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Published: 2010-09-30 21:12:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 784; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description I started to drift.
I was so caught up in the world,
That I almost forgot about you.
All the drama around me,
The people that surround me,
Started to pull me away from you.
I feel Your presence
I know Your strength
Yet I started,
Started to walk away.
At times it felt,
Like I was being pulled apart.
The stress overwhelmed me
Yet I went to man for help.
Of course, You stood there
Waiting for me to come around.
You know my future
You know my dreams
But I would rather do,
what everyone else was doing
Instead of the plans,
That You had for me.
My mind was drifting.
My heart was wanting love,
I started to complain
About how I didn't have enough.
Yet You were there
With Your arms wide open
Waiting for me to realize
That I needed to come back to you.
I started to fall for their lies
Their tricks and their schemes,
Truth is I started not to stand for what I believe.
I let them speak
What they wanted to say
And now I feel ashamed.
You saved me from my burdens and pain
Yet I turned my back on You again.
So here I am
Asking for forgiveness,
Hoping You'll accept.
I've made my mistakes
And I want to come back.
This battle I'm fighting
Is too much to bare
So Lord, take the reigns
Take this heart.
Take this mind.
I'm surrendering myself to You,
I know this will be hard,
But Lord, I need strength.
I am your servant
And I love you so.
Whatever You do God,
Please don't let me go back to that hell hole.
Where I was torn
Where I was weak.
Where all I ever felt was defeat.
Father, Please forgive me..
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Comments: 13

Bibo129 [2011-08-03 02:52:48 +0000 UTC]

ameeeeeeen plz keep up

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Ghost-Communion [2010-09-30 21:19:46 +0000 UTC]

I think you should separate it into verses, I lost my place twice while scanning the numerous lines BUT I really like this, it's very cool and you've captured the mood of the concept (which is wicked sick!) very well indeed Bravo!

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LizzDurr121 In reply to Ghost-Communion [2010-09-30 21:24:26 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaaa thank you so much. Yeah I was thinking about doing verses so I think I'll do that. (I'm sorry you lost your place) For some reason every time I write my feelings it ends up being better than me trying to write something and making it up as I go along.

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Ghost-Communion In reply to LizzDurr121 [2010-09-30 21:29:57 +0000 UTC]

To be honest I like most of your work, this is just loooooooooong Oh and check out my journal, I mentioned and linked your christian group in it

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LizzDurr121 In reply to Ghost-Communion [2010-09-30 21:32:00 +0000 UTC]

I saw that. I'm like he mentioned my group but I didn't say anything because I was inspired to write this poem. If you think this is long, you should read a poem I wrote which was 4 pages written like this with longer sentences. And thank you. I like your work too

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Ghost-Communion In reply to LizzDurr121 [2010-09-30 21:46:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I mentioned your group because it said you were looking for exposure and I'm christian, supporting a good cause I suppose

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LizzDurr121 In reply to Ghost-Communion [2010-09-30 22:06:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah that's a good way to put it. I stopped writing in my journal because it was hard to be in school, write, keep up on deviant art, finish a load of homework,and all that other fun stuff.

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Ghost-Communion In reply to LizzDurr121 [2010-09-30 22:12:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I'm limited now to only one post a day, sometimes two, because of college... I really like college though, so I'm not too fussed, I can find the time for dA by doing coursework assignments the day I get them, rather than put them off like I used to do

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LizzDurr121 In reply to Ghost-Communion [2010-09-30 22:23:56 +0000 UTC]

Haha I used to love putting off work until I realized it's just really exhausting doing it last minute. What majors are you taking??

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Ghost-Communion In reply to LizzDurr121 [2010-10-01 17:10:17 +0000 UTC]

IT diploma, two year course to continue onto an IT degree at uni

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LizzDurr121 In reply to Ghost-Communion [2010-10-01 20:26:47 +0000 UTC]

That reminds me of the show IT crowd. So you work with computers right?

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Ghost-Communion In reply to LizzDurr121 [2010-10-01 21:09:39 +0000 UTC]

Yes, security, programming.. allsorts I love it, I plan on getting a job, or setting up my own business, in games development

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LizzDurr121 In reply to Ghost-Communion [2010-10-01 21:26:11 +0000 UTC]

Awwww that's awesome and sounds like a lot of fun

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