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Published: 2018-01-31 19:44:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 731; Favourites: 102; Downloads: 0
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Berzeasca, Romaniaupdated according Yuukon feedback
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Hello, since you entered the Feedback Frenzy Artwork I´ll do my best to give you a good feedback :3
First of all - great shot
I do agree with Amarantheans to focous more on either the land or the water, but since the awesome light beam is the foucus, you should have turned the camera more towards the river. If I see the light beam as the subject I try to isolate it (in my mind) from the rest of the picture. Starting on the left side of the picture and go right until the edge of the cloud. Then I draw a vertical "mind"line right into the middle and move the camera to that point. 
But the thing that confuses me the most are the bushes on the bottom. It looks like they got copied. You can clearly see it at the red bush til to the far left. What happend there?
Anyways, keep your art going!
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Hey Christina
Hehe - I entered the Feedback Frenzy because it seems like a chance for me to get a real, detailed opinion of the impact the viewer has while looking at my work 
I agree with everything you said regarding the focus - it was a photo taken in rush, because it was such a windy day, that this particular view lasted for less than a minute.. so it was all speedy and trying not to catch any trees on the left side (because there were a few), no time to change my lenses, and it resulted... well we can all see the result
What happened in the bottom is.. I took a suggestion to straighten the horizon.. and instead of cutting unnecessary empties, I badly cloned them...
Thanks for your honest feedback 
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Thanks, you too! You are welcome!
I see, and I know what you mean
And about the cloning thing things happen
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Sunlight has a way of looking as if it has a life all itself as it illuminates our world. I love the soft rays as they enter the photograph. Now the issue is that it seems the right side of the photograph is in focus while the left is more of a blur. I am sure that the light itself influenced this, in your case. I would suggest for next time to choose either the sky or the land/water to focus in on rather than a bit of each. This will give your photo more detail to draw the eye across the entire photo as you view it, I just feel pulled in different directions, trying to view the light but also trying to see what is more in focus.
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Hey Anita, thanks for your opinion.
You are so right, that there is nothing for me to say
Have a lovely weekend!
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I hope your weekend went well
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yes it did, I hope your weekend went well too 
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Absolutely gorgeous landscape. I love the subtle variety of the sky, from dusty brown to gray-blue. The rays of light you caught are perfect. One thing that sticks out, however, is the editing done at the bottom, specifically the left corner into the center of the image. Looking through the other comments, I see that this was down to correct an issue seen with the horizon line. I would look into some clone-tool tutorials to make the editing less noticeable. (:
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Thank you for the feedback and honesty, Katie
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totally valid reason, I wouldn't call it an excuse at all!
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I call it an excuse, because one shall always find time to do things they love and reveal other side of the human being
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that's a very good point. <3
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Hi Laura! Thank you for submitting to for feedback!
What a beautiful capture you have here! Since you submitted for feedback, I do have just one suggestion for you:
- the horizon appears to be rather crooked. I would advice you to straighten that out using the crop/rotate tool of your photo editing software.
Other than that, I have no feedback for you! This is a gorgeous scene, and you have captured it very well! Keep it up!
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Hey hey - back after the editing - thank you very much for the tip - you really do have a good eye
Photo updated after re-editing
Thank you so so much
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Just took a look, it looks great! Keep it up Laura
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I'll try
Have a lovely night, and an easy week 
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Hey Monique! Thank you for the feedback and the suggestion
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Oops, saw your second comment sooner than this one, but I am glad you managed! The photo looks great now!
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