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ShadowXEyenoom [2011-07-11 09:15:10 +0000 UTC]
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Decided to make a critique e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Razz)"/>
So well, lets start with the good stuff, shall we? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
I think the perspective in the background is really well done e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> You can see, that the tree are far away, while the bushes are close. I like nightsky too x3 I like some of the stars are blue, while the others are white e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
Also, the way you did Exlipse, is really well done ^^ Good anatomy
And now, the bad stuff e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/f… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Sad)"/>
It looks a little bit wrong with eclipse's tail. I think it should have been more 'behind her' instead of beside her, if you understand what i mean? Also, that the bushes seems pretty 'tame' like... some you finds in the guardian, not bushes you finds out in the wild. You should also have tried to let a bit grass sticking up over the bushes, so it didn't looks like some you have placed there.
Eclipse's shadows are also a little bit wrong some places.
And a fail, that really anoys me, but isn't seen so much: The wind must come from left, wich you can see on eclipse's hair, but some of the grass points the other way...
But besides that: Awesome! I really like this pic ^^
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Loki-Ryuu In reply to ShadowXEyenoom [2011-07-11 13:01:19 +0000 UTC]
lol yush twas my first time doing bushes so i expected them to come out weird XD
i agree on the tail it just looked fine when i was sketching it but as i added colour i add second thoughts about it :/
oh frick >.< the grass lol you were there i suck at grass so was scribbling XDDDDDDDDD thats why it is a bit higgildy wiggildy and yush I forgot to put them over Eclipse lol is it ironic I had planned to do that XD
lol thank-you fro the critique ^^
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ShadeAcidic [2011-07-10 07:38:31 +0000 UTC]
Cool.
I bet a lunar eclipse would have made this even more epic. You know when the moon turns red? Or is that a solar eclipse. Can't remember. XD
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Loki-Ryuu In reply to ShadeAcidic [2011-07-21 21:16:42 +0000 UTC]
ty ^^
I know what you're on about XD
I was just lazy ^^
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dragonrace [2011-07-10 06:54:32 +0000 UTC]
awesome job!
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Keoko1 [2011-07-10 00:41:00 +0000 UTC]
Eclipse looks like she is going to kill someone.
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Loki-Ryuu In reply to Keoko1 [2011-07-21 21:16:49 +0000 UTC]
you! D:
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Keoko1 In reply to Loki-Ryuu [2011-07-22 03:05:51 +0000 UTC]
She has to get in line then.
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Loki-Ryuu In reply to Mr-Plazma [2011-07-21 21:17:00 +0000 UTC]
XD lol
keep away pretty boy!
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