just curious. Honest.
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Yes Kitan777 A Merhog is half mermaid and half hedgehog.π
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I can somewhat understand, it still feel chilly here in Wisconsin and yet it can be a bit warm at the same time.
What a wacked-up weather we're having.
anyway thanks for the update can't wait to see what else you'll post up.
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this is so exciting I can hardly breathe what will happen
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YAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!! IT'S FINALLY BACK!! I HAVE A REASON TO LIVE AGAIN!Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β
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The face that sonic makes when he points out that it's shadow's fault is just too funny just like the face Shadow makes when he's pissed off.
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Hello dear artist thank you for bringing us part 2 of each comic.
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