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logiqdesign In reply to mircha69 [2010-02-02 19:53:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks again for the critique. I have implemented some of your suggestions and adjusted the mark, and will be continuing to do so.
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logiqdesign In reply to mircha69 [2010-02-02 19:17:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much for the detailed critique. It will definitely help make me improvements to the mark, and I hadn't noticed most of the things you mentioned. Trust me when I say it is both greatly appreciated and helpful, and I will be implementing your suggestions going forward.
Cheers!
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mircha69 In reply to logiqdesign [2010-02-02 20:49:50 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome, i'm glad that my comments were helpful
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mudimba [2010-01-28 04:00:04 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
I want to start off by saying that I like this logo a lot. It is much better than anything I could do, so take what I say with a grain of salt.
My only problem with it is that it feels a little more busy than I think it needs to be. Looking at it I feel like it wants to have an extremely simple, zen quality to it, but a couple things get in the way of that.
Notably the LD sticks out and feels like unneeded clutter. When I looked at the logo before reading the comments, the bottom part of the L stood out to me, and looked like it was a mistake. When I read that you were trying to fit in an LD I realized that it was a clever, and subtle trick. However, you have to ask yourself how important it is to have that LD in there, given that most of the people who see the logo will not know that there is meaning behind it. If you really want to keep it, I might suggest extending the L so it touches the D. Font-wise it would be less correct, but from a light-bulb perspective it would make more sense.
The other thing that stood out to me as being a little cluttered is the gears inside the treads. If it was me, I would want to try to simplify those to be pure circles (or maybe even nothing at all). Then the logo would be much more scalable, and I feel like it would be even more striking.
Keep up the good work!
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logiqdesign In reply to mudimba [2010-01-28 13:11:40 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much for taking the time to critique. It is incredibly valuable for me going forward.
I agree with you about the LD, and it is something that has been bothering me as well. I'm going to play with adjustments to remove the LD as it truly isn't that important in the grand scheme of things.
Again, thanks for your time and comments. It means a lot.
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micahgoulart In reply to logiqdesign [2010-01-28 19:58:36 +0000 UTC]
I agree. Including the LD is not that important since anyone looking at it doesn't spot it and just thinks it's a partially broken bulb.
And it takes away from the design. If it could be implemented correctly (perhaps as a light reflection on the bulb?) then it might work.
Excellent idea nonetheless for the logo. Well executed.
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mansy-graphics [2014-07-18 21:44:38 +0000 UTC]
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FridayBiology [2014-05-20 07:43:58 +0000 UTC]
Hey, wondering if i could use this logo design for my uni assignment. (fictional business contractors)
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SpiderW0lf [2012-04-06 00:57:08 +0000 UTC]
dude i need this logo or i die
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tascha007 [2011-07-19 12:21:03 +0000 UTC]
awesome!!!
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Creativistan [2010-11-29 13:33:47 +0000 UTC]
JUST WOW........................... Hats off to u
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albertpew [2010-08-31 09:27:35 +0000 UTC]
really love this style! great work! congratz!
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xplight [2010-07-16 01:44:06 +0000 UTC]
Nice one,
*thinking to pick on small things, but not worth, the logo is really good )
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BrFX [2010-07-03 19:26:10 +0000 UTC]
awesome concept and looks great
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gopalb [2010-06-28 09:39:14 +0000 UTC]
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Namelessblob [2010-02-19 00:59:03 +0000 UTC]
I am VERY fond of this design. The concept is great, and the execution is as well. I would agree with the post above (saltshaker911) in the comment about adding text to it. If you did that though, I might suggest making the treads larger to accommodate text (which I think would be best bold). However it's all up to you in the end. Great design regardless.
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mb76 [2010-02-10 21:33:28 +0000 UTC]
Great logo, The LD is a really nice touch.
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Shing0o [2010-02-04 17:09:43 +0000 UTC]
very nice idea
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AJaber [2010-02-04 15:32:12 +0000 UTC]
Really new !
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logiqdesign In reply to GamerWorld14 [2010-02-04 15:24:36 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much for taking the time to fav and comment. It means a lot. =]
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logiqdesign In reply to VBAadmin [2010-02-02 23:47:14 +0000 UTC]
I considered doing this, and it's one of those things where I decided it really wasn't important enough to justify breaking the harmony of the logo. The LD is a nice subtle touch for those who get it, but for the 99% of everyone else I had to make a sacrifice to preserve balance.
A good suggestion, nonetheless, and something I should experiment with in the future.
Thanks so much for viewing and commenting.
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SubDooM [2010-02-02 23:01:30 +0000 UTC]
very good!!
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