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CDaffner [2019-04-12 18:32:13 +0000 UTC]
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locofuria In reply to CDaffner [2019-04-12 23:03:22 +0000 UTC]
Please send me a note
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Goblinounours [2019-04-06 07:40:04 +0000 UTC]
The lineart and colors are awesome.
My only gripe with it would be the text, which is kinda embarassing to read, because nobody talks like that.
There is absolutely no need for her to be describing orally in detail what's happening to herself. The only reason would be because she's recording on a phone or tape-recorder for someone who can't see what's happening.
For example, when she notices her shirt ripping and her breast getting bigger, I'm pretty sure any girl, at worst, would go like "oh fuck, my boobs !" instead of "my breast have grown into a much bigger size!".
Bottom-line, when writting these lines, try to put yourself more into the head of the character and ask yourself what you would say.
Aside from that, really awesome art.
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LightningHoofAUS [2019-04-02 23:34:57 +0000 UTC]
oh this looks interesting
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TacticalNuke56 [2019-04-02 07:10:58 +0000 UTC]
There were no survivors.
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killiansog [2019-04-01 11:59:51 +0000 UTC]
For those who hesitate, I can safely say this is one of my all time favorites.
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DanteBigBadWolves [2019-04-01 03:30:20 +0000 UTC]
Another epic WereWolf Comic,can not wait for part 2 XD
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