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Lol-Pretzel — Harren, Proto

Published: 2013-01-16 21:19:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 3922; Favourites: 122; Downloads: 17
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Description A WIP of the next iteration of my OC, Harren Kaleon. A lot of changes have been made since this point.

For starters, the torso is too long and doesn't even bend in the middle. There are inconsistencies with the new colour scheme all over the place, and the body shape is far too masculine.
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Comments: 31

Davidpoet30 [2013-06-08 19:41:15 +0000 UTC]

i still like it it looks awesome

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Leaith [2013-01-31 14:40:04 +0000 UTC]

So stealin' that lower leg design >

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Pahrak-Kal [2013-01-28 20:17:56 +0000 UTC]

Hey, why didn't we get to see that on MOCpages? That is quite cool.

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Lol-Pretzel In reply to Pahrak-Kal [2013-01-29 08:10:57 +0000 UTC]

I don't post WIPs on MOCpages. There isn't much provision for them.

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FireKittyArt [2013-01-19 16:21:11 +0000 UTC]

it's very bulky. t looks nice, but it seems to me that it'd be hard to pose like that

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CoconutFanatic [2013-01-17 23:20:06 +0000 UTC]

Just need to widen those hips, like you mentioned in your journal post. BTW, that is going to help me in the future.

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Gale-OneOfMany [2013-01-17 12:32:13 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, greeblicious I love the overall look and amount of detail you put in here. I actually like the simple weapons too, they just seem to fit to me. The bulk actually looks nice to me too, she looks buff and armored.

If I may though, I've notice a significant amount of noise in your pictures. I am yet a novice at photography, but I do think that dropping your ISO would help significantly. And if you are using a tripod, then dropping the ISO shouldn't effect the picture quality except for getting rid of the noise.

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Lol-Pretzel In reply to Gale-OneOfMany [2013-01-17 17:12:35 +0000 UTC]

Uhh... ok? I have no idea what any of that meant.

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Gale-OneOfMany In reply to Lol-Pretzel [2013-01-17 17:33:59 +0000 UTC]

About the ISO I'm going to guess?

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Lol-Pretzel In reply to Gale-OneOfMany [2013-01-17 20:28:31 +0000 UTC]

All of it.

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R603 [2013-01-17 03:07:23 +0000 UTC]

Damn! She's epic!

I love the overall awesomeness everywhere!

She's a bit chubby though, I'm afraid. Lololol!

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st3vethesquid [2013-01-17 01:40:49 +0000 UTC]

Yay! She's chubby! Love it

Though I dunno about the shield, it's a bit boring And the arms could be longer. Great leg designs!

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Lol-Pretzel In reply to st3vethesquid [2013-01-17 02:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Oddly, those are the only two parts I didn't edit in the final version.

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st3vethesquid In reply to Lol-Pretzel [2013-01-17 11:59:59 +0000 UTC]

Oddly XD Hopefully we'll see em fixed soon

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matanui2001 [2013-01-16 23:52:13 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps the most knightly Toa I have ever seen

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Lol-Pretzel In reply to matanui2001 [2013-01-17 02:40:55 +0000 UTC]

Actually, Harren is a Tokia, not a Toa. Her kind have lost the ability to become true toa - but damned if they don't try anyway! Thanks.

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matanui2001 In reply to Lol-Pretzel [2013-01-17 17:05:17 +0000 UTC]

Welsome.

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AuRonTheChampion [2013-01-16 23:37:45 +0000 UTC]

Looks kinda... Chubby. Were you going for that? o-o

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Lol-Pretzel In reply to AuRonTheChampion [2013-01-17 02:38:14 +0000 UTC]

Yep. :3

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AuRonTheChampion In reply to Lol-Pretzel [2013-01-17 20:37:46 +0000 UTC]

I really should learn more about making 'chubby' MOCs... It seems easy enough.

But I've been wrong before.

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Lol-Pretzel In reply to AuRonTheChampion [2013-01-18 02:33:46 +0000 UTC]

You couldn't be more wrong. XD

The main reason behind my first making Harren was to make a "chubby" character. Even by this stage, I've not gotten it quite right. And V1 was made about 2009ish

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sniperray213 [2013-01-16 21:29:31 +0000 UTC]

nice

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HioshYiray In reply to sniperray213 [2013-01-16 21:45:27 +0000 UTC]

Any other answer?

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sniperray213 In reply to HioshYiray [2013-01-17 01:57:15 +0000 UTC]

idk

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LegoMetal44 [2013-01-16 21:20:32 +0000 UTC]

Nice Gringrant very nice

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Lol-Pretzel In reply to LegoMetal44 [2013-01-16 21:58:55 +0000 UTC]

Gringat*

But thanks

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LegoMetal44 In reply to Lol-Pretzel [2013-01-16 22:03:44 +0000 UTC]

i new i spelled it wrong >.>

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Lol-Pretzel In reply to LegoMetal44 [2013-01-17 02:38:42 +0000 UTC]

knew*

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LegoMetal44 In reply to Lol-Pretzel [2013-01-17 02:51:32 +0000 UTC]

..... Grammar nazi >.>

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Lol-Pretzel In reply to LegoMetal44 [2013-01-17 02:54:10 +0000 UTC]

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LegoMetal44 In reply to Lol-Pretzel [2013-01-17 03:28:12 +0000 UTC]

omg <=O

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